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I looked to my right side there was a girl as my age she had long brown hair looked very pretty also nervous . She is  scratching her hair like slow motion at her left side. She  looked around the room. She was looking nervous and sweaty because her skin was really shiny and i saw she drooping sweaty tears.

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Focus on the paper

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Focus on what you can see around you.
Start the paragraph with an interesting statement.

Don't say it was a cold day/ the hall big.

Focus on the surrounding.

Start at least two sentences with an adverb

Present tense.

1. Repetition

2. Smilie

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VocabularyHelp - Learn English Words With Meaning

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Learn English Words: SIMILE - Meaning, Vocabulary with Pictures and Examples

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Focus on your feelings

Describe how you feel?

Hyperbole

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Focus on the exam paper and pen

touch

What does this paper mean?..

Personification
Alliteration

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Focus on a character

Describe them:

What do they look like?

What do they sound like?

1. Metaphor

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Exam question

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Walked in the hall i see nervous students going in and to finding there seats and looking nervous, there look so scared, some of them looked so relaxing there might feel confident because there were revising or there use to being in a exam. when the exam was starting i was keeping looking at the clock it just wasn't me it was other students as well .

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when i am in a exam i sit in my chair and when i am nervous i playing with my fingers looking somewhere that i don't looking at the paper so that i i more interest something more important then the exam paper because i fear of the exam when i even think about it i have a like a shake in my body and i feel about it so i play more with my fingers.

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When I came to the exam I was really nervous I was shaking my body froze like a Popsicle. I was not prepared. I was chewing on my pen and I was looking around. I started my exam I was scratching my head and I was thinking about something else and not looking at the paper I was happy to be finish with the exam and to get out the hallway and go home.