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This is the original draft along with the revision notes in red.

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Nolan McCarty-ENG. 1150-Funniest Thing-Draft 1

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COMPARATIVE ANALYSIS DUNBAR, SMITH, and ROBINSON

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COMPARATIVE ANALYSIS DUNBAR, SMITH, and ROBINSON

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Whereas you are leaving a letter to future students in the first module, this part is just between you and I. You can just do this in a post. Who were you when you got here? Where and who are you now?

What worked for you in the course? What could have been better (be gentle... I'm human). This spot is just our conversation. Also, upload your dog or critter pics for extra credit.

Don't have a pet? Upload what you consider your spirit animal.

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When I finally talked to my advisor and told her I wanted to go forward with my education I was terrified. I haven't written a paper, read a book, or taken notes in a long time. I truthfully have no complaints or critiques when it comes to your class. I thoroughly enjoyed it and felt comfortable on day one, that is all thanks to you. You created a classroom environment I hadn't experienced before. I wish I had been more involved, and I do apologize for my lack of involvement in the DBs and such. Thank you for helping me feel appreciated and look forward to pursuing my education again :).

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As you'll see later in the Grok revisions, I fumbled and forgot to utilize 3 unreliable sources in my original draft. I was so caught up in researching that I completely skipped over it. Entirely my fault, but I've always lived by the idea that it's always better to ask for forgiveness rather than permission. I felt that it would be better for me to just own up to my mistake rather than try to play it off as if it didn't happen.

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Nolan McCarty-ENG 1150-First Official Draft (1)

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ENGLISH PROF REN-Comparative Analysis Dunbar, Robinson and Smith

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This one was a bit trickier. Grok had pointed some things out within the assignment sheet that I had looked over. This led to it essentially re-writing my entire essay in the incorrect format. After some fumbling around I managed to convince it to re-write sections of the essay to correct the instructions I had missed. As much I want to curse Grok I also need to curse myself for not reading instructions properly.

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ENG 1150 Nolan McCarty - MOST RIDICULOUS FINAL DRAFT - Prof Ren Davis.

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ENG 1150 Nolan McCarty - COUNTERARGUMENT DRAFT 1 - Prof Ren Davis.

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ENG 1150 Nolan McCarty - REFUTATION DRAFT 1 - Prof Ren Davis.

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This revision with Grok went surprisingly well! I utilized it to help me fix the tone of the story and trimmed some of the fat that seemed useless upon the revision.