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i need to rewrite my intro paragraph and fix up the last 2 body paragraphs.

i plan to at least rewrite my intro paragraph today and figure out what i plan to fix/write to make the last 2 body paragraphs better.

UPDATE: I rewrote my intro paragraph and added my summary paragraph. Now I'm working on rewriting my body paragraphs and switching out the quotes from the old ones to my new ones.

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continue to work on going more into depth on my rhetorical analysis and doing some proof reading. I think i need to rewrite one of my explanation in one of my body paragraphs.

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I have to condense my summary, and rewrite my rhetorical analysis paragraphs.

Today, I will be rewriting as much of my rhetorical analysis as I can, at least 1-2 paragraphs. Being more specific about my evidence and portraying it in a clear way.

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condense summary paragraph

add quotes to body paragraphs

2. Today I plan on making my summary paragraph shorter

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I need to rewrite my third and second paragraph and expand more on my first paragraph. But today im work on expanding more on my first. when it comes to the quote.

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I need to rewrite my intro paragraph and i need to fix my body paragraphs. I plan on fixing my intro paragraph and hopefully fixing at least one of my body paragraphs.

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I need to integrate more quotes into my body paragraphs and make clearer what Rhetorical Strategies I'm using.

My goal for today is to make clear what rhetorical strategy i'm using and integrate at least one quote into two body paragraphs.

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I have to rewrite my summary and finish reviseing my Rhetorical & Critical Analysis

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Make my intro more performative

Condense part of my summary of text paragraph

integrate the quotes

I made my intro more performative and elaborated where I needed to

Condensed and rewritten part of my summary of text paragraph

Elaborated in my intro to rhetorical analysis paragraph, and 1st rhetorical analysis paragraph

Fixed some grammar problems

Integrated quotes into my 1st and 2nd rhetorical analysis paragraphs

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First Half:

First, I have to rewrite my third Rhetorical technique paragraph. Second, I would have to add more additional details into all my paragraphs.

Second Half:

I finished rewriting my third paragraph with explain Juxtaposition and still working on adding more examples. I also made additional details throughout my essay and will continue doing so.

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I need to rewrite my summary and focus on making my body paragraphs.

Today I will be focusing on rewriting my summary and writing my paragraphs.

In class today I fixed up my summary by focusing more on the main ideas and deleting more specific details that I may be able to add later on. I was also looking for more quotes to add in my paragraphs.

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I need to create a title that appropriately fits my essay and finalize my edits.

Today, I will create a fitting title and rewrite/revise some of my paragraphs (2-3).

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My goals for today were to have a discussion with Dr. Sulzman and then revise and make edits to my drafts based on the feedback I receive. An thats exactly what I did, right now Im focusing more on finding good examples for each body paragraph before I incorporate into my essay.