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State your claim (what part of the thesis you are trying to prove/explore):

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If you start with the primary source, it’s usually because you want to focus on the specifics of that particular source (the pitch), rather than the complaint or moment  You should expand or adapt this material in ways that will lead to your secondary source material. Use the 10 on 1 exercise, saying more about less in a way that sets up your secondary source information.

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Use the 10 on 1 exercise to connect material

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Use the 10 on 1 exercise to connect material

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If you start with the secondary source, it’s usually because you want to focus on the complaint or moment rather than the pitch of the primary source.
1) to introduce the quote with a signal phrase:a. “In the words of; According to; As X notes, etc.
2) Put quotes around language directly from the text,
AND/OR
3) Paraphrase longer passages.
4) cite your information using MLA format (Tidwell 16).

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The ‘So what?’ should be at least as long as the quoted material.
If you need to build a relationship or connection (is it part of a strand, repetition, binary; is it an exception to a larger pattern)  tothe next piece of evidence, do so.

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Part of your explanation should build a relationship between this source and the next source being used to prove your point.

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1) If you started with the Primary Source:
Introduce a Secondary Source (Follow the pattern for the Secondary Source)
2) If you started with a Secondary Source:
| Introduce the Primary Source (Follow the pattern for the Primary Source) OR
| Introduce another Secondary Source

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Use the closing sentence to show how this fits into the larger argument (the thesis) or to call attention to what needs to be further addressed (setting up the next claim).

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At this point you can pull more material from your sources if you need further proof to back up your claim. You can return to the same secondary source multiple times, or you can have a back and forth between two sources with complimentary or contrasting information/arguments.

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The just say no campaign was successful in spreading awareness about drugs, but not in deterring people from trying them.

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Throughout history and in the present day, black people have been portrayed in the media as aggressive, threatening and animalistic, and this type of portrayal can have an effect on the perception of black people in real life.

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Claim: In order to perform their duties more effectively, soldiers must be capable of being decisive during conflict without influence from their emotions.
This explains how harsh methods used by the military during basic training are necessary.

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Why do people still text and drive when they know it is deadly? It may just take a life changing experience for them to figure it out, but it could be too late for them to realize.

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Claim- Birth of a Nation’s impact on American was more negative than positive

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The Government puts so much money and resources into propoganda becuase it works.

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The Anti-Saloon League was extremely committed to the dry cause. This relates to my thesis, because there was a huge increase in crime rates and boot leg profits that the Anti-Saloon League also had to try to prevent from happening.

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The effects of child labor in America have affected our society and deprived our children from their childhoods in so many ways, and now they are continuing to do that just under a new name.

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The fabricated methods within weight loss ads are fueled by the ignorance and indolence of the general public.

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Kim Jong Un’s deception of media has created a North Korea that is not entirely true.
- connects to thesis discussing how gov. Can use their power and unrivaled opinion the repeat a false truth

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As a useful example of propaganda, it’s supposed to make you feel what the person being abused in the poster is feeling. It’s meant to belittle you and make you feel shameful for not standing up and not being a true American for it.

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Drunk driving instances have decreased over time due to rideshare  companies.

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US Propaganda was similar to Nazi propaganda in terms of the hostile and aggressive messages it conveyed.

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Many children and adolescents suffer negative effects from secondhand smoke due to parents voluntary decisions.

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In my secondary source American Sniper, Chris Kyle kills a child and a women that posses a live grenade in order to protect his men.

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The United States used many strategies to help aide them through the war, War Bonds were the one thing the United States used that were key for them being able to obtain victory.

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The first primary source is a reconstruction era comic entitled “The Vampire that hovers over North Carolina”. Intended to sway the vote in North Carolina, it depicts a large winged black man descending upon and terrorizing a group of white civilians. His wings have “Negro Rule” in large letters written on them and is standing on a ballot box.

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The words along the poster state “He can’t do it alone! Stand up to bullying TODAY!” It’s trying to appeal to your sense of pathos. It’s telling you to stand up to bullying but the person being bullied can’t even physically stand up, let alone defend himself.

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Protest in Boston about the film. 800 black women gathered at a Baptist church to protest the films racist message.

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The effects of early exposure to adult media has emotional and long lasting effects on children into adulthood.

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In the film The Interview, a fake grocery store reveals the lies and deception that Kim Jong Un and his staff use to appear more prosperous than they are.

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In my primary source it touches base on the health effects on children who are around smokers. From asthma and ear infection making these children in pain from the actions of their parents. I plan to use pathos to get the emotion of guilt onto parents so they know their voluntary actions are what is causing their children to be in pain and integrate this into my secondary source of an experiment of parents who are more likely to be motivated to quit smoking in order to help their children.

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My primary source overviews the colors on the drinking and driving poster, the colors from the poster relate to the fun colors of alcohol advertisements. I’ll compare the differences between alcohol advertisements and real life choices.

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The portrayal of the black man in the cartoon, while considered reprehensible by today’s standards, exhibits stereotypes that have been used in media throughout history and in present day.

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39 million Americans are impoverished.
51% of children under 24 work in america.

This was only a act from 1999.

“Debt Bondage

Child Trafficking

All forms of Slavery or Slavery-like practices

Forced Recruitment of Children in Armed Conflict

Prostitution

Production of Pornography

Drug Production and Trafficking

Any Hazardous Work”

The fact of these facts are to show how far we’ve come and how afare  we have to go. Unfortunately 4 out 8 still happen today .

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2 primary, 1 secondary
Secondary source is the 1975 film Mandingo, a movie that was criticized for its portrayal of black men. In this movie, black men are as sexually aggressive and insatiable, reduced to a fetishistic caricature.

2 primary sources are a case study on the effects of negative portrayals of black people on television on college students’ perception of black people, and a 2018 Herald Sun comic depicting Serena Williams’ outburst at the U.S. Open Final. The comic was criticized for its depiction of Williams as disobedient, animalistic and unladylike, an old stereotype used against black women. Furthermore, the cartoon’s depiction of Serena Williams bears an uncanny resemblance in aesthetic to Jim Crow era cartoons of black people, which many people found problematic.c

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My primary source is persuading Americans to purchase war bonds in order to take the attack to Nazi Germany and to use strength and aggression to do so.

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My primary source is a weight loss pill called “Advanced Green Tea” claiming it can help an individual loose 10 pounds in 6 weeks. The pill bottle itself portrays pictures and supposedly quotes from well known individuals in desperation to deceive its audience. If that’s not enough it provides sevaral other claims of potential weightloss  time periods that the average person should know is nothing more than duplicity

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My secondary source focuses on the roles Disney Princesses play in young girls’ actions and attitudes.

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According to a study done by AAA in 2014 “Over 84% of drivers recognize the danger from cell phone distractions and find it “unacceptable” that drivers text or send emails while driving. Nevertheless, 36% of these same people admit to having read or sent a text message or e-mail while driving in the previous month

Need list of claims for each paragraph to be set up by next class(End Distracted Driving).”

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Stand up and don’t let person be a victim because if it was you, you would hope they would do the same. These feelings are supposed to compel you to make a difference. Appealing to your ethos and your responsibility to stand up for someone.

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Statistically 70.6% of young people say they have seen bullying in their schools and 70.4% of school staff have seen bullying. When bystanders intervene, bullying stops within 10 seconds 57% of the time. (Source 6.)

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The victim is depicted helpless. On the ground, arms being held above his head by two bullies, with no one around to help him. One kid is standing over him and the other seems to be holding his arms. Another kid is in the foreground simply watching what is happening to the victim.

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Yet, what is being done with all of these bystanders witnessing the bullying. If bullying stops within 10 seconds of intervening, why doesn’t everyone intervene? [10 on 1]

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A study conducted by a research group at the University of Washington concluded that children are affected simply by being exposed to simply violent cartoons.

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If a parent saw what they were causing towards their children, usually a parent would do anything possible in order to help their children. Parents tend to put their kids needs and wants before them. They should get help on their addiction of smoking to stop to lessen the negative effects the children have gotten from secondhand smoke.

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First hand smoking is an addiction which is also a disease. It is a voluntary decison one has and some do around their children. By doing this around children they are also exposed to the same chemicals that the person smoking is. The second hand smoke is affecting children in a horrible way and these parents are the leading cause and making that life threatening decison for them.

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In my secondary source it is a study on parents who are more willing to quit smoking in motivation of bettering their children’s health. Parents are more likely to quit if they know that their causing negative health issues onto their kids and they are the only ones to help and stop this.

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I can use logos in order to help support my claim. 1 in 4 children live with a parent that smokes. Secondhand smoking is responsible for 150,000 to 300,000 respiratory tract infections in children

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My secondary source focuses on the federal inmate population increasing drastically after the ban on alcohol.

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Knowing that the federal inmate population increased is important. This is because the Anti-Saloon League’s goal was to make America dry, but the ban on alcohol caused more chaos with people in jail/trying to make money off of bootleg profits.

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My primary source is a museum exhibit in the Anti-Saloon League museum. It displays information specifically on the early stages of resistance when alcohol was banned. This relates to my thesis, because it shows how the resistance started and how it compares to how it became extreme/a threat to everyone.

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It was especially harder to get people to stop drinking alcohol when it was banned as people were trying to get their hands on it through any way possible. The Anti-Saloon League used propaganda featuring children to persuade people, which shows that they had to work hard to back up their stance. They existed around 40 years even after the law was overturned.

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The museum exhibit (primary source) and the crime rates increasing (secondary source) connects to my thesis. This is because the museum exhibit showcases the early stages of resistance within Westerville, but the crime rates increasing shows what America had to deal with/regulate constantly. These claims can set up my next paragraph, because I plan to be talking about the children being used in propaganda to persuade viewers to stop drinking.

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Kyle is able to be so decisive during the conflict because the military has conditioned the emotion out of him and enables him to save the lives of his fellow soldiers.

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In the film The Hurt Locker, Sergeant Sanborn suffers from an emotional breakdown and conlcudes that he has had enough when he says “I’m done.”

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Chris Kyle in American Sniper, illustrates how the military wants the soldier to behave. Kyle successfully has his emotion stripped from him and is able to correctly perform his duties as a soldier. On the other hand, Sergeant Sanborn in The Hurt Locker, has failed the military in the sense that he still posses his emotional qualities and is influenced by his emotions to quit the military. He is unable to perform his duties and must leave the military.

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The messages and themes seen in Disney princess movies can effect young girls behaviors and understanding of gender which can also be true for the messages and themes of Incredibles 2.

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As shown in the two movies mentioned, the goals of the military to eliminate human emotion from day one are completely necessary in order for the soldiers to successfully fulfil their duty during war.

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Although Elastigirl depicts a mother rather than a young girl, her character may affect the way girls view the mothering role; a woman of strength and importance. Helen’s role as the face of the supers demonstrates the strength of women as superheroes in a world dominated by male superheroes who might be seen as more fit for the task of saving the world

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Continue to discuss how the messages children view may effect their behavior and understanding.

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Young girls’ behaviors and understanding of gender are strongly influenced by the characters they view and the themes of feminism and women empowerment promote role models that represent ideals of courage and bravery rather than solely beauty and overall appearance.