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Part A: The Last Time I See You: uses vivid precise words, describes what happens in a scene (slows). The writer also includes internal dialogue to slow down the pacing of the story. The author has used this technique to help the reader be able to feel empathy for the narrator and to be more engaged in the story.
Part B: “Months passed, filled with nothing but talk of the future. Without even realizing it, I started to become happier. Talking about these things like they were actually going to happen made me forget that they most likely weren’t.” This sentence shows that the author is zooming past a span of months to speed up the story.

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Part A: The Wanmin Restaurant: uses vivid precise words, describes what happens in a scene (slows). The writer uses vivid precise language to help the reader be able to have a better visual on what is happening in the story. Describing what is happening in the scene helps make the story longer and more interesting, it also zooms in on a moment.

Part B: “After a couple minutes of searching the same box he stood up and looked at curious Xiangling.” In this sentence, the author zooms past a span of minutes to speed up the story.

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"Neither of them got a wink of sleep, for they feared the worst to come for their first day back. Abigail and Audrey both had the same first period, 11th grade English." The author effectively uses this transition to zoom past the unimportant details to quickly get to more of the plot.

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dialogue is a craft move used to effectively speed up the story and thicken the plot. this gets the audience anticipating more and, overall, creates a newer depth to the characters and story.

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I really felt extra empathetic in this story because I had a family member endure breast cancer as well. This made me feel very sad for the character but that's what the author was going for with all their metaphors and showing how upset and most of all tired the character was.

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The author uses curricular lead and ending to , in my opinion tie up loose ends and show the stress the character must endure.

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the story started off by creating tension and then took an unexpected turn by the end of the story

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the story started off by creating tension and then took an unexpected turn by the end of the story

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This story uses effective transitions that help portray the characters well. Also internal dialogue is used very effectively making the story more interesting

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The story took a very unexpected turn with just a line of dialogue, it made the story really thrilling because of how suddenly and quickly everything went by.

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This story was especially great and focused on describing the setting with sensory details, which made the story so interesting and fantasy-based.

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At the start of the story it shows how the charter is nervous for his big game and at the end of the story he is happy after winning.

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The story switches from an ominous, almost scary perspective into a kind and welcoming perspective, and I think it made the story even better and even more eerie, by making it seem like something is being hidden while it is just out of reach.

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The last time I saw you - Metaphor, inside dialogue. The writer had a lot of dialogue going on in the characters' head and it made the story really good. For example: “I tuned the rest out. Still numb”. She is explaining how she is feeling and ignoring everything else. She also used metaphors many times in the story too. “Then everything hit me like a tidal wave.” This shows that she was numb and in shock but just now everything hit her and her shock went away. These two craft moves helped the story in many ways and overall I enjoyed the story.

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The writer used sensory details and descriptive language. The author did this to set the setting and image of the scene in the readers mind. "Crashes and broken glass... the sound of furniture being knocked over became audible"(Little Red). This slows down the pacing of the story.

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The writer used Internal Dialogue and Dialogue to develop the characters. The author did this to compare what was going on in the characters mind and what was being transpired out loud between the characters. ¨It's not something incredibly important,"' I said, ten different arguments already popping up in my head"(Runaway). This slows down the pacing of the story.

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I noticed that there were a lot of sensory details in this story. When the author uses the line,"The strong chemical smell mixed with the intoxicating scent of a metallic substance," it basically helps you smell the scene.

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Effectively transitions from the battle, to being in a different realm in the story.

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The story uses metaphors to describe the different scenes and sensory details.

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The story uses metaphors to describe the different scenes and sensory details.

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There was a lot of vivid imagery that clearly set the scene and portrayed the author's vision of the story.

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Very descriptive and nice dialogue

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I noticed that the writer used a lot of precise words, dialogue, flashbacks, metaphors, etc.

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I noticed a lot of sensory details and they were showing and not telling. It really did feel like I was in the story.

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“ALPHA-10 clear for takeoff depart straight out.” This line tells me that the author is using something what an ATC (Air Traffic Control) Tower would say to a plane at the airport when it's ready for takeoff.

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The author used craft moves like sensory details for sight and sound. They also used the line ¨...All he could see behind his eyelids was the one thing that stuck with him forever. Red.¨ I think this affects the reader by giving them an idea of how the events the character witnessed stuck with them for such a long time.

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Used descriptive sentences to show the different magical creatures. There is also a fed-up tone from the main character at the end when they decide to run away.

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Using metaphors which add to the tenseness of the story. They also add a lot of characterization on how the main character changes.

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used personification for "lungs refused to listen." It slowed down the story and it helps the reader feel how the character is feeling, they are not in control of their body and breaths.

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used personification for "lungs refused to listen." It slowed down the story and it helps the reader feel how the character is feeling, they are not in control of their body and breaths.

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"I'm piloting the beast of a thing" is a  metaphor because the "thing" ,which is a plane, is not a beast but comparing the two without using like or as. This slows down the story and lets the reader understand that this person is flying a huge plane and is still slightly in aw of it.

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"I'm piloting the beast of a thing" is a  metaphor because the "thing" ,which is a plane, is not a beast but comparing the two without using like or as. This slows down the story and lets the reader understand that this person is flying a huge plane and is still slightly in aw of it.