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I personally feel very comfortable with the language because I have been learning it since I was a child.
Learning English affected me in a positive way because it has helped me get into one of the best schools in Mexico.
I really liked making this portfolio because it allows me to see everything that I achieved throughout the semester in this matter

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The activity that I liked the most was the kahoots because they made the classes more fun, The activity that I did not like was doing activities in flipgrid.
All the activities without exception helped me to improve my skills in the subject, My teacher Silvia Garcia has been my best English teacher

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Nowadays its very important to learn the language because it helps us to find a good job.
Something that I learned that surprised me was the importance of essays because they are necessary for many things that are very important

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During this semester we learned to write essays and also grammar rules that helped me improve my way of speaking and writing.
I need to improve my spelling, I also need to improve my speaking fluency
to achieve these improvements I will be disciplined, constant and dedicated to the subject

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https://youtu.be/_rG1j1TFRbQ

feedback

please, make sure you share these comments with your teammates. Make sure you read the comments in the rubric, too.

Surely everyone begins a presentation with: "Hello. I am /my team is .. and we are going to talk about..."
How about starting your presentation in a much more effective way??? Please take into account the following ideas:
1. Open with a relevant quote.
2. "What if?" introductory question to draw your audience to wonder
3. "Imagine" scenario like the Beatles song... "Imagine a world where....."
4. A rethorical question
5. Begin with statistics...after all, you figured them out along your project.
6. A powerful phrase.

I liked your presentation because you were fluent and showed confidence to speak your mind. You sounded natural without the stiffness of following a script. GOOD! However, talking time was not equally distributed. Jaciel spoke TOO LITTLE compared with Carlos and Alan.

Your plan of action was supposed to be some REAL ACTION YOU TAKE, something PRACTICAL rather than idealistic. OK. It sounds good to defend minority groups if you hear someone saying bad things about them but... how does that make a difference? What is it that you are willing to do? How can you make a change by doing something not just commenting?

The following need correction:
X are continue nowadays
X without woman one day
X if woman doesn't exist
X who is the good
X or the womans who wants a better life
X the new generations are learning with these movements (??)
X the main cause of their behavior
X if the government don't do anything, they have to move (??)
X woman or women (you need to make a difference because you mispronounce both)
X womans have the necessity
X they are agree
X in accord, we are in the same opinion

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DWsWo0wECHH8dOxxn0KcXUx-u0naAH7F/view?usp=sharing
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HLjDQHU6Psk7A0edZtb9vgdfPxeO_yy4/view?usp=sharing

Feedback

You answered the first question thoroughly and fluently. Good!  Some corrections include:
If I had  the chance  to....I must be the president of Mexico.
My mom is politician.
So I enjoy what she do.
It would take time

I AM VERY HAPPY TO SEE THAT YOU WANT TO MAKE A CHANGE FOR OUR COUNTRY. I AM SURE YOU WILL MAKE IT HAPPEN.

When you talk about the two photos remember to:
Compare and contrast.
Comparison follows a clear order: introduction + similarities, differences, question. Although this particular order is not compulsory, it is recommendable.
Useful phrases to compare and contrast are highly evaluated in this section.
Example :
Both of these pictures show…
One similarity between these two pictures/situations is that…
Another similarity might be that…
One thing that these two pictures/situations have in common is that…
The first picture… whereas the second one…
Although the first picture…., the second one…
On the one hand, the first picture shows… . On the other hand, the second one…

You did not describe nor compare the photos. You talked about your logical deductions and speculations about the photos.

Corrections:
more easier
I never ask to my parents to ...
by my own
if the child decide to do ...
to not pay attention
focused (wrong pronunciation)

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https://drive.google.com/file/d/1O3JcBTuBC2VTlOofqbNdrM-sIdeCIXAE/view?usp=sharing

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My goals are to finish high school with a good average to later continue studying engineering at the Tec de Monterrey.
My achievements during high school were having participated in the rock in tec musical event, entering tec te monterrey was also a great achievement

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I like to collect tennis shoes, exclusive clothes and accessories, I also like music, especially percussion musical instruments.

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My hobbies are playing the drums and going to tennis.

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My childhood was very beautiful because I enjoyed it a lot , during my life I had problems that have not been difficult for me to overcome, the most important thing in my life are my parents and my sister, at this stage I try to be better day by day