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Olivia Contreras - As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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Olivia Contreras - As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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-Describe the deterioration of his physical body
-Frankenstein was so engrossed in his studies that he devoted himself to his creation. Does this make his sacrifice more mental or physical?
-Was the isolation from his family deliberate or a byproduct of his unhealthy mental state?

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Frankenstein’s decision shows that he values future generations.

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Frankenstein’s decision shows that he values future generations.

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what does he sacrifice to actually value future generations?
Be more specific about what you mean by future generations?
~Jacqueline Marquez

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Victor Frankenstein, a scientist and researcher, deliberately pursues his passion of science.

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Victor Frankenstein, a scientist and researcher, deliberately pursues his passion of science.

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- At what cost?
- With what intentions?
- His field of study is reflective of his virtues or lack there of because...
-deliberately??

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Soon after, Victor witnesses everything he has sacrificed to carry out his desire of creating life.  

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Soon after, Victor witnesses everything he has sacrificed to carry out his desire of creating life.  

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what has victor sacrificed?

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With the decision of making a body of his own, he isolates friends and family who attempt to comfort Frankenstein with multiple letters and even sending a childhood friend, Hary Clerval, who nurses his to health. 

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With the decision of making a body of his own, he isolates friends and family who attempt to comfort Frankenstein with multiple letters and even sending a childhood friend, Hary Clerval, who nurses his to health. 

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- The decision to isolate himself is the sacrifice
- To go more in depth, explain why he decided to sacrifice his family to create the creature
- By sacrificing his family, what is Victor showing he values?
- Why does Victor value his scientific discoveries over his family?

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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- What values does his sacrifice (giving up a healthy lifestyle) highlight?
- What are the wishes for his studies? He created the creature, but was not satisfied, so what are his wishes?
- Was he sacrificing himself physically or mentally?

Cecilia Linares

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 This is important to the work as a whole because Frankenstein is a representation of a scientist at a time of scientific advancement.

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 This is important to the work as a whole because Frankenstein is a representation of a scientist at a time of scientific advancement.

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- "scientific advancement" is too generalized and vague. How does the evolution of technology in this time period add to the work as whole to Frankenstein?
- The prompt asked what sacrifices a character is willing to take that shows their values in life. With that, shows the whole work of Mark Shelley's literary book, Frankenstein.
- Add more insight on how a scientist is willing to sacrifice their inventions for the safety precautions of human kind.
- Add on how does he represent a scientist and how does that relate to his sacrifices and values.

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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- social, mental, or physical lifestyle ?
-  reason 1: losing his sanity when he's left alone and is on the hunt for his creation
- reason 2: depriving himself of food, sleep, and outside communication while he makes the creature

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Soon after, Victor witnesses everything he has sacrificed to carry out his desire of creating life.

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Soon after, Victor witnesses everything he has sacrificed to carry out his desire of creating life.

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- Define what "everything" is. Everything in terms of family? Ambitions? Goals? Beliefs?

- What is the sacrifice?

- How does this alleged sacrifice show Victor's value or character?

- How does Victor witness this? Physically/Mentally

- Was the creature the process of "carrying out his desire of creating life"?

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies. 

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies. 

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-- How did he give up his healthy lifestyle?
-- How is this important to the work as a whole?
--  What healthy lifestyle did he give up?
-- What does he want for his studies?

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With the decision of making a body of his own, he isolates friends and family who attempt to comfort Frankenstein with multiple letters and even sending a childhood friend, Henry Clerval, who nurses him to health.

~Needs to clarify why his family is comforting him, did something happen?
~ Why did Henry have to nurse Victor back to health?
~ How do these actions relate and help to explain your thesis?

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As a result, it is clear to say that gives up on a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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As a result, it is clear to say that gives up on a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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- Explain the ideas that prompt what this means.
- Why does this relate and connect with everything in a deeper meaning and understanding to this?
- Giving a full and complete meaning to “healthy lifestyle and “wishes of his studies”. There could have been a further response to this.

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Victor Frankenstein, a scientist and researcher, deliberately pursues his passion of science.

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Victor Frankenstein, a scientist and researcher, deliberately pursues his passion of science.

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- explain victor's sacrifice of his physical health
- Henry visits him and is then forced to care for him since he falls into a long sickness (demonstrates how badly he took care of himself)
- Sacrifices his well being & his mentality in order to advance the science field

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Victor Frankenstein, a scientist and researcher, deliberately pursues his passion of science.  

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Victor Frankenstein, a scientist and researcher, deliberately pursues his passion of science.  

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The sentence can be improved if the writer goes in depth on how Victor pursues his passion of science (school, etc.) and states what he values of it. In other words, being more descriptive to back up the thesis.

Why mention that he was a researcher?

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With this in mind, everything was set into motion, therefore, making it possible for Victor to be considered a catalyst. 

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With this in mind, everything was set into motion, therefore, making it possible for Victor to be considered a catalyst. 

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-What is considered "everything"
-Clarify "everything was set into motion." What was "set into motion" and why is that important to your response?
-Very vague; "making it possible for Victor to be considered a catalyst." What made it possible?
-"Catalyst" how? How is him being a catalyst important to your response?
-You can use this sentence to lengthen your second paragraph by clarifying the points above.

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies. 

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies. 

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I would have gone more in depth about how Victor sacrificed a healthy lifestyle and defined what I meant by "healthy lifestyle." Rather than going straight to the conclusion there should have been examples from the novel backing this statement and explaining how it was a sacrifice and defines Viuctors values.

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Victor Frankenstein, a scientist and researcher, deliberately pursues his passion of science.  

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Victor Frankenstein, a scientist and researcher, deliberately pursues his passion of science.  

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Victor Frankenstein, a brilliant student of natural philosophy, deliberately pursues his passion to create life despite not fully comprehending that he may not find the outcome to be favorable.

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 As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies. 

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 As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies. 

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- further explain what his wishes with science are (to help develop society, for the fame, etc)
- elaborate more on exactly what he is sacrificing (can be changed from healthy lifestyle to family + Henry)
- how does giving up this sacrifice shape his values? how could these scientific advancements cause harm to the things he had to give up?

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Soon after, Victor witnesses everything he has sacrificed to carry out his desire of creating life.  

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Soon after, Victor witnesses everything he has sacrificed to carry out his desire of creating life.  

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- I would clarify what exactly he gave up.
- I wouldn't say "creating life" but instead I would say that he devoted his time to science.

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies. 

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies. 

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- What is considered a healthy lifestyle?
- How does he do this?
- What are his wishes? Be more specific.
- Why is he trying to further in his studies?

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With this in mind, everything was set into motion, therefore, making it possible for Victor to be considered a catalyst.

* How is Victor a catalyst
* Catalyst to what
* What point are you trying to connect
* What is Shelley's purpose of using Victor as a catalyst
* Go deeper
* What happened that makes him a catalyst

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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. If it was for his studies why were they so vital to him?

. What did he clearly give up?

. Was it a choice to give up what he did or was it just a consequence of his actions

.Why was he so immersed in his work?

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With the decision of making a body of his own, he isolates friends and family who attempt to comfort Frankenstein with multiple letters and even sending a childhood friend, Hary Clerval, who nurses his to health.

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With the decision of making a body of his own, he isolates friends and family who attempt to comfort Frankenstein with multiple letters and even sending a childhood friend, Hary Clerval, who nurses his to health.

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-Dig deeper with the isolation that Victor faces
-Why include Henry's nursing role if it will not be built upon?
-Did Victor really decide to make a body of his own, or was it an impulse move by him that was fueled by his obsession for fame and recognition in the science community?
-Why include the letters? Further describe how Victor sacrifices his contact with family and friends
-Cement the idea that Victor purposefully sacrificed his connection with family/friends
-Did they really send Henry to aid Victor?

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 "Victor witnesses everything he has sacrificed to carry out his desire of creating life" 

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 "Victor witnesses everything he has sacrificed to carry out his desire of creating life" 

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- Go in depth on what Victor specifically sacrificed and stay on topic rather than starting the intro with "Value" then moving to sacrifice.
- Be consistent in writing and add structure to a thesis.
- Do not mix "Value" with "sacrifice" in the same context of the writing. It is very confusing and off topic.

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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As a result, it is clear to say that he gives up a healthy lifestyle and sacrifices his own well being in order to further his wishes of his studies.

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 With this in mind, everything was set into motion, therefore, making it possible for Victor to be considered a catalyst.  

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 With this in mind, everything was set into motion, therefore, making it possible for Victor to be considered a catalyst.  

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- Instead of everything was set into motion it could of been how he had preparations of experiment and did it.
-Catalyst is a replaceable word since it means more of a chemical usage.
-The connection to the quote is there as it needs to clarify how these motions would change overtime.

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With the decision of making a body of his own, he isolates friends and family who attempt to comfort Frankenstein with multiple letters and even sending a childhood friend, Hary Clerval, who nurses his to health. 

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With the decision of making a body of his own, he isolates friends and family who attempt to comfort Frankenstein with multiple letters and even sending a childhood friend, Hary Clerval, who nurses his to health. 

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- Give reason why he chose to make life
-Did he know that he was isolating his friend and family? (do not leave it open ended)
-Edit grammar and spell Henry correctly
-Specify exactly how he is nursed

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Soon after, Victor witnesses everything he has sacrificed to carry out his desire of creating life.  

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Soon after, Victor witnesses everything he has sacrificed to carry out his desire of creating life.  

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-Should mention what it is he actually sacrificed. How has he sacrificed his "health"? Was it Intentional?
-What values are shown in his sacrifice?
-Needs to follow the prompt. Is vague because it scratches the surface, but doesn't dig enough.

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"With the decision of making a body of his own, he isolates friends and family who attempt to comfort Frankenstein with multiple letters and even sending a childhood friend, Hary Clerval, who nurses his to health."

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"With the decision of making a body of his own, he isolates friends and family who attempt to comfort Frankenstein with multiple letters and even sending a childhood friend, Hary Clerval, who nurses his to health."

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- Use the words value and                  sacrifice to specify each
- Use a clearer phrase in place of "...making a body of his own..."
- How does Victor's value and sacrifice add to the meaning of the work? ( what do you think the meaning of the work is? )