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Peer assed Aya
Good use of high level vocabulary.
Even better if you made more paragraphs.

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Lili is this better
Peer Assessed by Lili
WWW: Great use of high vocabulary!!!
EBI: You could've use some more personification and relative clause.

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Peer assessed by farida
WWW: He used a lot of emotive words and sentences
WWW: He wrote a lot of stuff that actually matches what is happening
EBI: To write more in task 2

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Peered assessed by Tara
You have managed to use great structure
You could have used more high level vocabulary

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Peer assesed by Ryan
Very nice presentation and good handwriting
Even better if you just included some more figurative language

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Peer assessed by sid
WWW- Good use of vocabulary
EBI- you should have used more emotive words

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peer assessed by lilian
WWW: You have included high level emotive words.
EBI: Used more figurative lauguage

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peer assessed by Rameen
WWW:I like that you used high vocabulary Like the adjectives and how she felt
EBI: maybe try adding a little more Figurative langue

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Lili

Per assessed by marten

Www:used some emotive words

Ebi,you write more figurative language and emotive word

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Peer assessed by Dhrivika
WWW : You have include high level emotive words
WWW : You have presented your work very neatly
EBI : You could have included emotive phrases .

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Assessed by Zayaan
Www:Good description about the storyline
Ebi:to add more effective emotive language

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Peer assessed by Ankrithi
WWW:You used great handwriting and metaphors.
EBI: You could have used more high level vocabulary.

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Task 1 and 2 for english
PA by Michelle
WWW: Your work is perfect you have included everything in it.
EBI: You had described more about her grandpa.

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Peer assessed by Naomi
WWW: The emotive words that you have used are high level.
EBI: Try including  more emotive words in your paragraphs