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Zhangjin Liu

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To what extent do education impact individuals' mindset and commit as a whole

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To what extent has the Japanese PISA reform benefitted students?
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Yijie Wu

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Very exhaustive plan
some repeated points

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Carmen——Evaluate the impact of 'testocracy' on student social justice

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Carmen——Evaluate the impact of 'testocracy' on student social justice

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-The structure is clear enough.