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One example of this is the fonts we have chosen. As seen in the image above, the smaller text is hard to read due to its thin lines which gives the impression that the text is blurry. As well as this, we hope to use a close up shot in our actual magazine cover as this is a recurring theme we have seen throughout all of our research into the horror genre.

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This was the final stage of creating our cover draft. We added text using the font w cen mc condensed which we used for both a pull quote and secondary text. By using a pull quote, we feel that it would draw the readers into the article and gives the film positive professional critique. This is another method seen in all of our researched magazines as it gives a product credibility, making the audience more likely to go out and watch the film. As well as this, the secondary text 'The resurrection, a film comment interview' gives the audience an idea as to what the magazine feature is and the format in which it is being discussed - again making it easier for audiences to identify what they will be buying.

We also added a barcode to the bottom right corner of the image. This is necessary in order to make our magazine cover look as real as possible.

Overall we think that our magazine draft was a success as it included all main marketing features that will pull our audiences in, whilst still reflecting the simplicity of the real film comment magazine, for example in our use of a small white border which contrasts the central image. We feel that this will be an effective layout for our final draft of the magazine however we do hope to make a few changes in the process.

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We then added a picture from one of our recces at Lydiate hall which allowed us to see how our magazine three colour theme would pull together. Obviously we will do specific shoots for this cover as well as for our poster yet this is just an example to illustrate the effect the cover will have. We feel this still looked effective due to the leaves and trees shown contrasting the  red title which is also carried through into the red bricks shown in the image. A better image to use here could be the same shot but whilst giving the audience a limited view of the ghost or a shot from our inside filming for example a close up of shadows under a door.

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We thought this font was the most appropriate one we found on photo shop for this product however on looking back we have decided to try and find a better one which we will download. This can be done from numerous websites such as dafont.com and myfonts.com which offer a range of fonts which we can try.

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We then began to add relevant information to the magazine cover for example the edition number and year as seen to the right. This is crucial to add when designing a cover as it allows the audience to easily identify each edition and separate it from the others. We then also began to add relevant articles above the masthead. We used thin black dividers to separate the text, this broke up the words which makes it easier for the reader to navigate as seen to the left.

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Shown below is a mock up of what we wanted our plan magazine cover to look like. We feel that our plan was effective and helpful because it allowed us to use conventions shown throughout Film comment in order to inspire our own design, which gave us a basic outline but still allowed room for us to make changes.

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To begin our magazine draft, we started by creating a masthead that reflected our research. We therefore selected an appropriate font which closely matched that used by the original magazine, changing the colour so that it was two-tone. By picking red and black, we thought we would stick to the genre convention as these colour are associated with the death blood and mystery.