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One thing Brandon did well on was adding many detail to his story and actually using figurative language.

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Waking up to something you were sleeping to then everything is gone. Feel horrible as if losing your whole life you have no family and no friends. You never got the chance to tell them goodbye. You smell the fire flames that killed mostly everyone but you. Seeing your whole childhood being taken away. Not hearing to chating that your would hear every morning. You don't know what to do you are all alone and basically become homeless over night. Crying at how thankful your are to be alive yet also because you lost your loved ones. Not knowing what to do next.

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one day there was a time that i had a really hard time in an english work so i desided to rest a while but when i woke up  i woke up sweating and scared and had forgoten what  was doing untill i felt hungy that i could eat a horse so i went down stairs to ge something to eat and asked my momm but when i notice isaw my mom dead on the floor  so i steeped out side and whent to see how did this happen and when i notice i got so scared when i saw a guy outsid with a gun and there were alot of people dead so i felt like i was dead and not alive sice i had no one there my mom died what else could i do and i dont even know if my sister is ok or my brother so i called the police an hour ago and they never came

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Once upon a time there was this a little boy his name was John woke up from a terrible dream he dreamed this city was destroyed and he was the only one there. Then we went outside and he realize his dream came true. John heard complete silence in his city John felt sad but he realize having nobody is better because he has everything himself but, there was nothing just him and his house. John thought he wasn't going to survive on his own but he found a dog in the middle of the street laying down. John later found himself happy with his new buddy but the only problem that he had no one just his buddy.

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If a person were to wake up not knowing that the world has been destroyed would of been like a library being very quiet.If a person does not know then they would think it would be the same kind of day as any other kind of day.Until you open the front door and realize everything's different it has been destroyed.You thinking that its some kind of thing that is not real saying that its like a dream.But in reality this is actually happening the world had been destroyed.Also you questioning your self saying why didn't anyone tell me or warn me leaving you confused.This might give a person lots of questions on what happened.Also looking at half cars been destroyed or trees being burned off.This can make you feel scared thinking if you are the only person left in the world.You might be pinching yourself thinking its some sort of dream.This can make your surroundings very quiet just thinking to yourself like sort of in your dreams not talking just thinking what happened.

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He woke up one day and he looked everywhere for his family like a bear looking for food. He tried to keep calm yelling for his mom or dad. He looked every bit of his house, but he couldn't find anyone. He went outside to find a long line of people waiting to be led into a giant spacecraft. He was looking at everyone in line looking for his parents when he sees them at the front entering the spacecraft. He runs toward the spacecraft and hops in with his parents and was never to be seen again.

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The kid was waken widely like a acorn hit my head in a flash. All was damage, the land, the sea, the sky and even his heart. No one to talk to and no one to help, all was gone. The sky look like if aliens were attacking the earth. The smell of home spelled dead, dead like everyone in his world. The kid's crying left the past as a forbidden thought. The thing that made him forbid his past was his family. Family was like his very own treasure chest that he would never trade but this time it was different. War traded his own family for their very own destroyed future..

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I think people are going to feel unsafe if thing happen to this world because if the world destroyed once there going to feel unsafe. If the world would to end then people would be freaking out/ panic this is important to people because they could be ready/prepared if that  would to happen. This would happen if we don't take care of our world such as littering, and air pollution could affect the world in many ways. I can imagine if the world was to be destroyed I bet i would be disappointed because we live in it  and we affect our environment os it going to affect us to for not taking care of what is so valuable to us.

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If there was a person in a world that was destroyed and there was nothing left except their house. The person will feel lonely and will start feeling that their going crazy because they have no one to talk to and they will start thinking that their house and their furniture will be talking to them. The people will start thinking that their furniture are like people and the furniture will start talking toward the person. Later the person will start seeing illusions and they will feeling cold by no one being there. Later, the person will so mental that they will want to die and they will see that dying will let them be free.

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Waking up from my dreams, of a world beyond anyone's imagination, I come to realize, my dreams a reality. I open my eyes, and see blue skies. I see green trees, colorful flowers, and green leaves. The smell of the cool, fresh air, and feeling it between my hair. Feeling the cool sensation as it passes by me. I feel peace. I feel free. As I walk, no shoes on my feet, I feel the soft grass between my toes. Is this heaven? Who knows? The tree I go towards calls me. Like a guardian, watches over me. I feel no fear, and I sit near, the tree of my dreams, that protects me. There I start to lay, feeling comfort as I pray, that this place is more than a dream, that it's not heaven, but a reality as I start to fall asleep.

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One thing that Melody did well was put descriptive details about how your dream was so realistic and how you included sensory language.

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So one day may 15 2018 thats when the meteor hit tilted towers and more places  and most of the world was in danger because it had hit have of the earth and have of the earth is taking population and taking resources and i was scared because i thought that we where gonna die of food inequality but i was brave as a lion to go out and find survivors an help them because it would be sad to let them die so i stepped up and told my community if they wanted to help and some said yeah we would like to go because they didnt want people to die . so we went and found many survivors but we also found something strange and their where baby aliens so we rescued ho we could and ever since then we havent been the same since they took over.

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When I woke up one day I looked out of the window and I saw that the world has been destroyed all of the cars and houses are gone so I am the only one alive.So I went out to see if I was dreaming but no the world is actually destroyed.When I came back inside I saw a dog that is only out of bone no flesh no skin just bone.I this point I felt sick because I never say a dog made out of bone a few minutes have passed and this dog has been crying.I thought that it wanted to go out so I let it go.At this point and hour has past and I looked out side and the dog is dead it body started to blow away like leafs going on the wind.

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When waking up into the world of nothingness there he had a feeling of hopelessness. His life was gone and also his family. He woke after a coma that he was in for months. Now roaming the hospital looking for someone for help. But only silence is what he found. He walked out of the hospital but when he opened the door the light was so bright like if the sun were right with him. He went walking towards the streets finding a workable bicycle. Picking it up felt like lifting a bowling ball. Its been a long time he used that much strength. Finally he lifted it up and rode it to his house that he lived in a long time ago. He passed by a lot of houses but he went on to his where he lived with his family. For now on he lives by himself.

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If the world is destroyed when you wake up you will be shocked. You will only see people looking around. You will be confused and other people will be confused too because they would not know what to do. Also if the world gets destroy the houses will be destroyed to. Or if the world changed you might even change your daily life routine. For example like if you wake up and president says that your Mexican parents will go back to Mexico. That could be a change that could happen in the world specifically in the US. You will feel dead as a rock because you wouldn't even know how to feel.  You will also be smelling a bad smell if their is a war or something and you will breathe in smoke also.

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He woke up suddenly, as if he had only closed his eyes for a moment and opened them right after, even though he had slept through the night. His mouth felt fuzzy and he could taste a chemical smell as he breathed in quickly, realizing that there was something wrong. He stumbled out of bed, fumbling for the doorknob and slamming the door into the wall with a dull thud. From the hallway, he could see a bright lightening glow around his neighbor's house, casting shadows of the railing onto the stairs. It was morning, but the sky was pitch black except for the glow of the house across the street.