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Here your corrections. I hope you learn from these mistakes!

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Your activity is well written. There are a few mistakes on grammar. I want to advice you to work a bit on cohesion because you are sometimes writing like we do in spanish. Remember when writing in english you must think in that language. do not translate exactly as in spanish.

Best regards,

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MY HOUSE:
LINK VIDEO: https://youtu.be/xMRScM9FT1w

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Hi,

Thanks for your opinion analysis about transportation. I agree with you in many aspects you mention such as the fact that we need to encourage people to use their cars less and public transport more to stop the rising levels of congestion and air pollution found in big cities like Bogotà. In terms of English there are many mistakes because you took advantage of a translator not of your knowledge. If you want to improve your English you must write your own ideas and practice your reading skills.
Example: THREE MONTHS INCAPACITED ???? =(
- iN ENGLISH WE SAY THREE MONTHS WITH A MEDICAL INELIGIBITY

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Hi,

Goon Job! Your participation in the oral task shows you know how to share personal information. You can give personal details, such as name, age, profession, likes, past and future intentions. Your grammar is good specially using past structures. However, your description is a little bit short, you could have included more intentions for the future. You just mentioned one.

I suggest you to work more on pronunciation and intonation.

Best regards,

Ivan Camilo Gonzalez

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Hi!

Awesome! The participation in this activity is well written in terms of punctuation, grammar, spelling, coherence, and cohesion. It includes information about you, the things you did last weekend and things you do on a long weekend. You could have included more information so I can check how your english is.

Here a few mistakes:
-Im thing? ------ Im thin
- My favorite hobbies are read, watch tv... - My favorite hobbies are reading, watching movies, etc....
- The las trip I traveled to girardot.. Better say: Last trip I went to girardot (omit repetition)

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https://youtu.be/nUdQV2puPRo