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In the story the narrator is explaining what is going on so it would be 3rd person view because the narrator is not in the story

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This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

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1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 

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1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 

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in my story the boy,the main character, is telling the story

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This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question.

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This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question.

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What are the universal human rights? - Benedetta Berti

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Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 

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Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 

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This society is unjust because people around the world have the right to choose their career most of the time and in the story the government is choosing the jobs for people,and they're choosing jobs that the people don't want and are miserable.

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What do you have to do for this assignment?

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2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 

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2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 

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My story takes place in a town surrounded by walls being isolated to everything around them and are convinced to believe that everything around them is bad,

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How to recognize a dystopia - Alex Gendler

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The characters in the story are Neema Theo and the government

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Student Model for the Writing Prompt

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3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 

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3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 

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My first character is Arwin Ackerman
- he is very shy and not very outgoing
- He's best friends with Eric
- He is currently 12 and soon to be 13
My other character is Eric yeager
- unlike Arwin he is very outgoing
- he isn the brightest person
- Him and Arwin have the same birthday and are both turning 13
The deciders
- control who has to go out
- enforce the rules

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People are being assigned jobs that they don't want

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How will you be graded for this writing?

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4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 

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4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 

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The society is forced to send out three teams that consist of 7 people. The deciders are the ones who choose who goes outside the wall. The way they choose is by test, twice a year,in the beginning and end, 13-17 year olds must take a test and depending on what they score they are either safe or in danger. Teens with high test scores stay inside the walls,and teens with low test scores must go out and fight. The main problem is mostly the fact that Eric is chosen to go on team 5 and go out and fight,and Arwin stays and he wants to help protect Eric

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Event #1: We learn that the black smiths are working in the smithy,which tells us the setting
Event #2: Theo becomes a blacksmith at the age of 13 because of the government
Event #3: Theo meets Neema at work and she explains
Event #4: Theo gets taken into the interview room after the authorities find him singing at work
Event #5 (Climax): While Theo is in the interview room an authority comes in and places a string around Theos neck
Event #6: The man tells Theo he wont be able to speak or sing for one month
Event #7:Neema takes a stan and sings the same song Theo was singing and the blacksmiths began to join in aswell
Event #8(Resolution): The government realized that they couldn't stop people so,they gave up and let people choose their jobs.

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5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face?

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5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face?

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I think the theme could be that you cant let people control you because at first Theo was a blacksmith but changed things and he ended up becoming a musician

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6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 

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6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 

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Arwin starts off being very shy and quiet in the start of the story and later after he realizes how he needs to stand up

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What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write.
Living in an unjustice society

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7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 

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7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 

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8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 

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8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 

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Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you.

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Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you.