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this story I think can be better and that you need to add more detail.

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this story I think can be better and that you need to add more detail.

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This is very, very boring.

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this is really scary

im scared

# data[].attributes.body
I think his boring

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this is terrible and so boring ugggh im falling asleep reading it your bad

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this is terrible and so boring ugggh im falling asleep reading it your bad

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THIS IS THE WORST LEAD EVER!!!!! DONT EVER WRITE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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THIS IS THE WORST LEAD EVER!!!!! DONT EVER WRITE AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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HELP ME
AAAAHHH
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This story was absolutely terrible I never want to read a story like this ever again

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this was very boring and isn't interesting

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worst!!!! Story!!!!! EVER!!!!!! IN!!! History!!!!!!!!! u r HORRIBLE!!!!!!!!
Trash!!!!!! TRash!!!! TRASH!!!!!
YOU SUCK AND YOU ARE TRASH!!!

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THIS IS THE WORST STORY EVER.I'VE SEEN A FIVE YEAR OLD WRITE BETTER

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THIS IS THE WORST STORY EVER.I'VE SEEN A FIVE YEAR OLD WRITE BETTER

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This was so boring I would not read the rest of this story! theres no sensory details and your transitions are really bad!

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this is the wort lead in the world and has no good transitions.Plus it is TERRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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this is the wort lead in the world and has no good transitions.Plus it is TERRIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

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This absolutely was garbage and this is the worst thing i've ever read you are a horrible writer you must give up NNNNNOOOOOWWWW

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Read this hook, and then add your comment to the writer.

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Read this hook, and then add your comment to the writer.

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Focus on how it engaged you as a reader, but write it in a way that would NEITHER benefit the author NOR produce growth.

I walked into a haunted house one evening. I heard screaming, and I became scared. I wondered where my friends were. All of a sudden, Paul was right next to me, and he was crying really hard.