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Example: Hansel & Gretel The Witches Escape

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Example: Hansel & Gretel The Witches Escape

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I like the detail descriptions that you provided. I could really picture the story in my mind.

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The Gingerbread Men who wants to play hide and go seek

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The Gingerbread Men who wants to play hide and go seek

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I liked how you were able to make us visualize what was happening in the story.

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I liked the twist on little red riding hood I think it was very creative

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i like how as i read i could imagine what the characters looked like and what they were doing

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The Three Little Pigs and the Big Bad Wolf.

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The Three Little Pigs and the Big Bad Wolf.

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I liked how you changed the characters in the story. It made it fun to read.

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The story was interesting and i liked it. Good use of words I could visualize well.

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It was cool that you told the story from the troll's perspective.

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I liked how you made Snow Black the bad guy and the Queen the good guy.

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The gingerbread  man who wants to play hide and go seek

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The gingerbread  man who wants to play hide and go seek

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I liked how the gingerbread man was so sneaky and the plot

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I love the detail in the story it was very fun to read and a shocker what happened

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I liked how it felt like you were turning corners to different surprises and the story just matched up really well

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I really liked the twist on the name and characters and I think it was a good idea, the pictures helped me make the story vision in my mind even better.

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Pan’s Mysterious   Accident on Christmas day

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Pan’s Mysterious   Accident on Christmas day

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Good building of the story
hio i tem

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I like how you put a modern day twist on a old story i really liked it.

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I loved how detailed it was, it had very good plot twists. My favorite part is when the family re united.

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The Three Little Pigs and the big bad mouse

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The Three Little Pigs and the big bad mouse

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i like how you changed the big bad wolf to a mouse it mad it more interesting and and i loved how the became friends

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I love that you made your story almost seem like it would have been the oregnal! Like the holl story changed because you changed the wolf to a mice! I also like that you made your own pics, it looks quite nice!!! and I love the title aswell!

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The Gingerbread Man and the Six Hungry Neighbors

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The Gingerbread Man and the Six Hungry Neighbors

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I like how you put the Gingerbread Lady's feelings at the end, it made me think that she regreted eating the Gingerbread Man because she was then lonely.

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I like how you changed the charecters the story had a good plot

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The three little pigs that escaped the barn

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The three little pigs that escaped the barn

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I like how the pigs were chased out of the barn instead of being let go by their parents.

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I love how you changed the whole main idea from the real Sow white and basically changed the characters personalitys it was nice to see them from a different POV.

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I liked how you put the setting in a more modern place with the sweatshirt. I also liked that nobody got eaten, they just got chased or locked up.

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The Three Little Pigs and The Big Bad Mouse

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The Three Little Pigs and The Big Bad Mouse

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I like that they added a mouse instead of a wolf and a mama pig.

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the twist was good and so was the dialogue

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I liked how you told the story from the Trolls point of view, it made it fun to read.

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Pan’s Mysterious   Accident on Christmas day 

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Pan’s Mysterious   Accident on Christmas day 

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i like the pictures and how you over all just told the story

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The three little pigs and the big bad mouse

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The three little pigs and the big bad mouse

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I like at the end where the mouse becomes friends with the three little pigs.

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I love how you added modern day food brands to the story and made the story a ton funnier it was really funny.

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I liked the way you made Snow Black the bad version of Snow White. I also like the pictures you use bcause they help out with story.

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I love how you made mother the oppiset of who they are in the oragnal! I aslo think its kinda funny you put the kedo diet at the begening, i dont know why i found it funny...I aslo love the pics, i feel like they match the story purfectly!

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The Gingerbread Man who wants to play hide and seek

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The Gingerbread Man who wants to play hide and seek

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I like how the Gingerbread man was very sneaky and i love how it was so well written

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The gingerbread man who wants to play hide and go seek

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The gingerbread man who wants to play hide and go seek

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The detail is amazing. Its easy to visualize the story and makes it even more interesting to read.

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I like how the grandma was the one to take down the wolf.

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The Three Little Pigs that Escaped the Barn

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The Three Little Pigs that Escaped the Barn

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I like the part in the story where you put the storm and described how it was. It made me feel like I was there.

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The Three Little Pigs that Escaped the Barn

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The Three Little Pigs that Escaped the Barn

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everything everything
hio i tem

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The Gingerbread Men who wants to play hide and go seek.

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The Gingerbread Men who wants to play hide and go seek.

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I loved the twist in the story, it was really cool how they wanted to play hide and go seek.

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Pan’s Mysterious   Accident on Christmas day 

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Pan’s Mysterious   Accident on Christmas day 

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I loved it. It was funny, I like the part where it says "breakfast he had his own kind pancakes. No, I'm just joking, he had waffles because pancakes and waffles are at war so he ate waffles." That part made me laugh.

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I like how the storm came through the town and almost made him starve.

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The Ginger Bread Men Who Wants to Play Hide And Seek 

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The Ginger Bread Men Who Wants to Play Hide And Seek 

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I like that they put two Ginger Bread men instead of 1 and they put them playing hide and seek.

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Great use of words.I really liked it was super funny.

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I live how you used a puddle image and merrered it to make it look like a reflection. But, I fell like you could add a little more in the story insted of three slides for like one perragraph, and that theres little amount of pics, but other then that I think its asmazing!

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I like how its from the trolls perspective and how he is asked for what he thinks what really happened

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i like how it started out super suspenseful, i also like how you started the story as how they escaped the barn and then made their house etc. it was a really nice story good job!!

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i liked the how it made me visualize what was happening in the story

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I like how they got chased out instead of just let out i also think it had a great use of words an d it was super easy to imagine what was happening.

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The Three Little Pigs That Escaped The Barn

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The Three Little Pigs That Escaped The Barn

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I like the images that you put onto your slide I think it really puts an imagination on to your story like it picture 5

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The Three Little Pigs that escaped the barn

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The Three Little Pigs that escaped the barn

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I liked the pictures that you chose. It made the story come to life.

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the three little pigs and the big bad mouse.

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the three little pigs and the big bad mouse.

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I love how detailed the writing was and it was creative and I loved the first picture of the pig in the chair.

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I love the story! The pics are amising as well! Over all, I dont see anything bad about this story, its germaticly correct (i suck at spelling correctly so great job with that!) I love how it almost like drags me into reading it over and over again!

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Good story telling and story telling events.

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How the Almost Won the Three Little Pigs

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How the Almost Won the Three Little Pigs

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I liked how you started off were the wolf couldn't blow down the brick like in the orginal Three Little Pigs, but then made it were the Wolf got in to the house.

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I don't really like how you killed of the egg at the end, but other than that, it was good

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I liked that it was very well write, good story telling, and good climax.

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The Gingerbread Man and the Six Hungry Neighbors.

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The Gingerbread Man and the Six Hungry Neighbors.

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I liked how you told a different ending. It was really cool.

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The ginger bread Man and the Six hungry neighbors

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The ginger bread Man and the Six hungry neighbors

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i love how you changed the story and it was really interesting