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For Andaru: your images are out

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wira's design

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aryo designnya bagus gambarnnya jelas keren

andaru designnya bags karena font terlihat jelas dan background yang sesuai dengan tema.

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give feed bacc plox

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give feedback

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Naura:
I honestly like ur poems both of them match and the font size and the font is good and I can read it well. Your poems also have nice decorations. Yours also have good spacing and a really simple color.

Maira:
Yours really match and it is very nice and it's also cute and aestheticly pleasing. Which I like it.

Sasya:
Yours is cute and the spacing is also good. I also like how you make the shadows too very creative.

Niqquita:
Yours is good and I like how the background is related to the poem. I can also see the font clearly. And how put the writings is also good.

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Feedback for Arya :
I think is good and the font is good and the background is good\

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Aryo
- The pages are too plain and not enough colors. The decoration is pretty good and the title's are readable. I suggest that you give colors to the background because everything is already good.

Ingmar
- The color choice's are good and the image's make sense to what the poem is talking about. The margin has room to improve but everything else is good

Baja
- The color choice's are good but the second page's margin needs more improvement

Andaru
- The margin on the middle is not to great and I think it needs to be wider so that the reader can experience more of your creation. The rest is very good and I like your design.

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pls give feedbacks :)

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I need feedback's. I do not care if it is negative or positive. Thank you for writing your feedback. PLS GIVE FEEDBACK

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Rafa
- Margin: The margin must be more wide because we have no space to put our thumbs on
- Page layout: I'd say it's quite decorative and I like it
- Size of font and pictures: I think the font size should be non-caps because both of them should quite be interpreted as a cute genre, especially the bat poem with the pictures so the font should be smaller and non-caps
- Typography: The font's fine but if possible, change it to something a bit quirky and non-caps
- Image: It's fine and it fits the poem
- Color Combination: It fits both poem as the bat color combination kind of represents Halloween themed
- Running Heads and Feeds: It's nice

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my feedback

-Shafeeq
the picture is relevant to the poem you chose but you can try to make the background of the mom poem to be more colorful so it matches the poem

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Feedback for Maira :
I think is good and the font is good and the background the color is not that dark, and I like the picture that u use and the title font is good and and I think the pattern in the backgroup is perfect with the text.

Feedback for Sasya :
I think The font is good and the background is so good because is not that colorful and simple so is like in the middle, and the picture in the mom and the bat is good so is not that many. and I like the picture that you use.

Feedback for Niqquita : I think is good and the background is same like the writing so is good. and I think the " Bat " is to dark the text, and need more picture, the font is good and I like it so much.

Feedback for Naura :
I think the Picture is ggod I like what u put in the " Poster " and the background is simple and is not that colorful so I like it and the font is already good and perfect and I like the picture that u use. and the picture is suitable with the text.

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The spread design is good and had a lot of drawings and I think you should change the background to a different one just to make it more interesting

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Bagas
my spread please give me feedback

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this is my spread

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1. Enzo
The spread is very enjoyable to look at. The margin is very good, and has good spacing. There is no running heads, or feeds, but that doesn't ruin it. The font is a great choice and the size is good, therefore making it very easy to see. It has a very interesting colour combination, and has shapes/images that are fun and colorful, although it is not related to the poems. With the page layout, it is very persuasive and fun, and i could feel the emotion. Overall, its very good and persuasive.

2. Bagas
His spread is very cute, and very charming. The font is quite suitable, but there are some changes that I think need to be made. The margin also needs to improve, to make more space. It has a very simple colour, which i really like, although it is pretty plain. It has suitable and very good running head and feeds. The images add a lot the drawing, making the cuteness. It has a very nice colour combination. Not only is it cute, it is also relatable with the poem. Overall, it is interesting and nice.

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Rafa Ali feedbacks to other people :D (don't be sad by my feedback though)

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Rafa Ali feedbacks to other people :D (don't be sad by my feedback though)

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1.Adan
Adan's spread is good and have very cute pictures, the color and layout decisions are really good too, there is not a lot of space for margin (or to hold the paper)
2. Baja
The color is smooth and good, it has lots of space so people could read more easily and put their thumbs there so it's also good.
3.Rasya
I really like the font, and the background doesn't make reading hard, there is also lots of space to put our thumbs on so it is really easy to read.
4.Naura
The font and the space makes it easy to read it, the font is not hard to read, and there is many space to place our thumbs and not get confused. The pictures are not too big and not too many of them.

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1. MAIRA : i think your spread is good and its very intersting and also the decoration is amazing for me the color is good but you need a little bit more color and the font is also very cool.
2. NIQQUITA : i think your spreaad is very colorfull and also it's very cute, i think you need to add more picture's and also for the font is ok for me it's very pretty and cool you just need more decoration and picture.
3. NAURA : i think your spread is very amazing and the font is really cool and also the decoration and picture is really related to the poems and i really like the color to.
3. i think your feed back is very cool and also you need a bit more picture and also the font is very good and the color of the background to.

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1. to sasya: it is great and cool also has pictures and also cute   the image is cute. the margin is also good. but need a colour full background cause the background is only white. but its cute . the font is also cute (both of them)

2. to renata: its cute and cool.also need more pictures at the mom. and the flutter flutter is already good and cute. and the font is related to the poem so its good. and the margin is also good

3. to baja: its cool also need more colour full. the margin is also good and cool. also need more pictures. nut its cool and cute. the font is also ok for me. and i like it

4. to naura: its cute and cool.and the flutter flutter is already good and cute. and the font is related to the poem so its good. and the margin is also good

5.to t its cool also need more colour full. the margin is also good and cool. also need more pictures. all of them its cool and cute. the font is also ok for me. and i like it

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pls gives feedbacks to fish i needs feedbacks ok bye bye

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- to Naura : its really simple and nice i love it, and its really easy to read. I also love the layouts the font and the decorations 💗
- to Sasya: i love the color it really suits the poem and i love the layouts expecially the font its really pretty and breath taking lol but it would be beter if the tittle is not too close to the top but the rest is nice
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give me feedback

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Give me feedback

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Feedbacks:
1. Maira: It is very aesthetically pleasing, the color scheme is really nice, the font size and selection is good and I really like the positioning of the pictures in the spread. I think the font size on both of the pictures should be the same. The style of the spread really matches the content, but I think another color scheme would do a bit better. The margin is pretty good but the pictures can be easily covered so it needs to be repositioned to the middle.

2. Adan: I really like the layout of the spread, the color scheme suits the poem, the font size and font itself is really good, I think the spread is really nice and good overall but it needs more pictures to make it more appealing, the style of the spread really matches the poem. The margin is not bad but the poem text itself needs to moved a bit to the middle so people can read it without covering the poem.

3. Sasya: It's really nice, the font selection, size and positioning is really good and the pictures inside it is very suitable for the poems, the margin is very good because people can hold the spread and read the poems without covering them, well the overall style is really nice and cute but the spread colors need to be a bit more connected.

4. Tisha: It is very creative and really nice, the margin spacing is pretty suitable I guess, but the spread itself is missing the matchingness, so like the spread itself needs a main color so the poems can connect in someway, because it's a bit mismatched because this is supposed to be a spread, the font choice and sizing is already suitabel for the poem, overall it's really good.

5. Niqquita: The color choices are really nice but it needs to match a bit more, the margin on the Mom poem is already really good, but the margin in the Flutter Flutter Little Bat needs to be improved, the font size and the font itself is very suitable for the poem. Overall, the spread is really good.

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Adan (Feedbacks) Please don't be sad if my feedback is suggestions:

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Adan (Feedbacks) Please don't be sad if my feedback is suggestions:

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Rafa: I think you should pick a different font that can be used with no capital letters. But other than that it is really good.

Baja: Love it! Your spread is very classy and very fancy (Loves it)

Niqquita: I think your spread needs more background/pictures that is connected to the poem/spread. And I think it is better to pick a font that is easier to read. But love the rest of it. (Oh and add a header)

Naura: It's really cute. And nice to see! Really good.

Parsha: I think its good, but I think the background needs a little bit more work, Atleast make a little space for the poem for people to see, because it is hard to see.

Maira: It is really good, the pictures are related to the poem.

Shafeeq: Really nice, love the layout and the header, I like how the header is the same for both pages

Aryo: Add more colour and more pictures, it doesn't really have a layout but its ok I guess.

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Please give feedback I want feedback if you give feedback I will be your friend :D (please give feedback even if you don't want to be my friend ;-;)

Thank you dat all

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Rafa
- margin: the margin should be more wide because it has no space in the side for our thumbs.
-running heads and feeds: its good and nice
- page layout:  It shoulld be more organized
-typography (font): i think the font should be a font that is not caps lock
-size of font and pictures: i think the font size should be smaller
-image: its nice and relatable.
-color combination: is cool and nice

Baja
- margin: its nice and has the right margin.
-running heads and feeds: should use a better font to make it more interesting
- page layout: its organized.
-typography (font): the font should e changed because it is a mainstream font.
-size of font and pictures: i think you should have more picture but it should be bigger
-image: should have more images.
-color combination: i think you need to change the color of the background just to make it more interesting

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1. Adan
Adan's spread is remarkably pleasant to look at and read. The combinations of colors that he chose does not only match but it's also related to the topic the poem is about. It is also  very persuasive and imaginable because through the layout and images I could taste the Cup of cocoa. The font is really easy to read and the size is just right. However the margin is kind of too close to the edge of the page.

2. Niqquita's page is very eye catching with the various colors and interesting font.  The size of the font is large enough to be read and the space between the words are perfect. Although, the background and font does not always match up and some words are difficult to read.

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This is mines... Please give feedback... Tenk u. If give feedback i will be nice to you. (if you no give feedback I will be lonely forever at lunch)

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Feedback for Baja:
It is great and has pictures, but it needs more color and images. The font is small and more background color.

Feedback for Rafa Ali:
It's great and has more pictures and images, but the font need to be more detail and don't use to much capital letter.

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I am In need of feed back to
anyone who is willing to review
I require assistance in finishing this task

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GIVE ME FEED BACK ❤️

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Please give feedback, it would be very appreciated :)

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gimmie feedbacks or else you get an F- on your test thank u
💓

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Feedback for Niqquita : I think is good and the background is same like the writing so is good. and I think the " Bat " is to dark the text, and need more picture, the font is good and I like it so much

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Please give feedback. Thank you

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please pick two spread designs and give feedbacks for those designs. give feed back by using 3 praise and 1 improvement (things need to be improved)
these are things you need to comment:
- margin
-running heads and feeds
- page layout
-typography (font)
-size of font and pictures
-image
-color combination
please cek your wording and use positive words. avoid using don't

cheers,
reri soewardi