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The photos are well taken

you should focus more on the techniques.

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These pictures were inspired by nature. It it about the peace and quiet at school.

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A good thing was that there were leading lines and ither photography skills in the photo

One thing you can improve on is that there is not much focus on the subject of the photo.

-By Miraya

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Your pictures were mixed with nature and memories in our school.I hope you can give a statement about the picture. Personally, I think you have potential in photography!

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Your pictures were mixed with nature and memories in our school.I hope you can give a statement about the picture. Personally, I think you have potential in photography!

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By Xinyi

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I like the theme as it shows the close relationship with friends.

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All the photos have very good use of all the photography techniques and have been carried out very nicely. One wish i have is that you can add balance to more photos such as the classroom one. In the end all your photos are very nicely taken.

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This are the places that are the most meaningful to me. My theme is The Places That I will Remember When I Leave Park View. Park View is simply marvellous and it is amazing in both education, teachers, students and places within the school. When I leave Park View after receiving my PSLE results, I will remember these places and I will remember them when I move on to secondary school. The friends I made along the way are important, but I shall remember these memorable places are. The front gate was the start as I always use it to get into school and without it, I will never be able to go into school that way. The canteen is simply magnificent as I visit it every time I go to school. The food that is sold there is simply delicious. The library is an archive of knowledge because you can learn all sorts of things. Every book is an adventure. The more you know, the better. The library is a classroom in it's own way because the books are teachers: always teaching. The parade square is where I used to run and play in P1 and P2, and sometimes P3. Even though I rarely go to the Parade Square any more, it holds a dear spot in my heart. The Art room is memorable beacause, well, I was instructed to make a artist statement over there. The Art room is where creativity runs wild and creativity is treasured there. The Art room is full of students teeming with ideas. So, I think that these places sill never be forgotten by me when I move to secondary school. The teachers and friends I have met along the way will also hold a spot in my heart. I will NEVER forget Park View Primary School.

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⭐️One star:I like how you took you photos at different views.

⭐️One wish:I wish you could take you photos a bit more clearer.

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Star - You did an absoulety magnificent job at capturing the representing you an your friends having fun and goofing around. I especially enjoy looking at the death one cause that is extremely goofy. However, the one I enjoy looking at the most is the friendship one as it is me and Iman doing friend things.

Wish - I wish that there is a more clear explanation to what the what could that be photograph be representing. All I see in that photograph is a single hand. And the salute one, what is Jia Hang saluting at? It'll be nice to know what he is saluting at.

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I like how you put filters and made the pictures very detailed but i wish you better explained the story and connection of these pictures all together.

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Good job

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One thing I like about is your storyline that I could understand what you meant and the story was really interesting

I think you should improve your photo taking skills. Try to use the rule of thirds or something I see some but add more😇

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I like how you said that in P1, there was freedom. I think that you can talk about the 6 years in PVPS instad of the first and last year only. Anyway, good job!

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Great photos, I can understand why you enjoyed your life in school.Your statement really conveys what you learned in school.

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I think that the photos use frame in a frame well however when there are too many frames, people are not able to focus on the object. Another good thing about your photo is the way how you use a art material to give a sad effect to the photo

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These are nice images of how Park View is like before recess. But why did you put mainly food places?Do you like food from Park View?

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I like how your photos are very nostalgic and serene. I think that you can improve by making all the photos look more organised and balanced instead of just random angles. 😁

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You have good ideas for the pictures. For some ofthe pictures, you can try to focus more on the main thing you are taking a photo of.

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⭐️ One star : I like how your picture that shows how our school like and the photograph techniques you applied. Your story made me feel good and happy.

🌟One wish: I wish you could add more details with your friends as I think that school life needs friends. So that it can be more meaningful

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Your captions are very creative , i wonder where did you get the inspiration.the canteen one is very good, i should learn from you

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Nice artist statement but the photos have no meaning whatsoever

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From what I can see is that your pictures look very sad, but you captions look very empty but, overall I like the angles you used and the way you took ! Good job Vansh!

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This shows important places in Park View and special events in my Park View life.The canteen is also the place where I made my first friends in Singapore as Park View was the first place I went since arriving at Singapore. I also posted the flag as it showed me how strong and independent Singapore is.These images reflect the 5 years I spent in Sinagpore and I hope to view them after graduating from Singapore.

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i like the pictures and their captions as there are both sad and happy moments. But for some photos it could have more colours.

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The pictures that I have captured reminds me of all the places I have been in my primary school journey.

The library is were I gained my knowledge and at the same time, enjoying the air-conditioner.

The bridge is where I enjoy the sight when I get to level 3.

The parade square is where I run around,laughter and joy filling the whole place.

The canteen is where I chat and laugh ,while enjoying the scrumptious food prepared by the vendors.

The classroom is where I gained most of my knowledge,through teamwork and resilience.

Volleyball reminds me of all the blood ,sweat and tears that me and my teammates experience during the afternoons.

The last photo shows me how I had tried reaching for my goals,like myself in the picture.

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Star - The playground can bring on a sense of nostalgia

Wish - more pictures

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1.I like how you can remember all the places that you've been going to since P1! All your photos use different techniques of photography like leading lines and close-up. 2.It's good that you don't forget the memories that you've made with your friends. The photographs are also clear and easy to see where they are taken. Wish:I wish that you could also try to use techniques like rule of thirds.

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I aways enjoy playing the piano during recess.iremember creating different songs and entertaining my frieds and myself.i enjoy all the moments playing paino in school and will continue to play more.My caption features the times i enjoyed in school during recess

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1⭐️I like how you included yourself in these photos. i think that adds a personal touch to them. You clearly show the places in the photos

1🌟 I wish that you could explain how these places are memorable to you

Qn: What does the photo with you and Joyce mean?

From Amira

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this is so creative but i think the meaning behind these photos aren't so clear

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Life is full of disappointments and joy, you give in, you will be disappointed but is you persevere and work hard you will happier than you could ever be.

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Wish: Maybe take a picture in a venue with students playing to show a leisure play.

Star: The photo angle of the picture that you took is good and shows the rule of thirds

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I took these photos as they were very nostagic and These were memories i would never forget. These photos were showing my experience doing them the first time.They made me change my perspective to the school differently.

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Different tides in life:the fun, the pain, the exhaustion and geting caught.Focus on the positive.No need to worry about the future.Focus on the present.

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Even though the pictures are simple, they express deeper things. All the places in the series are happy memories for me and maybe Chloe too!

I think that the captions (only some) can be more deeply expressed.

Otherwise, I love your series!!

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This marks the end of my PVPS journey. I am happy that my friends and teachers made this school more welcome. During the 6 years in PVPS, I learnt to never give up and stop dreaming! In the end, I would like to thank my friendsfor spending time with me

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These are the places we have been going to the past 6 years continuously.Yet we still have immeasurable amount of joy going to these places.Many friendships has begun in this school,that will go on for years and years.When we leave,these will be the memories we will never forget.

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I choose these photos to show my journey in PVPS where we learn and play with friends.When others look at my pictures, I want them to feel warm and be interested .The pictures showed my journey in PVPS where there is laughter and everyone being friendly to one another .These photes showed my growth in PVPS ,when I first entered PVPS and explored the school to graduating and saying goodbye to my friends and classmates.

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Oh no.I've ben caught.

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Star - This photo represents people reading at a library, the library is a place that we are all fond of, so this is a good photo.

Wish - I wish there was more photos

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Taking a break after a long day of school

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I love school. School is one of the best places to make friends and unbreakable bond. Here are some of my photos to explain how school life is

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My pictures are all very deep and emotional and very nostalgic that discribes my primary school life.

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Your photos show a regular and nice day at school.The journey that everyone goes and will have to experience is the journey that can be easy or hard.

🌟(star):I like that there are multiple different stories in the pictures.

🌟(wish):I think that there could be more meaning to it if there were people

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I chose these photographs as it is the most memorable places in school to me, where I spend most of my time. Whenever I see these places, I recall the memories I made there with my friends, like celebrating my friend's birthday in the cable car area and spending the rest of my allowance on random things in the bookshop. Since Primary 1, I have always been coming back to these places with my friends to relive our past memories.

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The second eating spot

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One thing I liked about your artwork was the photography techniques . You really managed to capture the essence of the places😀

I wish that you could show more meaning in the captions as one of your captions said that it was the first time playing in a place. Was it really the first time you ever played in a place?

It was a pretty good photo story.

From: Faye

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Signing a contract of agreement

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Two people in the world of reading

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Bye bye PVPS. I had a lot of good memories here but like this is my last year. When I just started, I did not know anyone here. However, I managed to make some friends and managed to survive six years.

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I like how you mention the places you took the photos at, soit will be more clearer.

I think you can make the caption for the Singapore flag photo shorter. You literally just typed the whole pledge.

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All because of the reckless and foolish mistake of rushing for the ball... The inconvenience, the fees, the embarrasment. What a grave mistake... I would never be so careless ever again.

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Looking up at this makes me sad climbing stairs yet again

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I have made so many memories in Park View. So, I decided to express them as a photo series. These are some of my favourite places and happy memories in Park View. I used to play in the playground a lot but because of COVID-19, I could not, so while taking the pictures, I felt refreshed to play there again and just let go of my worries. My parents always used to say ' Time Flies' and I never really understood but now I definitely do, time really flies by!

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I chose these photos as i feel like they represent what i have done in school and how i feel. I feel these photos will relate to other people and it will help as it makes the photo easier to understand. I also think that these photos can help my friend can see the vision of my photos. Farewell Park View Primary School.

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School is not just about exams or grades its more about the memories and friends we have made along the way. As our memories of screaming and laughing out of happiness will stay in our hearts forever.

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my photo story is about the 6 years of primary school. the photos are meant to represent the aspects of how it was like there, recalling the pleasant memories over the past 6 years with pictures. for instance, one photo shows two of my friends playing at the playground, which is what i used to do back in P1 and 2, but unfortunately we are not allowed to play at the playground anymore :( despite this, it makes me feel nostalgic when i remember the sweet days

some photos also include achievements, which are the pride of pvps

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When I first came to PVPS, I had no new friends. Slowly, I made some friends and those friendships flourished. Now, I have a found family. "Friends are the family that we chose for oursleves, not the family we were given."--Unknown

(Side note, the photos are posted backwards. They should start from the back)

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My photographs are about students who are never alone.They all have a smile on their face no matter what they are doing.These photos can be great memories looking back when we are older.These photos show that no matter if you have no friends or have many,you will never be alone.

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My photos are of my journey in Park View Primary School for the 6 years i have been in this educational facility. It shows my acomplishments such as my journey as a art and craft club cca student and napfa.

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The place we have eaten at

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I was inspired to base my photo story on the canteen and the cable car area as that was where I spent most of my recesses .

I want people to see the place where I had fun and made friends in the canteen and the cable car area.

These photos reflect my past 6 years as I have grown up there. The canteen and cable car was where I came out of my shell, learned to live in the real world, and made friends that stayed.

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That one time I knocked Jiahang's bottle down by accident

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Memories

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My friends tht accompany me through this six years, the pictures shows the places that we love and share fond mamories together. Those good and bad experience, favourable and unfavourable feelings that feel will stay with me. I have become more open and " friendly" ( in a way ). Those pictures shows how memorable and enjoyable school life can be. Let us all remember how our classmates and friends have done that accmpany us through tough momments.

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I chose these photos because it shows what I do in school. It brings me memories of fun times, learning and playing. When people see my photo story, I want them to understand what I do in school and where I go in school. I have grown as a person through my six years by what I do guess. My photos show that i will not give up if you can tell.

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Where everyone grew their vegetables together

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We spend most of our time in school. In my photo story, I wanted to show what a typical day at school looks like, with its fun parts and sad parts.

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I love sports so these pictures reminded me of my 6 years PVPS journey in sports. I feel nostalgic and I want people to know about my fondest memories in PVPS. I have learnt about sportmanship and the love of the game and I want to take with me the important values and passion to the next chapter.

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The theme is about having fun if you couldn't tell. I took pictures of my classmates doing funny things and I had lots of fun. I wanted to do this theme as I'm sure everyone likes having fun. This series shows the happy memories we had, our friendships and the strong bonds between me and my friends over our 6 years in PVPS. Overrall, this is the series about goofing around and having fun, hence, the theme.

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These photos show people having fun and the place we had fun for 6 years, these photos were inspired by a few things I did from P1-P5. I want people to understand all the happiness and fun we had for 6 Years. I have grown to a more respectful, helpful and caring person after experiencing primary school.

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My favourite librarian doing her work cheerfully

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A remainder:don't fracture your thumb in prelims or you'll be like this guy

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A good welcome to all student and teachers

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A good welcome to all student and teachers

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Place to buy necessities and random things

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If you could not tell the theme is:6 Years of Pvps times being tortured,having fun.These memories not only resembles friendship but it shows our dedication and growth over these 6 years. when we look back to this in the future we can possibly see the environment changing when we come back when we are older.We can see our friends in the past and see if we are still in connections with them.

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I remember my friend falling into the pond here