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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast food. Many people think that it is good to eat traditional foods and that is my point of view too. Traditional foods is good for your health, its healthy and balance also eat traditional foods can show your love to your country, your home town. Although make a traditional disk is kind of hard, difficult and must have a long time to make but it will bring the feeling where you born and grow up, it made you comfortable and relax. Like Banh Mi, Pho or Hu Tieu is one of the traditional food in VN that we eat for every day. Some of the people such as teenager love to eat fast food like chicken, French fries or hamburger in Mac Donals, KFC. It's the good choice for those who work late or who are business but I don't think it is good for your mental health and you will get sick too if you eat fast food every day. Fast food make you fat and it can make has a heart attack cause fast food has a lot of sugar. In my opinion people should pay more attention for their traditional foods more than fast food because it can show good tradition and the other country can know more about the culture and the lifestyle.

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Nowadays, many people in different countries prefer fast food to traditional food. Which have a huge adverse effect on family. Firstly, it will create a gap between generations in the family when younger generations don't have a meal with their family this opposed against the tradition of the orientations. Secondly, fast food will make the traditional food disappear one day because when people like fast food they probably not willing to learn the cooking formula any more due to the fact that fast food is more convenient and have a delicious taste.

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In the industrialism society, the exchange internationally in many major is one of the best way to become directly a global citizens. In many countries, the exchange in cultural has operated very strongly, especially food. Some opinion said that it is good to eat traditional foods while others believe that fast food is good choice. We can’t put the boundaries in the thinking of anyone but we can at least analyze both two opinions.

In the first opinion, the traditional food of a country may represent the culture of them. People in the area was used the traditional as long as they made it and used it till now. The clearly example is, the most popular way to make foods at the moment is to grill the meet because in the long time ago, people have found the fire and the first way to cook was grill the meet. So that example reflect that something sourrounding could show the other know the image of the people in that country daily life or the long historical development.

As I told in the beginning of the essays, we are in the industrialism society, everthing from enviroment to human moving fastly. The fastfood is the image show that the way to save time. In my opinion, fast food is not the kind of food that we can named but it is the image reflected the culture of the developed countries, especially the United States. The consumption of fast food that mean the other countries culturals have usage in the other countries. But in some case, the fast food bring people a conveniece, save time. Besdies it lead to a big trouble was lazinism. In the macro scenery, it lead to the polluted of the environment cause the increse of plastic comsumption. Fast foods are fundamentally different to the home-made food. Fast foods is the smaller field than traditional foods. The traditional foods can be including the fast food because fast food could be the cultural food of some countries, especially U.S.

In my point of view, I think that the questions must be clearly to ask. What is both of these food good for? If you want to talk about the exchang international when you use fast food you have tried the another cultural too. That bring us the new experiences, knowledge about the the culture actually. When we living in the developing world, protect the cultural of your country is one of the most important missions, especially in the younger generation. As the speech of the Pre-Leader of Vietnam Communist Party – Nguyen Phu Trong said:” Protect the culture is save the country” (Nguyên văn là: Văn hóa còn thì dân tộc còn). Traditional foods usage not just reflect the image of the contry, in some case can introducing the beautiful imagine of the country. The traditional foods should be suitable for the original people in the country so it may good for them health.

To summary, both of two kinds of foods have a different, various properties, that have the advantage and disadvantages too. To answer which one was better it depends on the people who use the food. More directly way to answer that depends on the situation. In some case, we not only need to open-minded to take the new experience but also introducing your own country foods. Sometime it depend on the demanded of the consumers. If I was chosen, I will chose the traditional foods instead of the fastfood and I will bring it for friends in all over the world to try Vietnamses foods. Studying, exchanging nonstop but not lost own cultures.

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In contemporary society, the opinion in replacement of traditional foods for international junk foods has become a widespread debate and discussion. While many assume that traditional foods consumption is far more beneficial than absorbing fast foods. This essay will provide a deeper analysis of these points and give my own opinion.

Granted, it is understandable whyhaving fast foods in your daily meal is favorable in terms of convenience and waste of time avoidance. This is because junk foods are often readily prepared for consumers, which minimize the amount of waiting time for whom are busy. For example, a chairman who deals with huge workload, would turn to fast foods in order for remaining times for meetings and figuring out potential solutions for his firm. However, scientific research has shown that excessive consumption of junk foods can lead to obesity and tiredness, posing a threat to productivity and efficiency in work. Furthermore, junk foods would gradually lessen one's longevity, resulting in negative influence in future. Thus, eating fast foods may not be a good choice for busybodies in terms of mental and physical health.

As for consuming traditional food, many believe this would bring about healthy state for everybody. One plausible expalnation for this is in the past, junk foods were considered obscure to our antecedents, so they enjoyed traditional meals, which significantly lengthen their life expectancy and let them free from any diseases. As demonstrated by the case of one 96 years old man who admitted that having traditional meals on a daily basis is wholesome for his health. As a result, having conventional meals is a dependable solution to prevent attacking diseases and stay healthy. Therefore, I absolutely advocate the opinion of having traditional foods everyday.

In conclusion, while having junk foods is a more convenient way and time-saving solution, traditional foods are far more better for encountering and preventing dangerous diseases. In my opinion, I prefer having traditional meals as a way to prevent oncoming disease and lengthen longevity.

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1. Original: "The graph shows the change in the prices of three metals: Copper, Nickel and Zinc every month decline 2014"

Correction: "The graph shows the monthly changes in the prices of three metals: Copper, Nickel, and Zinc since 2014."

2. Original: "Next, from July to September, these metals remain stable."

Correction: "Next, from July to September, the prices of these metals remain stable."

3. Original: "Finally, Both Zinc and Copper increase steadily from October to December, Nickel also goes up but it is stable from November to December."

Correction: "Finally, both Zinc and Copper increase steadily from October to December; Nickel also rises but remains stable from November to December."

Luyện viết nhanh hơn xíu để hoàn thành kịp thời gian nha T

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The changed in of copper, nickel and zinc in 2014

Was very big because the nickel at the top at first but later then it going down really quick and fall down to the bottom in 6 months. But after that nickel going up at - 3% to - 1% and at last it going to 1%. About copper had a couple falling in 2014 but at the end of year it just reduce a little bit. Last one is zinc has nothing change much for a year. Change in the prices of three medals during 2014 is all reduce and didn’t go up so much

1. Nên bổ sung thêm số liệu và chi tiết

2. Câu này sửa thành: "The changed in of copper, nickel and zinc in 2014"----> "The changes in the prices of copper, nickel, and zinc in 2014."

3. "Going down really quick" ---> "declined rapidly."

4. "Fall down to the bottom" is informal ---> "reached its lowest point."

5. "nothing change much"- ---> "remained relatively stable.">

6. Ensure subject-verb agreement: "nickel going up" ---- > "nickel went up."

7. Correct tense usage: "had a couple falling" ---> "experienced a few declines."

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What would i prepare for this

1. Respones focuses

2. The meaning is generally complex/strictures are not maked by the same level

3. Use some good effect but within cohesion

4. Examples of more complex/ wider range of vocabulary use but higher

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Band:7

What would I prepare for this ?

The response covers the requirements of the task

information and ideas are logically

• There are only few errors in spelling or word formation

• paragraphing to support overall Coherence

• use less common or idiomatic items

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What would I prepare for this?

Task achievement: a relevant overview needs to be attempted and the purpose is clear

Grammar: need to mix simple and complex sentence forms more

Lexical resource: choose many higher and appropriate words

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Band: 6.5

use appropriate grammar and vocabulary

try to complete the overview better

learn more vocalbulary

write more cohesive sentences

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Try to learn the basics

Use the correct tenses and write as few mistakes as possible

Self-study more

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Criteria:

1. Task achievement: done (I can solve

2. Coherence & Cohesion: practice uaing linking words naturally and flexibly

3. Lexical resources: Consult other essay and extract necessary vocabs + absorb vocabs usage in each context

4. Grammatical range and accuracy: Have a deeper understanding of complex sentences , concetrate on tenses

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Try to write a good overview, follow the task consstruction

Learn how to organize my ideas logically, make a fast outline before writing

Use the correct grammar and minimize mistakes in grammar, making sentences; use linking words,....

Use many different words, paraphrase,....

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The traditional vehicle in future like buses, cars and trucks will be replaced by driverless vehicle. And the passengers is the only one travelling inside these vehicles. I think the benefits of large driverless vehicles will outweigh the disadvantages that traditional vehicles bring

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These days, fast food has devasting effects on individuals' lives. Firstly, junk food may damage their health. Furthermore, the home-made food can be lost gradually due to consuming fast food a lot.

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These days, fast food has devasting effects on individuals' lives. Firstly, junk food may damage their health. Furthermore, the home-made food can be lost gradually due to consuming fast food a lot.

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There is one primary concern to individuals in case they overuse fast food, particularly, health risks. This can be explained by instant meals often include preserving chemicals and high level of culinary oil, believed to result in obesity and digestive disorder. One plausible example for this is the case of a-nine-year old boy who had consumed much fast food, diagnosed to suffer numerous serious diseases, such as heart-attack or stroke, threatening his life. Thus, excessive consumption of instant meals can lead to unexpected results, posing a threat to health conditions.

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In many countries traditional food is replaced with international food, does this have adverse effect on families?

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In many countries traditional food is replaced with international food, does this have adverse effect on families?

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Nowadays, in this new generation, fast food is more prefer than traditional food. Therefore, our traditional will be disapeared soon. Many people believe that the implications of this change are negative for families, people and the community.

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At the presont, traditional food is replaced by fast food adverse effect on individuals. Fast food has a great impact on personal health and is a cause of many heart disease. Moerover, eat too much fast food, the body not well developed and unbalanced.

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Eating fast food instead of traditional food can cause many serious problems to every single person. First of all, this can effect consumer's health as fast food contains a lot of fat and calories. Therefore, it will lead to obesity and some other diseases. Secondly, people will waste lots of their money if they eat fast food frequently because buying these food is more expensive than home cooked meals.

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The line graph illustrates monthly changes in the prices of 3 metals on average in 2014. (ĐƠN VỊ ĐO??)

Refined:

The line graph illustrates the average monthly percentage change in the prices of copper, nickel, and zinc throughout 2014.

Overall, it is perceptible that Nickel prices took the lead in the beginning, however, it witnessed fluctuation during the period of the year and then declined. On the contrary, although the cost of copper and zinc were inferior to Nickel, their prices were subsequently adjusted and surpassed Nickel in the final phase. Notably, all 3 items shared fluctuations in the middle phase.

In detail, Regarding the starting prices of the Nickel and Copper, it is conspicuous that 6% of change in price of the former nearly trippled that of the latter. (Cô gợi ý đổi thành: nickel began with a 6% rise in January, nearly triple the increase seen in copper.) While the Nickel price experienced a dramatic decline to -3% in June, the proportion of Copper witnessed an insignificant fluctuation to around -0.5%. Subsequently, the prices change proportion of both Nickel and Copper increased and remained consistent from July to September, -1% and 1%, respectively. After which, 1% accounted for Nickel and 1.5% for Copper (Cô gợi ý đổi thành: By December, nickel had recovered to 1%, while copper rose to 1.5%.)

As for the proportion of monthly changes in price of Zinc, it began with 1% and grew to 3% in February, after which it dropped to exact -1% in June. Between July and September, it stayed consistent at -1%, before rising to 1% since November.

Band score: 6 to 7

Nên bổ sung thêm các từ nối: "in detail," "however," and "in contrast

Chú ý thêm cách dùng các từ: volatility," "plummeted," "stabilized," and "peaked."

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The shift from traditional food to international fast food often leads to heart disease, low nutrition and make you fat. This shift may gradually lead to the loss of national culture like unique local foods and practices. Moreover, fastfood often increases environmental harm through high levels of packaging and carbon emissions, unlike more eco friendly traditional dish.

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There are two negative impacts on families health conditions if they consume fast food excessively, particularly, health risks and self-care. There is one explanation for this is the over-reliance on fast food lead to a lack in cooking skills and harmful effects to health conditions, such as obesity, heart attack. As demonstrated by a case of one Indian family admitted that busy life does not allow them to enjoy home-cooked meals and now all family members have committed overweight. Seriously, their children can not cook themselves and turn to convenient malls for instant meals, which affect their independence. As a result, the overuse of fast food in family can lead to serious diseases in family and substantially hinder children self-reliance.

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The negative effects of international fast food to families are easy to recognize. By looking to the families 's asmosphere, the family's member don't have too much connection to each other. Besides, the effects also attack to their health's problems even worse.

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I am agree with that the traditional food is replaced by international fast food. The international fast food is favorable choice of many individuals, especially young generations; however, it is unhealthy and take a harmfully effect on your body’s function as it disarray the transformed triglycerides function of the digestive system. Furthermore, it isolated the family’s relation by makeshift the homemade food and incentive human to consume fast food instead of traditional home cooking.

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What would i prepare for this?

1. The content is relevant and accurate

2. Key features which are selected are covered and clearly highlighted

3. It presents a clear overview, the data are approriately, and main trends or differences are identified

4. The tone is consistent and appropriate to the task

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I absolutely agree with the adverse effects of international fast food’s occupation. The quality of the ingredients are not ensuring to your health. Result in rely on the convenient of junk food will make each individuals less reliable their own health conscious.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Due to the rapid development of technology, it is reasonable to claim that a wide range of vehicles will be autonomous in the near future. In my opinion, although this development raises certain safety concerns, the benefits in regard to reduced accidents and costs involved in traffic facilities make this development a change for the better.

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for instance, Tesla autopilots technology

has performed the ability in handling sophisticated air-maneuvering scenarios.

in the opposite, depending too much on technology raises concerns about system vulnerabilities and hacking

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It is often argued that all vehicles will become driveless in the future. This essay will eamine both the advantages and disadvantages. While autonomous vehicles have the potential to reduce traffic congestion, it is also important to consider about job losses in driving sectors. One significant advantage of driverless vehicles is the reduction in traffic accidents caused by human error. For instance, Tesla’s Autopilot system has demonstrated the ability to handle complex driving scenarios. However, the growing integration of technology into our lives raises alarms about system weaknesses and the likelihood of hacking attempts.

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It is said that means of transport will be turned into autonomous versions, which means including only passengers. While safety enhancement and a reduction of traffic congestion are key advantages, significant shortcomings are rising rates of unemployment and unexpected errors. This essay will provide a deeper analysis of these points.

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It is often argued that autonomous vehicles will be a boon to human life in the future. This essay will discuss both the pros and cons. However, I firmly believe that the benefits of self-driving technology outweigh the drawbacks.

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Submit the answers for Unit 5 Listening 

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The graph illustrates the information about the average monthly PERCENTAGE change in the prices of three metals during 2014. There are two bar represent to currency of the metal prices: The horizontal bar show the month that from January to December. The vertical bar shows the percentage of changing in price compared with the previous month, the vertical bar has  the currency from minus 4 to 7 by the upward way. (HẠN CHẾ DÙNG CỤM TỪ ĐƯỢC TÔ)

To analyze the graph, we need to isolate the graph into 5 parts equal to the month: first one from Jan to March, second one from March to May, the third parts equal to the May to July, fourth part from July to September and the last is from September to December. In part 1, while Nickel and Copper has downward trend, the Zinc has upward trend in February. In part 2, three metals has changing slowly and not excess 2 currency. Looking in part 3 , we can see it dramatically decreasing in June then all three metal has turned up in July. The percentage is unchanging in part 4, it stay steady from July to September. The last one was the most difficult part to analyze because in October, all of  three metal has go down but in the next month it go up again. From November to last year, it not go downward anymore. (GO DOWN = DECLINE)
Looking in the graph, the most unsteady metals Is nickel, from January the highest percentage change is Nickel, it higher than the previous month for 6 currency. Beside it the most go down in June.

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(I haven't finished it yet)

Chú ý cách dùng từ CURRENCY: CÓ THỂ THAY BẰNG PERCENTAGE HOẶC VARIATION

Nên dùng thêm các từ nối: "whereas," "followed by," and "overall"
Phần Looking in the graph - cần chi tiết hơn ===> In the third period

Tin từ đồng nghĩa của INCREASE / DECREASE

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At a first glance, we can see that there is a fluctuation in the graph while the tourists who remain on the island is decreasing, those who decide to remain on cruise ships have been increasing in recent years. But in the end the total number of tourists have gradually rise throughout the year.

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It is often argued that autonomous transportations will outweigh traditonal vehicles. This essay will examine both advantages and disadvantages.

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It is often argued that in the future, autonomous vehicles will outweigh traditional vehicles in term of benefits. This essay will focus on both the advantages and disvantages of the self-driving transportation.

While the driverless vehicles may enhace road safety, people should also be reminded that it can lead to potential job losses in the transportation sector.

One significant advantage of self-driving vehicles is it can lower the amount of traffic accidents caused by human neglectation .

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It is often argued that traditional vehicles will be replaced by autonomous vehicles in the future. This essay will examine both the advantages and disadvantages. I suppose the development of autonomous vehicles outweigh drawbacks.

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In the current time, self-driving technology are becoming increasingly common. It is often argued that autonomous vehicles quite comfortable to use and it is going to replace traditional vehicles. On the other hand, there still concern about many dangerous points of this kind of transports. This essay will examine the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of driverless vehicles.

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I believe that autonomous vehicles maybe safer because it works by sensor, camera, radar and Artificial Intelligence. One of the primary advantages of develop autonomous vehicles is reduce traffic congestion and reduction of human error. So, it help to reduce traffic accidents. Especially, autonomous vehicles helps to decrease toxic gases released into the environment and can navigate complex environments with ease.

However, the downside this is job. It can make losses in driving sector, especially the driver. Furthermore, it has a high cost.

To summarize, although driverless vehicle has many limitations, but it still technological achievements and open for revolutionize transport.

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Overall, the total number of tourists to the Caribbean island showed an upward trend. Although the figures for cruise ship passengers were dominant in the beginning and middle period, they were outstripped by that of visitors staying on the island in the final years. Notably, between 2015 and 2016, both categories reflected contrasting trends, leading to a consistent number in total of travelers.

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In 2017, the total number of tourists choosing to stay on cruise ships and islands experienced growth. In contrast, in 2016, staying on cruise ships was a more favored option than island accommodations.

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It is often argued that autonomous vehicles will be a boon to society in the future. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of this technology. However, I firmly believe that the benefits of autonomous technology significantly outweigh its drawbacks.

On the one hand, autonomous vehicles will lessen traffic accidents caused by human error. In contrast to human, machines are able to work for long periods of time without rest; therefore, some unwanted accidents happen because of careless driving or tiredness will be decreased. For instance, in Vietnam, the number of people dying from traffic accidents each year is always at an alarming level. Consequently, driverless vehicles will be the most efficient solution for this long-term problem.

In addition, autonomous vehicles have the potential to reduce traffic congestion. Each car is designed to have a separate route so they can avoid several crowded streets and cut down travel time. A friend of mine, for example, whose university is located in the suburds faces traffic jams everyday, then self-driving technology can solve this issue and help her move with ease. Since then, it can be seen that this advantage is the highlight for the development of driverless cars.

On the other hand, it is also important to consider the potential job losses in the transportation sector. When tradditional vehicles are replaced by autonomous ones, the need for employee will decrease which contributes to fierce competition in transportation industry. This competition can have negative effect to that industry and also the society.

In conclusion, the emergence of driver less cars is a turning point in the advancement of technology. Despite the potential for unemployment, the benefits they bring such as safety and reduction of traffic congestion are undeniable. Therefore, it is essential that autonomous vehicles should be given more concern and further developed.

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All visitors staying on cruise ships or island see increases during seven years. Although, the number of tourists on island are higher from 2010 but since mid 2015, tourists on cruise ships are higher.

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Overall, reality programs, which are predominantly watched by women, see a steady increase in interest as their viewers age. By contrast, the figures for audiences prefer game channels are almost identical for both genders. Moreover, game shows seem to captivate the youngest (16-24) and oldest (45+) more than other age groups, while the middle-aged cohorts show noticeably lower interest in these types of programs.

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Band: 7

What would I prepare for this?

Know the construction of the sentences (Type of sentences). Minimal to omissions or lapse the sentences. Skilfully selected the key features, presented the idea clearly.

Information and ideas are logical illustrated and gave the clear progression throughout the response. Wide rage of cohesive and flexiblely used.

Studied, prepared advanced vocabulary and idiomatic items. Used the resources flexibility and precision. Minimal to make mistake in word formation. Mixed the collocations and awareness style in the flexible and available way.

Used the variety complex structures, type of sentences more accuracy in flexibility ways. Control the grammar and punctuation. Try to minimal mistake in grammar.

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Overall, it is clear that the number of tourists visiting the island rose over the years, esspecially at the end of the period. To compare, more people preferred spending time on island rather than travelling on ocean liner before the middle of 2015 and vice versa at the later stage.

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An increase in a number of total tourists visiting a Caribbean Island despite fluctuation while the staying on cruise ships and staying on island have fluctuated. Initially, the number of visitors staying on island higher than the cruise ships counterparts but the cruise ship’s stay is increasing over the time and reach the higher than the other.

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Overall, it is clear that woman tend to watch reality shows more than man do while they watch slightly fewer game shows. On the other hand, the percentage of people over 45 years old is by far the highest in both television programmes.

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Granted, communication on virtual spaces can be addicted while ❌ spend - spending - much time on electronic devices. This can lead to ❌decrease ➡ the decrease of - face-to-face interaction and difficulty in building and maintaining relationships. Additionally, digital’s consumers may be accessed to inappropriate programs which can cause to loss of privacy such as leaking of privacy’s information, images even though the banking’s passcode by sending scam messages to users and cracking the cybersecurity. Echoing (con mới học đc từ này mà hong biết đúng hong có gì cô xem giúp con nha ạ), internet-based communication can also leak to cyberbullying, which can violate the mental health of consumers, and also contribute the negative effect to the social media.

On the other hand, network-based communication can expand reach even though global reach which allow to communicate in long distance by connecting to the Internet. Additionally, this can be able to greater accessibility in ❌oder ➡ order - that improved international relationships such as enhanced connectivity. That can also increased convenience to consumers for instance consumers are able to send the images, videos or even though the files to counterparts in a long-distance.

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By looking at the paragraph (Overall) the number of visitors staying on the island has been increased more than visitors staying on the cruise ships. but during 2016-2017 visitors staying on cruise ships have a big changed and surpassed the amount of visitors staying on the island But by 2016, cruise ship visitors exceed island visitors. Both categories contribute to the continuous growth in total visitor numbers over the period

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Generally, all the tourists visiting Caribbean island is increasing in the period from 2010 to 2017. While the number of visitors who stay on the island is becoming very common, the percentage of visitors staying on cruise ship to be by far the greatest growth.

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Overall, there was a significat upward trend in the total number of tourists during this period. While the number of visitors staying on cruise ships increased steadily, those stay on the island showed a slower growth and were eventually surpassed by cruise ship visitors.

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The two bar charts illustrate the percentages of people watching reality shows and game shows by gender and age group. Overall, women and older age groups dominate in viewership for reality shows, whereas game shows attract the highest proportion of viewers from the 45+ age group. Notably, females maintain higher interest in reality shows compared to males, while the 45+ group leads in both categories, particularly in game shows.

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Overall, it can be seen that more women than men watch reality shows, while the number of male and female audiences enjoying game shows is almost similar. On the other hand, the group of people aged over 45 enjoying reality and game shows is by far the most common.

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Generally, the percentage of those watching reality shows reach a peak in woman groups. In contrast, there are a rise in the portion of those who are more than 45 years old in game shows category.

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Generally, the number of younger people (16 – 24 years old) and the older people (over 45 years old) are unchanged in two type of the television shows but the 25 – 34 years old and 35 – 44 years old groups are dramatically decreasing about 20 to 28 percent from the reality show to the game shows. The number of over 45 years old group is high; however the percentage of female is the highest in the reality show. The percentage of male watching reality show take the lowest value but in the opposite televisision’s game show the difference between male and female percentage are nearly equal.

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Overall, number of viewers between male and female of game shows more balanced than reality shows. The number of reality shows viewer at age from 25 to 44 were higher than game shows viewer.

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The number of people who watch shows is increasing, especially the percentage female watch reality shows is the highest while those who watch game shows more is male.  People from 16-45 years old and up watch a lot of reality shows and in game shows people from 45+ years old also watch a lot but people from 16-44 years old have decreased much compared to reality shows.

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The tables illustrate the sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas of various countries between 1999 and 2004.

Overall, regarding coffee cohort, it is clearly observed that all countries presented an upward trend in profits, with UK taking the lead. Additionally, similar trend was seen in bananas table, except for Sweden and Denmark, experiencing a minor decrease.

Considering coffee profits, although Switzerland dominated the coffee market at the starting point, around 3 million euros, it was then outranked by UK with 20 million in 2004. Notably, before it surged to 20 million, the UK had secured the third-highest rank. Moreover the revenue from coffee of Belgium saw modest increase to 1.7 million. Conversely, Denmark and Sweden both shared minimal 0.2 million euros increase to 2 and 1, respectively.

In terms of bananas sales, the bananas' output of Switzerland appeared to be by far the most lucrative, soaring from 15 million in 2004 to a whooping 47 million. Similarly, UK and Belgium revenue increased slightly to 5.5 and 4 million euros, each. Apart from these nations, Sweden and Denmark experienced a decline to approximately 1 million in 2004.

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It is proposed that qualified athletes set a good examples for young generations. While others think that their both on and off attitute have adverse influences on teenagers, I strongly argue that the youth can be more inspired by them.

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Considering Banaba, Switzerland was the most profitable in 1999, yielding 15 million euros. However, in 2004, not only did they still dominate the market, but their revenue also soared, evidenced by the rise in their profit, which increase by 32 million euros compared to five years prior. In contrast, Denmark and Sweden witness a decline in revenue, But the UK experienced a huge leap in the total income from 1 to 5.5 million euros  between 1999 and 2004.

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In the world where sports are increasingly valued, athletes have more influence on the society. This development is being criticized by a section of the audience; however, having an athlete model brings many benefits. This essay will explore both aspects of this discussion and give reasons why I advocate the first point.

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There is a discussion surrounding the impact of professional athletes on young generation, it is considered that athletes are great role in motivating the youth with their hardworking and impressive passion. While there are some strong arguments against their behavior on and off the field have a bad influence on kids. This essay will offer a deeper analysis of these points and clarify why I advocate the previous clause in terms of diligence and enthusiasm.

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On one hand, it can not be denied that online communication might lead to poor communication skills. Firstly, less face-to-face interactions will be made if a person spends too much time using social media. As a result, several difficulties may happen when there is an opportunity to meet in person. Another proof that can be mentioned is the act of using inappropriate language in certain situation. For instance, we can easily encounter some sarcastic comments on celebrities posts although that they do not do anything wrong or cause enmity with others.

On the other hand, virtual spaces is also a good place to improve connectivity. For those who have long-distance friends or relatives, they can effortlessly keep in touch and chat with each other frequently.
A friend of my, for example, who is studying abroad has many problems when living in foreign land, then Facebook is the best place to express her feelings and share some experiences about that. Moreover, by communicating on the internet, users can build relationships with others all around the world. This may contribute to the development of a country through things such as cultural exchange.

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Professional athletes are often admired by young people for their success and talent. Some people think they are good role models, while others believe their actions on and off the field can be harmful. This essay explores two perspectives and my own opinion