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Dear Ariadne,

First of all, I am sorry it has take some time for me to write to you. As a matter of fact, our stories somehow match. When you sent me your personal narrative, I was not coming to school because I had tested positive for covid. It was interesting because on my first day back to school, I read your personal story and could feel you when you said “there can always be a bright side in those moments”.

I was glad when I read that you somehow enjoyed being taken care of and appreciated the hospital facilities. It’s great that you had access to such a nice place and that so many people were there for you when you needed. I felt similar these days I was at home. I was glad I had a home, with a comfortable bed, I had access to all medicines and equipments I needed. I am also grateful for my family and friends who have sent me messages, food, and many other treats and love manifestations. I am glad to be healthy now, alive and back to work.

It was really nice to have your text and your letter waiting for me at my office when I arrived here. I hope we can meet each other soon to talk about the bright side of life!

Have a great winter break!

Love,
Carol Alves

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Feedback to Ana Vitória
Great to read your text. There was some mistery, some joy. Very interesting. Have a great vacation.

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Feedback for Maria Fernanda
Interesting how life can be sad and happy at the same time. You were happy travelling but also sad about loosing your dog. Love the story about your dog growing up with you. Great text.

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Feedback for Enrico

From Ms Ariani

Dear Enrico,

Thank you for sharing your narrative writing  with me. I really enjoyed reading about your special birthday weekend in Rio! I enjoyed “following” you and your family in all the activities you described, sounds like you had a real good time. I loved the card, nice drawing from the Christ ( Corcovado), a real postcard from Rio!
Well done! :)
Ms Ariani

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Feedback for Manuela Lima from Tracy Harrison 

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Feedback for Manuela Lima from Tracy Harrison 

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Manuela, congratulations on your personal narrative and thank you for the beautiful watercolor! It helps me to to do my job raising money for the Graded Scholar Program better when I hear stories like yours. I am able to share these stores with potential donors and hopefully raise more money for the program! Well done! xxTracy

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Dear Sarah,

Thank you for sharing your beautiful story with me. I was captivated by your colorful artwork, and once I began reading, the description of your birthday was just as colorful. You drew me in by explaining what you were feeling and what made you feel that way. The piñata and the loud pop, listening to K-pop, it was all wrapped up in excellent detail that really make a story stand out. Your excitement when unwrapping your presents and the “colorful rain” of the candy falling for all your friends is such a great memory, I still remember my own piñatas from my childhood birthdays.

One of the wonderful things about writing and sharing stories is that you never know what incredible memories the reader may remember of their own experiences because of a well-written story.

I’m sure you’ll keep developing your writing skills. You are already talented and I hope you enjoy the process of story telling, it can be a lot of fun. I hope you have a great time in class!

All the best,
Ricardo Guadarrama

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I enjoyed so much reading your letter and am very happy for you.  Finally your dream became reality and you have Belinha, your cat.

I’m sure you will take good care of her!!

Enjoy your coming vacation time and see you again in August!

Abs
Elaine Gabor

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Hi, Sarah! Thank you for sharing your narrative with me.

I start by complimenting you on the artwork you've created for the cover! The vibrant and beautiful colors deeply connect to your lovely story.

You did an excellent job writing your narrative - the structure of your paragraphs captivated me to keep reading.  I loved how you used adjectives to describe every detail and every feeling.  The use of imagery made me feel like I was living in the scene.

I am glad you had such a special day with your family and friends.
You are super fortunate to be surrounded by that much love, fun, and caring.

Keep up the great work & Have fun with English!

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Ms. Butler's feedback for Luiz Fernando!

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Ms. Butler's feedback for Luiz Fernando!

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Wow, what a cool story and I love that it is a true story.  You did an amazing job of building suspense towards the end of the story, "...but there is something strange, everyone is looking at me as if I was an alien". It sounds like it was a great experience not only for you but also your parents.  Your description of how you were feeling when you couldn't go to school and your boredom where very clear, great job!

Ms. Butler

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You have done an excellent job of explaining not only your experience but also your father's experience with your grandmothers illness.  I am so happy that you were able to go quickly to your grandmother and get her to the hospital so she could be treated and make a full recovery.  I also hope your grandmother's health stays strong for many years. Thank you for sharing such a personal story.

Ms. Butler

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Maria Fernanda - I feel so fortunate that you shared your narrative piece with me about the first day of school. You did a beautiful job of capturing the subtle feelings and observations of being in a new place. I also really likes reading about how your relationship with Vitor began, and how 8t has progressed.

Keep up the great work, and thank you for sharing.

--DT

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Obrigada, Manuela!

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Thank you, Sarah!

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What a gift, Maria! Thank you.

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Thank you, Mauricio.

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Thank you, Mauricio.