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(summary) Multitasking, which is emerged concept of doing many things at the same time with new technologies, had been considered to be useful strategy for increasing productivity in many areas for decades. According to the recent research, however, it turned out that there’s some problems at multitasking such as distraction or low productivity that may cause fatal outcome at times. Therefore we need to reconsider its pros and cons.

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reflection : chat gpt에게 단어의 뉘앙스에 따라 다른 표현을 사용하라는 위주의 피드백을 받았는데 도움이 많이 됐습니다 ex) bribe>lure, destruction>damage

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(Before) Green spaces are considered to be imperative in city in that they can help the citizens in a good health and spirit. However, inequality of such infrastructure and benefits from it might be caused by income inequality. So urban planners are facing the task of preventing the discrimination.

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Green spaces are crucial in urban areas as they help citizens maintain good health and improve their well-being. However, inequality in access to these spaces may arise from income disparities. Urban planners face the challenge of addressing this inequality to ensure equal access for all.

Reflection : 불필요한 수동태나 부정문을 쓰기 전에 그 뜻을 가지고 있는 단어를 사용해서 최대한 문장을 간결하게 만들어야겠다는 생각을 했습니다

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(before) Nowadays many people have trouble in focusing and prioritizing their work. Among the obstacles which prevent us from good work are our a lack of disciplined mind and distracting environment. So we can use strategy accordingly in order to get over the procrastination including setting clear and realistic goals and creating a schedule.

(after) Nowadays, many people struggle to focus and prioritize their work due to a lack of discipline and a distracting environment. Modern distractions such as social media and instant messaging make it even harder to stay productive. To overcome procrastination, we can use strategies such as setting clear and realistic goals, breaking tasks into smaller steps, creating a structured schedule, and minimizing distractions by turning off notifications or working in a quiet space.