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From: They were malnourished and starving.
To: Like an abandoned dog; they were malnourished and starving.

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From: On  a plane to  Ireland  I heard some one saying to themselves.

To: Sleepily on the plane to dc I noticed a strange man whispering to him self saying now what do I need? oh sunblock

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From: I ran to get food.
To: As fast as a cheetah diving throw the crowd I snatch my food of the shelf.

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From: The plane lifted off the runway.

To: When the plane slowly lifted, I was sweating like running in a Cross Country race.

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From: Umm my money back it's been taken every single cent,wait no there's 2$.
To: I'm hopeful that I will get my money back, because its taken every single cent.

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From: ¨The flood is getting worse so you need to be ready for an evacuation¨

To: ¨Suddenly the flood has got worse so,you need to be ready for an immediate evacuation¨

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From: Some voices echo through the ruins I sprint to the hiding spot

To :Deep voices echoing; they were coming this way, I sprint past the rubble and jump into the hole.

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From: When I woke up this morning I was absolutely bored

To: As I gradually woke up this morning, the first feeling I had was boredom.

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From: It is my first game of the season
To:  Happily, I said, "It is my first game on the season."

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From The witch flew down on her broomstick.

To: Faster than a cheetah, the witch flew down on her broomstick.

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From: Mum and Dad closed the door and trudged down the driveway.

To: As I quickly ran down the stairs, Mum and Dad closed the door, and trudged down the driveway.

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From:  I just need to grab it, put it in my basket then go to the checkout.

To:  Snatching it from the shelf; I chucked it in my basket and rushed to the checkout.

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From: I packed all my stuff to go, camping with Norman.

To: Gathering every piece of equipment, to camp in the wilderness with Norman.

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From:  The sun reflecting on my phone;making me lose my concentration.

To: Around about noon, the blinding sun is reflecting on my phone; making me lose my concentration

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From: We got to the camping ground and set up.
To: Cheerfully , we got to the camping ground and set up.

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From: Bertie dug a hole.

To: Carefully, Bertie dug a deep hole.