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Fix punctuation
add more transitions

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Add more facts about your person
Get into deeper detail

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Double Space in the MLA format.
Instead of using their names every time change some to pronouns.

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Add sources at the bottom
Include in text citations in MLA format
Add last body paragraph and conclusion

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MLA format
Make sure thesis goes with the body paragraphs

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less opinions; more facts

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Don't say their name so much
Use 12 point font

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run on sentences
punctuation

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Blend paragraphs
Make sentences flow better

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MLA Heading
In text citations

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Blend quotes
Add transitions

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Run on sentences
MLA format
Add transition sentence
Make it a bit longer

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Make Longer
Describe more

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Transition Statements

MLA Format

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Run-on sentences
Incorrect MLA Format

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Run on sentences
Use Quotes