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Contrary to general belief, multitasking has a lot of challenges. Multitasking not only decrease productivity in workplace but also negatively influence how we learn. It is time to focus to the one, not several.

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Although rapid growth of fast fashion has promoted cheap and trendy apparel industry, it also has ethical and envrionmental concerns. Low-wage workers face poor conditions, while textile waste, carbon emissions, and microplastic pollution continue to grow. Consumers struggle between affordability and ethical concerns, but systemic change remains difficult in an industry driven by speed and disposability. Ultimately, society must find a balance between the desire for trends and the urgent need for sustainability.

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[내 질문]

1. 내 summary가 topic sentence, supporting details, concluding sentence를 잘 포함하고 있는지, relevant한지 판단해줘.

2. 내 summary가 main idea를 잘 잡고 있는지 판단해줘.

3. 너의 판단을 토대로 내 summary를 revise해줘.

[Chat GPT의 답변]

1. 평가 (Topic Sentence, Supporting Details, Concluding Sentence)

• Topic Sentence: Your topic sentence is clear but could be more precise. “Contrary to general belief, multitasking has a lot of challenges” is a good start, but it could better introduce the key idea that research challenges the assumed benefits of multitasking.

• Supporting Details: Your summary touches on two key points—reduced productivity in the workplace and negative effects on learning—but does not mention the dangers of multitasking while driving, which is another significant point in the original passage.

• Concluding Sentence: “It is time to focus to the one, not several.” This is a strong concluding idea but could be phrased more naturally. Also, it would be better if it tied back more clearly to the evidence presented in the summary.

2. Main Idea

Your summary captures the general idea that multitasking has more downsides than benefits. However, it does not fully reflect the original passage’s argument that multitasking was once believed to be beneficial but is now being challenged by research.

3. Revised Summary

Research increasingly challenges the belief that multitasking improves efficiency. Studies show that multitasking reduces workplace productivity, impairs problem-solving, and negatively affects learning by making information more fragmented and harder to recall. Additionally, multitasking while driving has been found to be so dangerous that some countries have made it illegal. Given these findings, it may be more effective to focus on one task at a time rather than attempting to do several simultaneously.

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Contrary to common belief, multitasking presents a lot of challenges. Multitasking not only derease productivity in workplace but also negatively influence how we learn. Given these findings, it may be more effective to focus on one task at a time rather than attempting to do several stimultaneously.

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At first, Chat GPT told me that my summary was concise but lacked depth and specific details. However, I preferred my own version because it was more concise rather than overly detailed. Still, conversation with Chat GPT was helpful for recognizing the importance of both accuracy and coherence in summarizing information.

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Although rapid growth of fast fashion has promoted trendy, affordable apparel industry, it also has ethical and envrionmental concerns. Low-wage workers face harsh conditions, while textile waste, carbon emissions, and microplastic pollution continue to grow. Consumers struggle between affordability and ethical concerns, but systemic change remains difficult in an industry driven by speed and disposability. Despite efforts by governments and advocacy groups to promote sustainability, the fundamental dilemma persists. Ultimately, society must find a balance between the desire for trends and the urgent need for sustainability.

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ChatGPT was very helpful in naturally refining awkward expressions, just like when it changed my phrase "cheap and trendy" to "trendy and affordable." To make the context flow more smoothly, I added the sentence: "Despite efforts by governments and advocacy groups to promote sustainability, the fundamental dilemma persists."

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ChatGPT - Time Management Summary Feedback

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Effective time management is crucial for success. Procrastination, an inability to prioritize tasks efficiently, and modern distraction all contribute to poor time management, which ultimately reduces overall performance in academic and professional settings. However, hopefully there are some strategies to improve this problem. First, you should set clear and realistic goals. Also, it is a good way to break larger tasks into smaller ones. Lastly, it is important to limit distractions. Using these strategies, you can achieve greater success.

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To use your time wisely, you should manage your time effectively. Poor time management which is caused by procrastination, inability to prioritize tasks efficiently, and modern distractions can reduce overall performance in both academic and professional environments. There are some strategies to improve this problem. First, you should set a clear and realistic goals. Also, it is good way to break larger tasks into smaller. Lastly, it is important to limit distractions. Using these strategies, you can achieve greater success.

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First, I initially thought the version of Chat GPT was too short, but it helped make the sentences in my summary much smoother.

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To maintain healthy balance of both body and mind, it is necessary to take a rest from being busy. Pushing yourself nonstop can weaken your bonds with friends and family. True well-being begins when we learn to pause.

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A conversational AI system that listens, learns, and challenges

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It is necessary to take a rest from being busy. Pushing yourself nonstop can weaken your bonds with friends and family. True well-being begins when you allow yourself to rest.

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Through revising my summary, I learned the importance of clarity and tone. By removing redundant words and changing “learn to pause” to “allow yourself to rest,” the message became more personal and comforting. This process helped me understand how small changes can improve both readability and emotional impact.