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Good work. I really appreciate the use of theoretical frameworks. It will be good to refer back to theories in your discussion section to interpret your results through the lens of the theories. Also, good work combining survey and FGD methods.

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Very solid and coherent presentation on a significant and complex issue!

In addition to the lack of perceived value, stressors and responsibilities findings is important, given the real-life issues impacting the value or utility of CBE

Useful recommendations which will also have policymaking and real-life implications

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Great introduction - personalising it, making it a story and real life connection, and good presentation throughout

It is a very significant issue, given the huge mental health and wellbeing issues among youth in Singapore. I look at it from the lens of cyber wellness

I haven't really seen WA considered in relation to this issue, so it is a very useful addition to the research

Something to consider: It also relates to online harms such as cyberbullying and other types of online harassment - you can bring it under these literature as well

Focus on males is important due to issues of toxic masculinity and the issues faced by young adolescent males

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This is a good project! Congratulations. I appreciate the effort to get a relatively good number of participants, combining online and in-person surveys. Good use of an established measure of well-being. I suggest adding a theoretical framework. Doing so will also help you narrow down your results and keep the study focused.

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RVHSP3: Your slides were well made and we liked the part about research findings as you went in depth to explain how each question/chart relates to your research! We feel like you can explore a bit more with your literature review! But we do like that fact that you engaged the different literatures together, which is something our group can actually improve on too.

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Excellent presentation style, engaging and informative.

Significant topic, esp given the huge mental health and loneliness issues challenging our young and older populations - is this there in the lit review? This is part of the work I do on "cyber wellness"

Interesting and relevant findings

Questions to consider:

How much use is heavy? Was the amount used asked? This would play a role.

Are you sure it isn't replacing family experiences and interchanges?

This may be for students and families who are more aware of the limitations of TT use?

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A timely topic. I like that you went beyond descriptive analysis and ran some correlations. You acknowledge the possibility of the opposite direction being true: strong family bonds lead to children feel they can use TikTok if they want to. What made you not test this alternative direction instead? Also, you measured quality time and closeness with single items, do you think your findings may be more nuanced if you used scales that may reflect more of the concepts you're interested in? Did you ask participants if their siblings/parents also use TikTok?

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Interesting presentation. I am very curious about the creative writing exercise. Can you clarify if all participants were asked to write something? Were they all asked to not use AI and then use AI? It will be good to explain how that segment of the study was conducted and how were the write-ups analysed.

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Significant topic, esp when considering the impact of AI on student learning in a nuanced way

Good rationale and presentation is clear, so well done!

The creative writing element is a creative additional research method

A question to consider: Did the research also delve into what students are doing, if anything, to overcome the limitations?

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Good presentation overall

Demonstrated a good knowledge of the subject with good lit review

Presentation was coherent and well organised

Are you formulating recommendations, and if not, what are some general recommendations in this area?

Something to consider: How and whether socio-economic demographics plays a role - type of school, uni, how did students learn how to use ChatGPT in an empowered and critical way?

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Good presentation. The slides look really nice. Interesting that many students are aware of inaccuracies in AI generated responses, and yet many also continue to use it. I wonder whether your data is able to explain this paradox?

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Good clear and concise presentation. I suggest that you include the breakdown of the respondents so that we can understand and make some correlation between data and respondents.

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