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The essay did a really good job of keeping a clear central idea. As well as maintaining a proper structure throughout the whole essay.

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What this did well was address the prompt and explain it well with a wide variety of fancy words.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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The essay was easy to understand and easy to read its format is great and it is structured how it should be.

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The thesis provided makes a clear argument and is supportable with the evidence at hand.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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This 4+ essay was very clear and included very rich words. It got straight to the point and focused on the prompt. Which helped the readers stay engaged and read through the whole essay without getting bored.

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"Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate."

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The thesis shows really well what the writer thinks the type of characterization Ronald Dahl uses.

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The explanation was very well and they stayed on the prompt so everything was easy to read and non-confusing.

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The explanation was very well and they stayed on the prompt so everything was easy to read and non-confusing.

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The thesis is written effectively because it is the heart of the paper that answers the prompt. It is written effectively because it smoothly leads from the backround information to the thesis and clearly addreses the prompt.

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They use quotes and explain the answers very well while giving us enough back ground information to understand what the main point of the writer is.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization-specifically character development-through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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This essay showed how to layer the base rights. Flowing together and blending to a very good strong essay. Getting to the point, showing the main topics and ideas. It uses strong transition and works

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This essay was very easy to understand and it flowed great. It gets to the point quickly while still getting it across. They stayed on prompt and it was easy to read.

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The thesis is very clear and is very straight forward. It answers the prompt correctly and perfectly.

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A thing that the essay did well that I did not do was explain what the wife was feeling.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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The thesis is very clear. It follows the prompt perfectly. Makes it easy to understand.

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The thesis is very clear. It follows the prompt perfectly. Makes it easy to understand.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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Something the model 4+ essay did better than my own was it keep its quotes clean and short.

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It did not use conjuctions or personal programs. Talked about her being phycopathic rather than about characterization.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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The thesis provides a clear argument that can be supported with evidence.

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What the essay did well was use very good words that helped readers stay intrigued in the story, it also spoke very clearly with great flow.

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The model 4 essay explained very well and I do not think I explained well.

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The model 4 essay explained very well and I do not think I explained well.

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This 4+ Essay had a clear ACECES which helped all the readers to stay engaged, and to have a better understanding of the story.

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They answered the prompt good.

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The thesis was very clear and very obvious on what you had to do. It answers the prompt correctly and perfectly.

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The thesis was very clear and very obvious on what you had to do. It answers the prompt correctly and perfectly.

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The example essay was capturing with it's details and short but well done explanations.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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In my essay I did not do well on the signpost. I wrote 3-4 sentences on it when it should have been a quick and clear idea. Such as, "it tenses up the plot and adds drama to the story."

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It gives the reader a clear understanding of what the writer is going to be talking about throughout the story.

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It clearly states the topics and deas that are going to be presented and to understand the main essay. It simple easy and gest to the point

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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Stay more on topic, will not use conjuctions, and will not persnonal pronouns.

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Based on the feedback I received I will shorten my quotes and give more elaboration.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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I would explain what the wife is feeling and show how and add more to the summary.

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The essay gave a clear explanation on how the author uses characterization to describe the characters emotions from the beginning to the end of the story.

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"...Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate."

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The writer made sure to clearly explain every part of the story and make it easy to find out what is going on and how they feel about the Lamb to the Slaughter.

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I didn't explain things well. My thesis and explanation of my evidence could be longer and clearer.

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"To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate."

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Simple and easy and got to the point, while staying on topic. Summary not too long and states the main topics and ideas

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It gives quotes and explains well but the conclusuion is not specific to the thesis

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The thesis clearly explains on what characterization the author uses in the story.

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It brings you back to the original question to the prompt and gives an end to the introduction paragraph.

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I plan on not including words such as, "me, we, us, and so on." I also plan to keep all of the sentences clear and concise, not adding extra information that is not needed.

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The thesis is written very well it shows a clear argument with evidence to back it up

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Explain my thesis and add more of an explanation so my writing is clearer.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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Something the 4+ essay did was keeps its quotes clean and short.

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The thesis is written very clearly and answers the prompt well.

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It is written effiectivly because it is easy to understand the main idea and had good quotes that made sense with the prompt.

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Based on the feedback I recieved, I plan on explaining better and staying more on topic to revise my essay.

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Something the model did well that I did not was citing evidence.

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It cited there quotes which I did not do.

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This thesis is written effectively because it is short, it answers the prompt clearly. and can be supported through evidence.

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The thesis is very good because it explains very clearly what the writers opinion is and why they feel this way.

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The essay is easy to read and is clear about the point. It has a proper MLA format and properly follows the ACECES.

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The essay did a good job getting your attention with the hook and explaining what was happening the entire time.

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One of the things the essay did well was how it was able to maintain the format.

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I had forgotten a thesis at the end of my introduction paragraph, while the examples was done exceptionally well.

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I plan to cite my evidence in all of my quotes i forgot to cite the evidence.

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I plan on adding citations and fix how I put a quote in my topic sentence.

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Dahl utilizes characterization- specifically character development through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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This essay did a very good job with the format and it also did well with explanation and going into detail.

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I didin't explain things as clearly as i could have done and they used better evidence

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They made sure to indent their paragraphs and cite their evidence.

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I plan on citing evidence and explaining more on the quotes that I used.

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The thesis was really clear and it helped with the understanding of the story since it provided supported evidence.

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I plan on shortening my summary, remembering to add a thesis, and communicating my points better.

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Stay on topic, explain things better, and try to find better thesis to make my story stronger

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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Something that the essay did well that I didn't do was use good words.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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I will make sure to pay more attention to the small details that need to be put in my paragraph.

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The essay did really well with answering the prompt and was very well written.

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The essay adressed the central idea boldly

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Based on the feedback I received I plan to revise my essay by indenting and avoiding contractions.

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Next time I will indent my paragraphs and put my thesis and the end of my introduction

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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I'm going to do better on my analysis sentences.

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The thesis is written effectively because it clearly shows the comparison of love versus hate

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A thing that this essay did that I did not do was to have a clear ACECES and a well-supported thesis.

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To help capitalize on this nervous breakdown, Dahl utilizes characterization–specifically character development–through the juxtaposition of love versus hate.

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The thesis is written effectively because it directly answers the question and gives purpose to the essay.

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They put a good amount of detail and it was well written

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The this made a clear point to where the story was going, has a argument and the evidence to back it up.

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The author gives a short summary of the plot of the story and then explains their thesis and how it applies to that summary.

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the thesis is written effectively because it clearly states the promt and transitions fro background info to the thesis

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the model essay had shorter, straight to the point quotes which i shouldve done