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To Dishi,
You have used  dialogue really well in your work.you have also used emotive words effectively,such as:         horrible,miserable,melancholy.

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You have used high level vocabulary such as depression and babaric and you used  chronological order

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You have used good cohesive devices and good adjectives

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You have managed to use a lot of emotive words and you have also managed to keep your story in chronological order the whole diary entry

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You have followed the structure of a diary entry you have also written you diary entry in chronological order . You have also used various writing tools such as  : parenthesis  and rethorical questions .

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To faiyaz,
You have used great high level vocabulary such as barbaric and depresion and you.  Used chronological order

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To sanad

You have used a range of emotive words and you used the diary features
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You have used a lot of great emotive words.You have also used conjunctions.

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You have used lots of high level vocabulary
You have used semi colons

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To:anesu
You were very creative
You used a lot of cohesion
You could improve your handwriting

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To raya
You have managed to write in a first person
You have used MANY of  time adverbial

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To mikhail
You. Used alot  of emotive words and you did it in first person

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You have used alot  of emotive language and have used cohesive devices.

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To Mariam

You have included a lot of emotive language and added in chronological order

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You have used a lot of suspense in your writing and you have used high level vocabulary like,hesitation,abnormal

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To Micheal
You were able to use a good range of informal language and you were about to put in a little twist with the grandpa and that's what hooked to continue reading good job

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Dear Nara,
You have used a range of emotive words  in your diary entry.you have also included all the features of a diary         entry. And your diary entry is really interesting to read.

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To Omar
You have managed to use some time adverbials like After a few days

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You have used excellent chronological order and rhetorical questions such as: Why am I tied up?
Good use of speech and informal language, such as: “Blow the candle and make a wish”.

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To Haris,

You have done a great use of emotive language and you have dear diary and you used first person and you did it in chronologoical order

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To Maheen
You have managed to write your diary entry in chronological order and you have used emotive words such as contented and devastate

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YOU HAVE USED PUNCTUATION AND YOU HAVE USED AFFITION EMOTIVE WORDS LIKE TORTUROUS AND HAVE VERY DETAILED INFORMATION ABOUT THE EMOTION OF THE BOY

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To Mishal
You have managed to use connectives
You have written it in chronological order

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Velimier u used a lot of emotive words and a lot of and a lot of brackets ma man

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Velimier u used a lot of emotive words and a lot of and a lot of brackets ma man

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Veil ire u used good vocabulary and u used alot  of brackets

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Liked how u thought use of ur imagination
Also u put it in very good chronological order
Work on handwriting I can barely see it
But good work

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To Taha
You have managed to put the dear diary in chonological order.
You have managed to put the date(27-2-18).

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To prerna
You have managed to write your diary entry in chronological order and you have used also used amazing emotive words such as devastated and contented

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To Angelina

You used colon and semi colon.
I liked your wild imagination emotive words.

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Pratmesh used abit of connectives such as:however,and,I.And you had sticky glue words such as:and.But he didint use alot of emotive words.

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