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Sun-drenched day.

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The writer used a TON of writers tricks. Here is one:

“Help!” I cry, small-voiced.

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I liked A Day At Ke'e because it said, "I was as excited as a child getting a puppy."

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I Like the book alot beause of all the alliteration

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I liked the kayak Tip Over because it had a lot of good snap shots . It also has a lot of good similes.

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I liked the writers tricks in the story. Samuel Greer

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I liked how the story The Great Escape had a alot of Writers Tricks and really showed what happend. (Show don´t tell)

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johnny bregenzer My Extreme and Deathly Fright

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johnny bregenzer My Extreme and Deathly Fright

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The story was realy good because it showed her thoughts. I notice the onomonopia.

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I like how the author described the character's feelings.

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The writer used an amazing beginning hook.

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I liked that story, because it has some good similes and metaphors. I also like good hyphenated modifiers and parallel structures.

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I liked how the story gave us excitement and makes me think about how Mrs.Clays cat went missing.

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i loved the grat askap because i thout it would be about a missing dog but it was about a liserd  and writers trick

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i loved the grat askap because i thout it would be about a missing dog but it was about a liserd  and writers trick

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Ava I like this story because it has a lot of good snap shots and similes .

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I like this story because  tricks

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I really like how he used a lot of similes and zesty words.

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I liked it because the author used so many writers tricks.

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They really showed what happened, and I could picture it.

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I have a connection with this story because I have been in this situation when Its down to the line and someone scores to win it!

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I like how the author did a great job with great dialogue and writers tricks especially hyphenated modifier even though it is easy to do!
Clickaty-Clackity

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This story has lots of good righter tricks. Which makes it a good story.

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Kayak Tip-Over - Aidan V. 4th hour Mrs. Clay.

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Kayak Tip-Over - Aidan V. 4th hour Mrs. Clay.

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I like this story because it had lots of good thought shots and snap shots. I also like how the author used lots of similes and metaphors. I also like how the author used lots of detail.

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 Brendan Tyrer. I liked the Musee D'Orsay. I have been to the Musee D'Orsay so I could make connections. I liked the good word choice like My eyes lit up, or I marveled,  And there is a really good metaphor. 

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 Brendan Tyrer. I liked the Musee D'Orsay. I have been to the Musee D'Orsay so I could make connections. I liked the good word choice like My eyes lit up, or I marveled,  And there is a really good metaphor. 

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There was lots of good dialogue and transitions

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I liked all of the dialogue because it made the story more interesting at the beginning to fish hook your readers

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The Delightful Musee D’ Orsay - Audri F. 

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The Delightful Musee D’ Orsay - Audri F. 

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I like this story, because I liked the part where there was a metaphor, "I am a queen walking up to her throne."

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I liked the story The Great Escape because it kept you hooked. I also liked all the writers tricks.

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I loved the title of the story because it made me want to read more (it hooked me). I also felt a connection with the moment the author was describing.