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I think D is the answer  for question 1 because the sentence was already okay.

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A.insert a comma after planned

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A.yet
A.yet, it would sound like this, yet over time it would make sence.
B.It said ,in the same way it does not sound good.
C.For example it does not even give you a example.
D.Therefore,it would sound like this therefore over time, it does go there.

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which sentences could BEST follow
sentences 40 and help bring his paper to a close?
A: subway CAT seemed happy on his own again:grate ending for subway CAT.

B: he was the subway cat,and now he was worried about having to find  his own food No! it did not say any thing about the cat being hungery

Che

D

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I missed number nine because in the sentence it had your which needed no change but I picked this You´re. I picked a but, the answer is D.This you´re means

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question is what change if any should be made to sentence 33
A:insert a comma after planned
B: delete but
C: change she knew to they knew

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Tyler would like to add the following to the second paragraph  (sentences 9-12)

It's cold outside, but the subway is warm -it doesn't stick with the story
Where should Tyler enter this sentence?
A sentence 10  the sentence doesn't make sense in it WRONG
B sentence 11 the sentence doesn't make sense in it WRONG
C sentence 12 the sentence still doesn't make any sense WRONG
D this sentence should not be added to this paragraph RIGHT!

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C because it ingredients to ingredient's its not a because yore to yo're its not b attention to ation and it needs a change :D

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elizabeth-1    A is wrong because they don't talk about the cold yet.......B i wrong because i doesn't talk abut cold yet........12 doesn't  even make sense.......D is right because this scene doesn't  need to be in the this story.

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elizabeth-1    A is wrong because they don't talk about the cold yet.......B i wrong because i doesn't talk abut cold yet........12 doesn't  even make sense.......D is right because this scene doesn't  need to be in the this story.

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F.Delete the comma, this is wrong because if you move the comma the sentence will be put together and wont make sence                             G.Change grabed to grabbed, this is right becuase it is spelled wrong it is supposed to have two bs with one b it is another word.  H.Change that to it, this is wrong beacuase if you change it to it it will sound really weird and wouldnt make sense.          J.No change should be made, this is wrong because you have to change the word grabbed for it to make sense

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a-yet is the right answer b the same way doesn"t make sense wrong c for example wrong d therefore is wrong

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F. Delete the comma- That is WRONG because without the comma the sentence would not make sense.
G. change grabed to grabbed - that would be RIGHT because you have to add two b in grabbed.
H. Change that to it-That would be WRONG because if you put it there it would be one sentence but it would need to be two sentences.
J. No change needs to be made-That is wrong because grabed needs to be changed to grabbed

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At first I chose J and now I realized F is corect

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a after sentence ten the aruther is not making it good wrong b after sentence

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a after sentence ten the aruther is not making it good wrong b after sentence

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F: My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals that warned me.
G: My mother shrieked.As she warned me about approaching strange  animals.
H: My mother shrieked about approaching strange animals, she warned me.
J: My mother shrieked and warned me about approaching strange animals. I'd would say J.

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F.He turned his golden eyes toward me almost looked embarrassed.
wrong, it needs a comma because it is a combined sentans.

G.When he turned his golden eyes toward me,he almostblooked embarrassed.
right because it had the same words in the paragraph with a comma.

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A-yet is the right answer

B-in the same way i picked in the same way but it is not right because it doesn"t make sense.so it is WRONG.

C-for example is wrong because it does not make sense in the sentence. so it is WRONG

D-therefore is WRONG because it does not sound right in the sentence.

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what change if any should be
made in sentence 13?
A: Grining is not a word
B: Doesnt make sense
C: yes becuase our is the right meaning
D: yes there was a change needed
c was the correct answer
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a is wrong because it doesn't talk about the cold till 11. B is also wrong but i picked tho.C i s wrong bc

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what change if any should be made to sentence 4
A:delete the comma-NO you need the comma if u delete the comma everything will be bunled up together.
B:Change garbed to grabbed-yes of coruse the spelling is bad.

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which sentince needs to be changed in sentence 33. A.

A.insert a comma after PLANNED
B.delete BUT
C.change SHE KNEW  to THEY KNEW

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A.yet
number 3 it said that what is the  best beginning  for sentence  23
A .makes a lot for sence.
B. Is wrong cause it does not even sound like I sentence.

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f .Besides,I dont think we would have laft nearly as hard if our cookies have been perfect. right! becaus both of those sentence are actully one.
g . Besides I dont think.We  wouled have laghed  nearly as hard if our cookies had been perfect.RONG!  becaus the first sentence

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A.after sentence ten, the aruther is not making it good wrong
B after sentence 11, the auther is no makeing it beter wrong
C after sentence 12 The arther is not makeing it batter wrong
D this sentance should be not add ed to this paragrath The arther is no adding it right

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What is the best way to combine sentences 34 and 35?
F he turned his golden eyes toward me almost looked embarassed Wrong
G When he turned his golden eyes at me, he almost looked embarassed Wrong
H He turned his golden eyes toward me,which almost looked embarassed Wrong
J He turned his golden eyes toward me ,he almost looked embarassed  Right!

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F:You do not need to delete the comma because in the sentence the comma needs to be there Wrong
G:Change grabed to grabbed

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In the store the senten said over time we formed a sort of friendship.
A.is WORG because it says yet and if you put it in a senten it will not work.
B.is WORG because it says in the same way.

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Wich sounded right in my head but I did not now if it was right I thought it was but it wasn't So I picked F but it was wrong so that is why i got it WRONG.I hope i can get it right next time.  G was wrong because safe is like your ok. h is not a word.j was right it was fine.Q10

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What

A. Subway cat and i never got very close to each other after that, yet time we formed a sort of relationship. That doesn`t make sense.
B.

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I think the new answer is D because the sentence does not have a comma so its not complex sentence.

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the question is what change,if any, change should be made in sentence 33.
A.insert a comma after planned.
B. delet but.
C.she knew ,to they knew.
D. no change should be made in sentence 33.
sentence 33.; mom's birthday present didn't turn out as we had planned but she knew that we loved her.
I think it's A [hopefully i got it right]

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A. Yet-that is RIGHT because it is a complete sentence and sounds good                                                             B.  In the same way - this  is WRONG because it  would not be a complete sentence.
C. For example- This is also WRONG because it would have to have a comma which if it did have a comma it would still not be a complete sentence.
D. Therefore-  this is WRONG because there would have to be a comma after therefore .

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F: Change this to which- the author needed a comma in between sentences 29 and 30 to use which WRONG
G: change save to safe: safe is the wrong meaning WRONG
H: change later to latter- the double consonants make the vowel not say its name WRONG
J: no change needed- right

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quesion 3 A is corrcet because  it is a complete sentce and makes sine B is wrong because