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Original sentences

sometimes I feel nervous when the atmosphere changes but ı try to find and alternative way to stay calm. my mood is severe bad of the weather is rainy and ı have to go outside

Grammar & Vocabulary Feedback

1. Capitalization:

“sometimes” → should be Sometimes at the beginning of a sentence.

“ı” → should be I (capital i).

“my” → should be My at the start of a sentence.

3. Spelling mistake:

“and alternative” → should be an alternative (because alternative starts with a vowel sound).

5. Punctuation:

You need a comma before “but” in the first sentence.

The two sentences should be separated with a period or connected properly.

7. Word choice:

“severe bad” is incorrect. Use very bad, extremely bad, or terrible.

“of the weather is rainy” → wrong word. It should be if the weather is rainy.

Corrected versions

✅ Basic correction:

Sometimes I feel nervous when the atmosphere changes, but I try to find an alternative way to stay calm. My mood is very bad if the weather is rainy and I have to go outside.

✅ More natural correction:

Sometimes I feel nervous when the atmosphere changes, but I try to find an alternative way to stay calm. My mood gets really bad if it’s rainy and I have to go outside.

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I think every weather easily affects people's mood. Some rainy days make nervous people and people faces represent their mood or emotional situtation. Wheather can change society or place's atmosphere quickly. You can take quiet severe injuries when storm and huricane. It's can quickly change people's mood.

Original:

I think every weather easily affects people’s mood.

• ❌ Error: “every weather” → incorrect. Use “the weather” or “all kinds of weather.”

• ✔️ “affects” → correct verb form.

• ✔️ “mood” is used correctly.

✅ Corrected:

I think the weather easily affects people’s mood.

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2.

Original:

Some rainy days make nervous people and people faces represent their mood or emotional situtation.

• ❌ Error: “make nervous people” → incorrect. Should be “make people nervous.”

• ❌ Error: “people faces” → should be “people’s faces.”

• ❌ Spelling: “situtation” → “situation.”

• ✔️ Keywords “nervous” and “represent” are used correctly but not in the right structure.

✅ Corrected:

Some rainy days make people nervous, and their faces represent their mood or emotional situation.

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3.

Original:

Wheather can change society or place’s atmosphere quickly.

• ❌ Spelling: “Wheather” → “Weather.”

• ❌ Grammar: “society or place’s atmosphere” → unnatural phrasing. Better: “the atmosphere of a society or place.”

• ✔️ “atmosphere” is used properly.

✅ Corrected:

Weather can quickly change the atmosphere of a society or place.

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4.

Original:

You can take quiet severe injuries when storm and huricane.

• ❌ Error: “quiet” → should be “quite.”

• ❌ Error: “take injuries” → incorrect. Use “get injuries” or “suffer injuries.”

• ❌ Error: “when storm and huricane” → should be “during a storm or hurricane.”

• ❌ Spelling: “huricane” → “hurricane.”

• ✔️ “severe” is used correctly after fixing.

✅ Corrected:

You can suffer quite severe injuries during a storm or hurricane.

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5.

Original:

It’s can quickly change people’s mood.

• ❌ Error: “It’s can” → incorrect. Should be “It can” or “It quickly changes.”

• ✔️ “mood” is used correctly.

✅ Corrected:

It can quickly change people’s mood.

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✅ Final Corrected Version (all together, smooth):

I think the weather easily affects people’s mood. Some rainy days make people nervous, and their faces represent their emotions. Weather can quickly change the atmosphere of a society or place. People can suffer quite severe injuries during a storm or hurricane. It can quickly change people’s mood.

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✅

Your Original Sentences:

People’s mood could be change from westher. for example if the weather was be raining that day some people can be joyful but some of them get nervous about the weather. The atmosphere could be change randomly so this can affect the peopel.

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Grammar and Vocabulary Feedback:

1. “could be change” → Incorrect verb form. Use “could change” or “could be changed”, depending on the voice.

2. “westher” → Spelling error. Should be “weather”.

3. “for example” → Needs capitalization (“For example,”) and a comma after it.

4. “was be raining” → Incorrect tense/structure. Should be “was raining” or “is raining”, depending on intended meaning.

5. “some people can be joyful” → “Can be” is awkward here. Try “some people feel joyful” or “some people might feel happy”.

6. “but some of them get nervous” → Verb tense inconsistency. Try “while others may feel nervous”.

7. “The atmosphere could be change randomly” → Same issue as before. Should be “could change randomly”.

8. “peopel” → Spelling error. Should be “people”.

9. Vocabulary Tip: “Atmosphere” and “weather” are not exactly the same. Use “weather” if you mean rain, sun, etc.

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Düzeltilmiş Hali (B1 seviyesine uygun)

Weather can affect people’s mood. Firstly, rainy weather sometimes makes people feel nervous, because it creates a sad atmosphere. Secondly, sunny days usually make people feel joyful and give them more energy. Finally, sudden changes in the weather can also affect people’s mood, because the atmosphere influences our body effectively. In conclusion, weather represents not just cold and warm, but also people’s feelings. My feedback paragraph is wrong part is change .

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Got it 👍 Let’s go sentence by sentence. I’ll check grammar, vocabulary, and target word usage (“randomly, nervous, represent, joyful, alternative, traditionally”) and then rewrite corrected versions.

Original Text (with comments):

1. "The weather changes people's mood. Because the atmosphere is very affect people's mind."

❌ "Because" can’t start the second sentence like this.

❌ "is very affect" → incorrect form ("affects").

Suggestion: Merge sentences.

✅ Corrected:
The weather changes people's mood because the atmosphere strongly affects their mind.

2. "If weather is clear, sunny; people even animals feel joyful, happy. (mostly)"

❌ "If weather is" → should be "If the weather is".

❌ Semicolon is misused.

✔ "joyful" and "happy" are correct words.

"(mostly)" is awkward.

✅ Corrected:
If the weather is clear and sunny, people—and even animals—mostly feel joyful and happy.

3. "If weather is close, dark, rainy mostly people feel uncomfortable, nervous."

❌ "If weather is" → should be "If the weather is".

❌ "close" is not natural here; maybe meant "cloudy" or "gloomy".

✔ "nervous" is okay but better paired with "anxious" or "uneasy".

✅ Corrected:
If the weather is cloudy, dark, and rainy, most people feel uncomfortable and nervous.

4. "I love this atmosphere but I wanna remain in bad."

❌ "remain in bad" is unclear. Probably meant: "I want to stay inside."

✔ "atmosphere" is fine here.

"wanna" is too informal.

✅ Corrected:
I love this atmosphere, but I prefer to stay indoors.

5. "Also when the rainy weather starts I feel sad because I have animals (a dog and a cat)."

Grammar is mostly okay but punctuation missing.

Vocabulary is correct.

✅ Corrected:
Also, when the rainy weather starts, I feel sad because I have animals (a dog and a cat).

6. "The animals get wet and they can be sick."

❌ "be sick" should be "get sick".

✅ Corrected:
The animals get wet and they can get sick.

Target Word Check:

joyful → ✔ Correctly used.

nervous → ✔ Used properly, though "anxious" is more natural.

atmosphere → ✔ Correctly used in context.

alternative, traditionally, randomly, represent → ❌ Not used in the text.

✅ Fully Revised Version (natural flow):

The weather changes people's mood because the atmosphere strongly affects their mind. If the weather is clear and sunny, people—and even animals—mostly feel joyful and happy. If the weather is cloudy, dark, and rainy, most people feel uncomfortable and nervous. I love this atmosphere, but I prefer to stay indoors. Also, when the rainy weather starts, I feel sad because I have animals (a dog and a cat). The animals get wet and they can get sick.

Would you like me to also add the unused target words (randomly, represent, traditionally, alternative) into this corrected text naturally so the whole assignment uses all of them?

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weather affect people’s mood so much. for example if the weather rainy generally people’s mood is nervous but if it’s sunny they might be joyful. if the air atmosphere is close people’s feeling is severe. so we can easily say that the weather’s different are represent people’s mood.

Sentence 1:

Original: weather affect people’s mood so much.

Feedback:

“Weather” should be capitalized at the start.

“Affect” should be “affects” (third-person singular).

“So much” is understandable but a bit informal; “a lot” or “significantly” might be better.

Corrected: Weather affects people’s mood a lot.

or Weather significantly affects people’s mood.

Sentence 2:

Original: for example if the weather rainy generally people’s mood is nervous but if it’s sunny they might be joyful.

Feedback:

Missing verb: “the weather is rainy.”

“Generally people’s mood is nervous” is unnatural; “people generally feel nervous” is smoother.

“Nervous” doesn’t fit well here. A better word might be “gloomy,” “irritable,” or “sad.”

Needs punctuation for clarity.

Corrected: For example, if the weather is rainy, people generally feel gloomy, but if it’s sunny, they might feel joyful.

Sentence 3:

Original: if the air atmosphere is close people’s feeling is severe.

Feedback:

“Air atmosphere” is redundant.

“Close” is incorrect here; you likely mean “stuffy,” “humid,” or “oppressive.”

“People’s feeling is severe” is ungrammatical. Better phrasing would be “people feel uncomfortable” or “tense.”

Corrected: If the atmosphere is stuffy, people often feel uncomfortable.

or If the air is humid, people may feel uneasy.

Sentence 4:

Original: so we can easily say that the weather’s different are represent people’s mood.

Feedback:

Should start with “So” capitalized.

“Weather’s different” is incorrect; you probably meant “weather differences” or “different kinds of weather.”

“Are represent” is ungrammatical. Should be “represent.”

Corrected: So we can easily say that different types of weather represent people’s moods.

✅ Final Corrected Version (smooth flow):

Weather significantly affects people’s mood. For example, if the weather is rainy, people generally feel gloomy, but if it’s sunny, they might feel joyful. If the atmosphere is stuffy, people often feel uncomfortable. So we can easily say that different types of weather represent people’s moods.

Would you like me to also highlight which of your target words (like “affect,” “atmosphere,” “nervous,” etc.) were correctly used and suggest better alternatives where they don’t quite fit?

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weather affects people’s mood.you can watch the news they represent the weather everyday.weather can be different in the chanel’s but you can watch the alternative chanel’s. weather can affect our feelings. for exp if the weather is dark and rainy you can feel nervous . the news can tell you you have to be careful in these weathers or you can severe.

Your text (with feedback):

1. “weather affects people’s mood.”

Feedback: “Weather” should be capitalized at the beginning. “Mood” is usually uncountable, so “people’s moods” is more natural.

✅ Corrected: “Weather affects people’s moods.”

3. “you can watch the news they represent the weather everyday.”

Feedback: This is a run-on sentence. “Represent” is not the best word; “report” or “show” works better. “Everyday” (adjective) should be “every day” (adverb).

✅ Corrected: “You can watch the news, and they report the weather every day.”

5. “weather can be different in the chanel’s but you can watch the alternative chanel’s.”

Feedback: “Weather can be different on different channels” is better. “Chanel’s” is a spelling mistake → should be “channels” (no apostrophe). “Alternative” sounds a bit odd here; “other channels” is simpler.

✅ Corrected: “The weather reports can be different on different channels, but you can watch other channels as well.”

7. “weather can affect our feelings.”

Feedback: Grammatically fine, just capitalize “Weather”.

✅ Corrected: “Weather can affect our feelings.”

9. “for exp if the weather is dark and rainy you can feel nervous .”

Feedback: “For exp” should be “For example”. Add commas for clarity. The space before the period should be removed.

✅ Corrected: “For example, if the weather is dark and rainy, you may feel nervous.”

11. “the news can tell you you have to be careful in these weathers or you can severe.”

Feedback: “These weathers” is incorrect → use “this kind of weather.” “You can severe” doesn’t make sense; maybe you meant “suffer” or “be in danger.”

✅ Corrected: “The news can tell you to be careful in this kind of weather, or you may suffer.”

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The weather changes people’s mood. When the weather is sunny, people gather and the atmosphere is good. Cold and severe weather is unpleasant, but I like cold weather. In sunny weather, people feel joyful.

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Here’s what you wrote:

“Yesterday we gathered with our friends in garden but the atmosphere was really severe glad that we have alternative plan. Our alternative plan get us a little nervous but it’s well.”

Feedback on grammar and vocabulary use:

1. gathered → Correctly used. But should be “gathered in the garden” (missing article “the”).

2. atmosphere → Used correctly, but the phrase “the atmosphere was really severe” is awkward. Better: “the atmosphere was quite severe” or “the weather created a severe atmosphere.”

3. severe → Correct word form, but the sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

4. alternative → Used correctly, but needs article: “an alternative plan.”

5. nervous → Used properly, but the sentence should be restructured: “made us a little nervous,” not “get us a little nervous.”

Other issues:

“glad that we have alternative plan” is incomplete and ungrammatical. Needs restructuring.

Verb tense inconsistency: “gathered” (past) but then “have” instead of “had.”

Awkward phrase “but it’s well” → better: “but it turned out fine.”