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A greater focus on the effects of the features used,
on the audience

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not forgetting any of the following: evidence, explanation, interpretation

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Identifying features used by the author to achieve certain effects

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Criterion B, organisation, thesis statement and formal language

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𝙈𝙮 𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙥𝙤𝙣𝙨𝙚 𝙡𝙖𝙘𝙠𝙚𝙙 𝙨

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𝙈𝙮 𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙥𝙤𝙣𝙨𝙚 𝙡𝙖𝙘𝙠𝙚𝙙 𝙨𝙤𝙢𝙚 𝙥𝙤𝙞𝙣𝙩𝙨 𝙤𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙚𝙛𝙛𝙚𝙘𝙩 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙛𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙚𝙨 𝙪𝙨𝙚𝙙 𝙤𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙖𝙪𝙙𝙞𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙚 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙪𝙧𝙥𝙤𝙨𝙚 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙩𝙚𝙭𝙩 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙨𝙤𝙡𝙫𝙚𝙙 𝙧𝙚𝙨𝙥𝙤𝙣𝙨𝙚 𝙝𝙖𝙙 𝙛𝙤𝙘𝙪𝙨𝙚𝙙 𝙢𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙤𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙨𝙚 𝙥𝙤𝙞𝙣𝙩𝙨 𝙖𝙡𝙤𝙣𝙜 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙞𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙥𝙧𝙚𝙩𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣𝙨

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𝙀𝙛𝙛𝙚𝙘𝙩 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙛𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙪𝙧

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𝙀𝙛𝙛𝙚𝙘𝙩 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙛𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙚𝙨 𝙪𝙨𝙚𝙙 𝙤𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙖𝙪𝙙𝙞𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙚 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙝𝙤𝙬 𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙮 𝙝𝙚𝙡𝙥𝙚𝙙 𝙥𝙤𝙩𝙧𝙖𝙮 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙥𝙪𝙧𝙥𝙤𝙨𝙚 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙩𝙚𝙭𝙩

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𝘾𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝘽- 𝙄𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙥𝙧

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𝘾𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝘽- 𝙄𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙥𝙧𝙚𝙩𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣 𝙤𝙛 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙛𝙚𝙖𝙩𝙪𝙧𝙚𝙨 𝙪𝙨𝙚𝙙 𝙞𝙣 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙩𝙚𝙭𝙩. 𝘼 𝙢𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙛𝙤𝙘𝙪𝙨𝙚𝙙 𝙤𝙥𝙚𝙣𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙘𝙤𝙣𝙘𝙡𝙪𝙙𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙥𝙖𝙧𝙖𝙜𝙧𝙖𝙥𝙝𝙨

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𝙏𝙤 𝙬𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙚 𝙢𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙙𝙚𝙩𝙖𝙞𝙡

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𝙏𝙤 𝙬𝙧𝙞𝙩𝙚 𝙢𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙙𝙚𝙩𝙖𝙞𝙡𝙚𝙙 𝙞𝙣𝙩𝙚𝙧𝙥𝙧𝙚𝙩𝙖𝙩𝙞𝙤𝙣𝙨 𝙬𝙞𝙩𝙝 𝙖𝙥𝙥𝙧𝙤𝙥𝙧𝙞𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙚𝙫𝙞𝙙𝙚𝙣𝙘𝙚𝙨.

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I should make use of inferences rather than summarising the text .More Quotations should be used to support my interpretation

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Identifying features and choices made by writer can enhance my work and make it more impact full.

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My response was more descriptive and wasn't linked well with the question and it lacked coherence whereas and the solved response linked to the question and interpreted well. Quotations also linked the interpretation.

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Criterion B , Exploring why a certain event or quotation may be important and its impact on the audience.

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I should link my evidences and interpretations with the question and show coherence in it and make it less descriptive.

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to understand the text well and how it is reflecting writer's point of view and the way it is conveyed through the text

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Interpretation, using appropriate quotes from the text, understanding what the writer has portrayed in the text, coherence

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Quotations are linked to the interpretations which gives audience a better understanding and a 'bigger picture'

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The sample had coherence in its structure and form and the way it gives evidence and interpretations with explicit references to the text. I could understand their interpretation from start to finish because it had precision and clarity.

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I need to make clear and lucid links between my evidence and interpretation of the text. Less description, more interpretation.

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I'd focus on my thesis statement and making sure I'm not repeating the same points over and over again. I need to work on identifying and describing features from the text and providing concrete evidence with quotations that supplement my thesis statement and argument.

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Making sure I read the text thoroughly enough to understand the writer's use of certain features to create an effect on the audience, the context which helps to achieve this effect and how they use these features to convey their perspective through the text.

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The structure of it was more organized and used more literary terms. It provided more evidence and more clearly interpretations.