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Using Studiosity for Feedback and Skill Development

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Using Studiosity for Feedback and Skill Development

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During my placement, I used the Studiosity service at La Trobe University to receive feedback on my report. The feedback highlighted areas such as paragraph structure, language, grammar, and the use of cohesive devices. Specifically, it provided recommendations to avoid short paragraphs, enhance paragraph cohesion, and use more formal academic language.

This evidence demonstrates my proactive approach to improving my academic writing and communication skills. By integrating the feedback from Studiosity, I refined my report, ensuring that my paragraphs were cohesive, structured, and aligned with academic standards. This process helped me build confidence in producing professional reports and strengthened my ability to communicate complex ideas clearly.

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Participating in the Industry Mentoring Program

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Participating in the Industry Mentoring Program

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As part of my professional development during the placement, I joined the Industry Mentoring Program at La Trobe University. This program connected me with an industry professional who provided guidance on career planning, navigating the job market, and developing key skills needed in my field.

This evidence demonstrates my commitment to career development and seeking mentorship. Through regular meetings with my mentor, I gained valuable insights into industry expectations, refined my career goals, and received advice on enhancing my skills for future opportunities. This experience was instrumental in shaping my professional path and building my confidence in career planning.

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During our placement, my team used OneDrive to manage and organize all project files, documents, and collaboration efforts. We stored reports, project plans, and meeting notes on OneDrive, ensuring that all team members had real-time access to the most up-to-date versions.

This evidence shows our use of OneDrive as a collaborative tool for effective project management. By centralizing our files, we were able to streamline communication, maintain version control, and ensure that the team was aligned on project tasks. This experience enhanced my skills in digital collaboration and file management, which are crucial for efficient teamwork in professional environments.