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Rodrigo Cancino García. I'm 17 years old, I was born in Huixquilucan, I study at Tec de Monterrey in Metepec, I am the most younger  of my family, I have a old brother witch name is Rafael of 19 years old and also he studied here a few years ago, One of my hobbies is playing soccer and I have practiced it since I was 8 years old, form me the soccer is my big passion in this world, in the future one of my plans is to study the university in another country to study marketing, so I need to take advantage of all the tools and experiences that the Tec gives me in these three years.

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Writing Correction                                                                                                      Last year I went to the soccer final between Toluca vs Santos here at the "bombonera", although it had been raining in Toluca since the morning the match was played, the atmosphere was spectacular  at the streets around the stadium, even tough muy team wasn't playing I have lived here all muy life and for that reason I was supporting Toluca, the match was so exciting, the Toluca fans were supporting a lot in the game despite the fans of Santos was winning, Toluca was attacking all the game, however the champion in the end was Santos and because of this the fans of Toluca were sad. One of the best events of my life.

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Writing Correction                                                                                                      Last year I went to the soccer final between Toluca vs Santos here at the "bombonera", although it had been raining in Toluca since the morning the match was played, the atmosphere was spectacular  at the streets around the stadium, even tough muy team wasn't playing I have lived here all muy life and for that reason I was supporting Toluca, the match was so exciting, the Toluca fans were supporting a lot in the game despite the fans of Santos was winning, Toluca was attacking all the game, however the champion in the end was Santos and because of this the fans of Toluca were sad. One of the best events of my life.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lU-rzIP2khM&feature=youtu.be

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For me tolerance can be an important skill in these days because there are many different people with religion, color skin, preferences, etc. and the part that is related to the diversity that has a lot of variety, but it can be different in other countries and also in other states inside  the country. The level of tolerance can be different for many reasons, some researches said that this could be considering your state of humor and I think that it  sounds logic to me this factor. Emotions define our personality. Diversity is also important but it is not for a person personality, it is for a whole country with food, tradition, language and in that case. Mexico is the one with a huge diversity ande we need to conserve all those things and in tolerance we need to practice more if we want a great Mexico.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ED0H8FxfU8&feature=youtu.be

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In the case of the writings, what failed me was the use of prepositions it cost me a lot and also at the beginning it was difficult for me to write the words correctly but I think that when I was watching a little more movies in English I could see how some new words.
n the speakings I think that I felt better there, the only problem I had in my opinion is that I don't organize my ideas sometimes so I get stuck and nervous and being more specific, I think it's hard for me to say verbs in the right form that I want to use.

To improve my level of English there are several options such as reading books that can help a lot to continue seeing words and have more vocabulary, watch movies to listen to how they are pronounced and to improve speaking would be practicing a little with my family.

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5th semester Advanced English II

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Writing 1:A REPORT ABOUT A FESTIVAL. Teacher corrections

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Writing 1:A REPORT ABOUT A FESTIVAL. Teacher corrections

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Writing 2: NEWS ARTICLE Teacher corrections

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Writing 2: NEWS ARTICLE Teacher corrections

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Speaking 1: Talking about my regrets link

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Speaking 1: Talking about my regrets link

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Speaking 1: Talking about my regrets Feedback

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Speaking 1: Talking about my regrets Feedback

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Comments: It is good not to have many regrets in life. You expressed your regret clearly and directly. However, you were expected to use WISH or IF ONLY to talk about what you regret. EXAMPLE: I wish I had told that girl what I felt for her. I have to congratulate you because you have certainly improved a lot since the last semester we worked together. GOOD! 90

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Comments: From your comments, I can see that you really watched the video and paid attention to it. You seemed very confident and you were very fluent. GOOD! Keep it that way! Try to use more connectors apart from AND, BUT, SO... use more advanced vocabulary. Include phrases to add or contrast ideas. After all, you are an advanced student, now. CORRECTIONS: very few resource then, when he finishes all his studies (it should have been in past) for to change a little bit the quality of life he want to make a change

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Comments: Hello Rodrigo! Going out to play with friends should be strongly controlled by parents. Unfortunatelly, streets can be dangerous for kids these days. We have similar points of view on most of the issues about parenting. You sound natural and fluent but must try to improve your intonation and pronunciation. Incorporate connectors and linking words when expressing your points of view.

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This semester of English I have learned several things such as to be more sure of myself when I speak or write, I know that I can improve as in the subject of grammar and have more vocabulary to facilitate myself and elsewhere I need to practice the part of pronunciation and the diction to give me to understand better. There are many ways I can practice these aspects and they would be to read books to see how to write better and learn new words and another is to watch movies for the pronunciation part.

This knowledge will help me in the future in the next semester, university or even if I have a job that needs to use English. The truth is I was very surprised in the part of the writing, since in previous semesters I had a difficulty for them, but with this semester I see that if I really try, I can get good results.

Of all the activities in this course my favorites were the writings because I think they were with very interesting topics and not boring at all, writing about a holiday or news and using the elements that the teacher told us.

In general, I feel that English is a very complex language to study but that in the end it has more advantages. I feel that if you learn English, many doors open for you both at school and at work. In my case I still have a lot to improve but I hope in the future I will be able to have a good use of language. This portfolio makes one reflect on how one was advancing in the semester and at the end feel proud of it.

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My improvement in English in this semester I feel that I had a good improvement compared to other semesters. I have learned many things in these months such as grammar, speaking and writing, today I feel more self-confident in English but obviously I can improve some things. At the beginning of the semester, I thought it would cost me the subjects, but as the classes went by and also paying attention to each one of them, I have had good results at the moment, and I can say that I am very proud of that. I like to see a lot of improvement in this last semester of high school.