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WWW: I really like your story line and the idea of the doppelganger.
EBI: Maybe add a plot twist into it

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Good plot twist,
You could also think about soundtracks to further develop how sound elements can affect the audience :) well done!

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Interesting narrative that seems it would be entertaining and enjoyable to watch. What about adding a plot twist to bring the sense of the 'thriller' into the trailer?

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really like the theme of mental illness, and shows the serious affects of it and raises awareness. i like how you've explained how your trailer is going to look and you are well prepared. exciting and unique storyline too. maybe add flashbacks it help develop the character or narrative.

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WWW: Very interesting, fits your genre nicely, I cant wait to see it.
EBI: Maybe add in the plot twist that you originally planned, but otherwise, great concept

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WWW: I like the idea of the doppelgänger and I feel it will give you a lot of opportunity when creating posters. Like a series of posters like one for the doppelgänger and one for ruby so they are a series of posters which will attract more attention.
EBI:  As this is a thriller, maybe consider a plot twist within the outline. Otherwise this is good and I am excited to see this be made c:

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WWW: I like the idea of having this girls illness all inside of her head, it can keep the audience in suspense. It is a unique idea and I like your twist of the doppelganger

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WWW - I like the concept of how you're making a film trailer, whilst also trying to get across the fact that not all illnesses are visible.
EBI - Attempt to add in a plot twist into your narrative, what happens towards the end of the trailer? Consider adding enigma

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Unique and interesting narrative, Ruby realising that the doppelgänger is fake is unexpected which makes it interesting. To make it better you could stick with the original idea that you had planned because i think it sounds better.

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Justification of ideasrelating to genre and audience questionnaire and focus group information

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Justification of ideasrelating to genre and audience questionnaire and focus group information

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We have these ideas for our trailer, due to our surveys and target audience. We have decided to start our trailer slow, and gradually get faster, to follow the trailer conventions and create the tension that we want the audience to feel in our psychological thriller. We have decided to use more music than voiceovers, or dialogue from the footage, to create a dramatic atmosphere, and also because that is what has been voted for in our trailer survey.

Furthermore, we have also taken the survey results into consideration, to decide that only some of the plot in the trailer will be revealed to the audience in the trailer. This adds to the suspense in the trailer, whilst still allowing the audience to understand a little background of the character: who the character is and get them to question her mysterious persona.

Moreover, we will space out the information in the trailer, be able to make the words bigger in the frame, and also to allow the audience to take in the information easier. This will appear in the transitions, to have the audience intrigued to see the next shots in the trailer, and also know the companies that worked on it.

Unique selling points, such as the star marketing and the logline information, will also be mentioned in transitions, for the same purpose as the company names and title of the film.

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·      Camera

·      Tripod

·      Microphone/Sound Detector

·      School Building

·      Trains

·      Ruby/Doppelganger

·      Class of School Children

·      Costumes for the actors

·      Editing Software

·      Go Pro Camera

·      House

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Our idea for the trailer, we will show Ruby as a shy girl, which has had clear personal issues relating to family. We shall present her as isolated and untrusting, with people in her class who dislike her or find her strange. During the trailer we shall present her being on the train, and being on her way to school, and how she first discovers this doppelganger. After this, the pace of the trailer will gradually speed up, and music will get louder, to create a tense atmosphere.

Our concept is to make people aware that not all illnesses are visible; Ruby has a clear mental illness, which at the end of the film, is revealed that this ‘doppelganger’ was all in her head. This will get our audience thinking about her mental instability, and hopefully gets them to think about how they act to others with the same instabilities as Ruby.

For editing, we shall make sure that we have many fade to black, and fade from blacks, between our shots. This is to increase the suspense in our trailer, and as the speed will increase, so will the fading between shots. We shall also include the production and distribution names throughout the trailer, and perhaps leave the title at the end of the trailer; this is so that the last thing the audience sees is the title of the film, and will remember it easier. In addition, we will include the inspiring films from our logline into our trailer, to get our audience intrigued to watch it if they liked watching these films.