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Max wasn't here for the writing published piece. I'm looking forward to his fantastic work for the future.

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Jane wasn't here for the writing feedback day. I'm looking forward to reading her published narrative when she returns.

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Jayden

My wish for you is to put in more details. My star for you is I like how you put a lot of thoughts

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Star: Maddie added a lot of great and interesting details.
Wish: I wish that she added more characters to her story.

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Julian
Star is that you have good talking parts
Wish is that you need more details

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My star is I like how you used proper punctuation.

My wish is I think you can work on your hand writing

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“My star for you is i like your dialogue.”
“My wish is that you could have used more understandable words.”

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My star for her is that she puts a lot of  detail in her sense, my wish for her is to be more careful about spelling.

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My star is you give like description like he has red clothes green shorts

My wish is to understand what you said.

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Evangeline
Star: pictures in her mind
Wish: More details

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Agnes and Emeline’s star for me is that I have lots of detail, and show not tell. Agnes said that my work was the best it could be, but Emeline said I might need to add more to the end.

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1. The star I had for you is that there are both boys and fish in your book!
2.the wish I had for you is That you need to replace fish for   Fresh water  dolphins!

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Amanda:my star  is that I like the dialogue.

Amanda:my wish is that i  would like you to add more detail to your characters of Who they are.

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I like that you write capital letters on each character
I wish you can write lighter next time.

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Her wish is to let me work on my spelling.

The star is I have a lot of detail.

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Senena

Star: Jiah has long sentences and describes good

Wish: I WHISH she would add more talking part.

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My reading partner wish for me is add more detail, and star is I write it very neatly , easy to read and it’s very clear.

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Star is funny and I can understand how you feel.
Wish is better spelling and better detail.

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Bobby
Ethan did a great job on his punctuation
Ethan should improve on his organization

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Your setting description is very good
But you should write your name on cover!

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Jayden my star is that you made good  dialogue. My wish is can you next time go slower  to make handwriting neater

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I like how you show not telled.
I wish you had more detail

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You have good sound words and next time you could have neater hand writing and spelling.

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Star:easy to picture
Wish:better spelling(you can use iPad to help with the spelling)

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Star:I liked how you added entertaining dialogue
Wish:Maybe you should work on handwriting

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Star: I like how you have many dialogue.

Wish: I think you can work on your punctuation.

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I really like that you make the reader have a picture in there mind, my wish is that next time people talking need to skip a line

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You are a very good writer you just need to work on more details
My star is you have a lot of action

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I like how you had lots of details, and I could really picture the scene.
I wish you had better spelling. (No offense)

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I like your story starting with the dialogue
Next time you could skip line between paragraphs

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1.My star for you is that you had a lot of good details !
2.my wish for you is to work on your grammar!

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star:show not tell
Wish:I don’t know what you meant

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A star for Maddie is that her handwriting is fantastic!
A wish is that she could start to writ from the far left.

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I like your plot
I wish your story had more detail, and  maybe make it longer.

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Star: you have lot of details and your story is very interesting

WHISH: you will add more dialogue in your story

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I also agree with Bitchan, skip lines when a new person speaks.

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My star is that you start with dialogue
I wish you put your name!!

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I like your name creation and skipping line when new person is speaking
I wish you could have more feelings to characters next time

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My wish is that you worked a little more on your spelling and your star is that you added very much needed details.

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Ethan
I liked how much humor you added
I think you should improve your organization

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Star: I like how you added lots of dialogue.

Wish: I think you can work on your hand writing.

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like that you have good describe words, I wish that you have more thoughts.

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Star is you have good details  Wish is you can do more spelling

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Star:good  description
Wish:  grammar

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Ashely my star is that you made some good  Punctuation. My wish is that can you next time make your handwriting  neater

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I think the star is that I like how  you start the story with dialogue and how you showed the characters feeling  , and wish is that I hope you can write a bit clear.

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Star:easy to picture
Wish:less dialogue

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My star is that you put it on the right place
My wish is skip a line

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I like how you described everything with great detail.
I wish that your handwriting is neater, no offense.

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Star is you have details Wish is you can do make your story  better

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A star for you is all your dialogue.
A wish for you is that you don’t have any punctuation so please improve.

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I like how you use interesting dialogue
I WHISH you would add more

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I liked how clear you made your lesson
I wish you added more detail

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Star :organization
Wish:hand writing

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Wish: You should work on your grammar
Star: You had good handwriting

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Star: I like how you did lots of show not tell

Wish: spelling

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Jake

My wish is to have more details
My star is that you have a good introduction

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I like your creativity
Wish is that you can write neater

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Star:the bigger words Makes me feel excited

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A ⭐️  is that you did a nice job of showing the interaction between you and your family when you couldn’t find your car.

A wish is that you carefully reread your story to be sure you don’t have extra words or missing word. This will help your story make more sense to the reader.

Great job!