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delivery 8/10
-rushes the intro
- fun interactive sessions
- loud and clear
Content 9/10
- include statistics
-not much of  heavy text
language 8/10

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Delivery-8
Content-8/9
Language-7

Clear presentation

Faster than Dr. Ismail

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Delivery: 7/10
- rushes through the beginning but it became steadier later
- very interactive with class
Content: 8/10
- good research
-nice slides
Language: 8/10
-used rhetorical question

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delivery-8
content-8
language-8

loud and clear
interactive segment was good
good use of case studies

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Nataline
Delivery 8/8
Content 8/7
Language 7/8

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Delivery -8/10
great energy
content-7/10
language-8/10

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delivery- 8
content- 8
language- 8
- loud & clear, confident
- well-prepared

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delivery- 8
content- 8
language- 8
strength: good interaction, confident
weakness: rushed through a

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delivery- 8/10
content- 8/10
language- 8/10
rushed through quite a bit
loud, clear and confident

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Nataline

Delivery -> 9
-> Loud and clear
-> Expressive
-> Can use less of the script
-> Hand gestures are being used
-> Time not reading the slides
-> Feet are firmly on the ground
-> Engages with audience
Content -> 8
-> Statistics are given
-> Well elaborated
Language - 7
-> Transition words are used

Tips:
-> The introduction on different social media can be arranged differently, like facebook logo with the facebook name itself
-> Script should be in point form and improvised on the day itself, it will throw you off if you base it solely on script
-> SSM?
-> Takeaway slides can change the words to be more readable.

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delivery- 8
content- 7
language-8

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delivery 7/10
-could be louder
content 7/10
-could elaborate more
-not text heavy
-clear slides
language 8/10
-transition words are there

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delivery- 8/10
content-  8/10
language-  8/10
great elaborations
remain eye contact at all times
speak slightly louder

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Delivery: 7/10
- well-prepared
-could be louder
Content: 8/10
- elaborates well on points
- short and simple
Language: 8/10

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delivery- 8
content- 8
language- 8
- confident
- good elaboration

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Yuki
Delivery 8/8
Content 8/9
Language 7/7
Well prepared and elaborate greatly at all the points.

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Yuki

Delivery -> 7
-> Can be louder
-> Confident
-> Quite enthusiastic
-> Use of hand gestures
-> Eye contact are mainly on one side
-> Lack of engagement
-> Feet firmly rooted to the ground
Content -> 8
-> Points are short on slides, but well elaborated with speech
-> Slides are easy to read
-> Slides are well designed
Language -> 8
-> Transition words are used
-> Pronunciation clear

Tips:
-> Should try to have some questions when it comes to Branding, "Victoria secrets", "bbhoodz", all different trends

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delivery- 8
content- 8
language- 8
strength: good elaboration, good links
weakness: slightly soft, lack interaction with audience

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delivery- 7/10
content- 8/10
language- 8/10
could be slightly louder
good use of transition words

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Delivery- 6
Content-7
Language-6

Monotonous , some of the content was not explained clearly.

Use of idioms.

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delivery : 6/10
-voice is shaky
-monotonous
-should be more confident
content: 8/10
-some words on article are too small to read
-shows a lot of examples but wordy
-slides can be neater
language:7 /10
-a few good vocab

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delivery- 6
content- 8
language- 7

could be louder and more expressive

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Delivery-6/10
-could be louder
-awkward pauses
-tries to interact which is good
-confident
-should make more eye contact
-lack of interaction
content-8/10
-well organised slides
-have statistic good
-knows her content well
-not wordy
language-8/10

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delivery- 6
content- 9
language- 7
strengths: provides stats, interesting slides and content
weakness: lack expression, shaky voice

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Jasmine
Delivery -> 6
-> Loud and Clear
-> Not really expressive
-> Feet are firmly on the ground
-> Can have more eye contact with everyone
-> Not really prepared
Content -> 8
-> Slides can be seen clearly
-> Good use of statistics
-> Statistics can be clearer
-> Use of articles
-> Good use of comparison
Language -> 6
-> Lack of transition words
-> Run-on sentences

Tips :
-> What are "these platforms"?
-> Whats clickbait?
-> A lot of "Ah", "uh"
-> One of the slide on "how ads bought through google...." is too text heavy, can shorten it.

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delivery- 6
content- 8
language- 8
- eye contact
- could be more expressive

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delivery 7/10
- have eye contact
- did memorize the content
- good gestures

content 8/10

-slides are plain and simple
-not heavy text
-include statistics
and state sources
-interesting topic
language 8/10

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delivery- 7/10
content- 8/10
language- 7/10
-slides are quite clear and good research
-not enough explanation for some points

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Jasmine
Delivery 6/5
Content 6/6
Language 8/8
Slides was a little on the wordy side but elaboration made the content clearer.
Subject wasn't making much sense to me as I don't get how WSJ has to do with Google.

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Confident and attention grabbing

Wordy presentation

Cool Content

Language-6
Delivery-8
Content-8

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delivery- 8
content- 8
language- 7

Confident, loud & clear

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Ron
Delivery -> 7
-> Loud and clear
-> Quite enthusiastic
-> Confident at times
-> Feet are firmly on the ground
-> Hand Gestures are used
-> Keeps eye contact
Content -> 8
-> Three point line are pointed at wrong place
-> Well researched
-> Everything on the slides can be seen
Language -> 7
-> Used some transition words
-> Sentences are short and sweet

Tips :
-> What is the difference between heavy and light disability
-> Practice on pronunciation on difficult words
-> awareness of disability, not disability awareness

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Delivery: 8/10
-loud and clear
-a few slips
-sometimes have problems remembering script
Content: 8/10
-slides are nice
- typo error "be postive in life"

Language: 7/10

-says a lot of "however"

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Delivery -7/10
Loud, confident
Trying to remember her script
good hand gesture.
Content-7/10
interesting topic, well organised slides
Language-7/10

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delivery- 7/10
content- 8/10
language- 7/10
could elaborate more and forgot what to say
loud and clear

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delivery 8/10
- loud and clear
- maintain eye contact
content 7/1
-include take away
- did memorize the content
language 7/10

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delivery- 8
content- 7
language- 7
strength: clear, good slides
weakness: practice the medical terms, explain what is heavy/light disabilities

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delivery- 7
content- 7
language- 7

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RONABEL
Delivery  6/6
Content 7/7
Language 7/7
Stammering at times but overall well prepared.

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Delivery-7
Content-7
Language-6

Monotone , interesting content but it feels boring.

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delivery-7/10
content-7-6/10
language-7/10
forgetting script, alot of 'actually'
getting softer , Lack of activeness. Confident.Not enough content

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delivery- 7
content- 7
language- 6

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delivery- 7/10
content- 8/10
language- 7/10
used a lot of "actually"
gave personal experience

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delivery- 7
content-8
language-7

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delivery-  7
content- 8
language- 7
strength: good elaboration
weakness: excessive use of 'actually'

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Clovis
Delivery - 7
-> Audible, can be a bit louder
-> Quite confident
-> Feet rooted on the ground
-> Not really prepared, but still able to remember his lines/scripts
-> Lack of enthusiasm, makes the presentation very dry
-> Lack of hand gesture to capture audience attention
Content - 6
-> Personal Experience
-> Slides are well prepared
-> Everything on the slides can be seen clearly
-> Should show examples, on mouth shape and sound
Language - 7
-> Lack of transition words
-> Simple Vocab

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delivery 7/10
- maintains good eye contact
-looks rather confident
content 7/10
- good content and does elaborate
- include  personal experience
- good demo
language 6/10
- could use more transition words

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Clovis
Delivery 7/6
Content 7/7
Language 7/7
Confident but some abrupt stoppage at times
Quite prepared.

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Delivery : 7/10
-fidgets with hands
Content : 7/10
- good elaboration
Language : 6/10
- "actually"

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delivery- 9/10
content- 8/10
language- 7/10
good eye contact and is confident
moves about a lot

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Maintained eye contact with the audience throughout the entire presentation.
Spoke in clear, concise english.
Delivery 8/8
Content 8/9
Language 8/8

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Delivery-9
Content-8
Language-7

The Video did not seem related to the topic

Great confidence

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delivery 8
content 8
language 7

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DELIVERY
very loud and clear
confident
need to rehearse script a bit more
talk slower
CONTENT
a lot of emphasis on ed's awards

LANGUAGE
-had a few grammar errors
-good use of transition words

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delivery:8/9
-paces back and forth as he presents
-loud and clear
content:8
-easy to read
language:7
- uses listing "firstly, secondly.."
a few grammar error

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Amirul

Delivery -> 8
-> Loud and Clear
-> Confident
-> Does not really place his feet firmly on the ground, kinda fidgety
-> Well paced
-> Doesnt really read off the slides, well prepared
Content -> 8
-> Good content, slides can be read easily without trouble
-> Done good experience
-> Involve himself with the topic
-> Good Video
Language-> 7
-> A lot of "which"
-> A lot of Hence at the ending

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delivery - 8/10
content- 7/10
language - 7/10
mMove around more
Good eye contact
Explain how the video is linked to the topic

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delivery-8
content-8
language-7
strength: eye contact
weakness: fidgeting

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Delivery - 8
Content - 7
Language - 7
Use of transition words
Some grammar errors

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Delivery-7
Content-7
Language- 7

Could have elaborate more.

There is an interesting topic on uncommon sports.

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Reynold

Delivery -> 6
-> Not prepared
-> Stutter
-> Can be louder
-> Not very confident
Content -> 6
->  Well prepared slides, can read everything
-> We did not know about the uncommon water sport (underwater football)
Language -> 7
-> Transition Words

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delivery- 7
content-7
language- 7
personal windsurfing photos

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delivery - 7/10
-not too sure of script
-quite loud
content 6/10
-could elaborate more on his points
-could elaborate more on his personal experience
language 7/10

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Delivery - 7
Content - 7
Language - 7
Rephrase some sentences (say elderly instead of old man perhaps?)
Good use of transition words

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delivery-7
content-6
language-7
-providing examples of uncommon water sports
- show more pictures of personal picture.

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delivery-  7/10
content - 7/10
language - 8/10
interesting topics/ facts (uncommon water sports)

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delivery: 7
-can be more confident
-stumble on words
content: 7/8
surprising and new information
can elaborate more
language: 7

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Delivery - 7/10
Content -  7/10
Language - 7/10
Introduced a few new & interesting sports

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Delivery - 7/8
Content - 8
Language - 8

Pictures are hard to see

Good confidence

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Delivery- 8/10
Content- 8/10
Language- 7/10
loud and clear, gives examples
the text is quite small and not easy to read

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Delivery - 8
Content - 8
Language - 7
Font is a bit unreadable

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delivery:8
-loud and clear
-good gestures
- stutter a lot, very nervous
- should rehearse more on script
- used rhetorical question
content:8
- good content
-informative
language:7
- "um, uh"

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Darren
Delivery - 8
- loud and clear
- good posture & use gestures to distract audience

Content - 9
- slides not text heavy
- good elaboration from his vague slides
-arouse interest in audience

Language - 7
sentences are short & sweet

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delivery- 8
content- 8
language-7
con: rough flow of speech, can tell that trying to remember speech
pro: loud and clear voice

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delivery-8
content-8
language-7
strength:Good takeaway and examples
weakness: stutter

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Delivery 7/6
Content 7/7
Language 7/7
Spoke a bit too quickly and stutters when speaking to quickly.

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delivery - 7/10
content - 8/10
language - 7/10
cannot really read the words
confident
pictures can be enlarged slightly

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delivery 8/10
- confident
-should relax a bit
content- 8/10
picture too small
font not readable
language 7/10
says um a lot

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Delivery-7
Content-7
Language-8

Lacks depth

Very interesting content

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d- 8
c- 9
l- 8

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delivery- 7/10
content- 7
language- 7/10
gave examples
too short

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delivery - 8/10
content - 7/10
language - 7/10

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delivery:8
-loud and clear
-good posture
content:8
- informative
language:7
-uses a lot of "so"

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delivery- 8
content- 7
language- 7
Loud and clear

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delivery - 8/10
-confident
-loud and clear
content- 7/10
-showed evidence
language
-should elaborate more
-said "so" and "right" a lot

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Peng Hong
Delivery - 8
-> Projects her voice
-> Tone differs
-> Hand gestures
Content - 8
-> Interesting topic, a truth that not many will know
-> Well elaborated, not many slides with a lot of words
-> Can add video to take up the leftover 3 minutes
-> Good News Articles
Language - 7
->  Short and Sweet Sentences

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Jess
Delivery 8/7
Content 7/7
Language 6/8
well elaborated without using the slides much.

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delivery-7
content-7
language-7
strength: interesting and good topic
weakness: use a lot of 'so' and 'right'

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Delivery-6
Content-7
Language-7

She talks as fast as an F1 racecar

She shared personal experiences

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delivery- 7/10
content- 7/10
language- 7/10
lacks eye contact and reads through the slides often
provides personal experience

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delivery-  6/10
read from slides
too fast
content - 7/10
included personal exp
differences in sb and bb was v interesting
language - 7/10
grammar errors

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delivery-6
content-7
language-7
strength: personal experiences
weakness: lack eye contact
talk too fast

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Delivery - 6
Content - 7
Language - 7
Images cover some text
Text cannot be seen over the background
Addition of personal experience and informative

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delivery- 6/10
content- 7/10
language- 7/10
some words cannot be seen
slow down
not much eye contact

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delivery- 6
content- 8
language- 7

too fast and not much eye contact
gifs covered text
reads from slide

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Ting Ting
Delivery -> 6
-> Doesnt keep eye contact
-> Very fast
-> Fidgets, does not have good posture
-> loud and clear, can hear her clearly
-> Reads off slide rather than being prepared
Content -> 7
-> Too text heavy during the roles of position, should state smaller points, and elaborate herself
-> Good that she talk about her experiences
-> Dark Background with black text, hard to see
Language -> 6
->  Sentences tend to be too long for a speech and are more suited for a written piece

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delivery:6/7
-relies on the slides a lot,prepare a script
content:7
-some words are hard to read due to the font colour
the picture block the words
language:7

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TinGtInG
Delivery 6
Content 7
Language 7
Speaks way too fast and the slides aren't very readable from far.
Faster than bruce lee's kick

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delivery- 7 (louder and clearer)
content- 8/9
language- 8
(used alot of ERM)
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