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My unforgettable Mid-Autumn My unforgettable Mid-Autumn Festival was the year I was in 6th grade. That year, my school held a lesson on how to make moon cakes. Admittedly, making mooncakes is difficult. I had to ask her to guide me to knead the dough (because it was too difficult). Even so, I'm still happy to have the baking experience. Me and my friends ate the cakes we created by ourselves. That day was a very wonderful day for me. Thank you for reading my story.

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My unforgettable mid-autumn memory is when I at the age of 5. When I join the first mid-autumn festival. I wear my prettiest dress and go out to watch. I have very surprised when I saw people dress at chú Cuoi and Hang Nga. I even more surprised when I saw the mua Lan. That is my unforgettable mid-autumn memory. Thank you for reading!
Khanh Huyen

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Mid-Autumn Festival is a holiday for children, surely everyone had unforgettable memories of this Mid-Autumn Festival. When I was in 2nd grade because it was the Mid-Autumn Festival, my father took the whole family to Hoan Kiem lake to play, there were many people there. My family went to a small sidewalk restaurant to eat. While waiting for the dish, an old woman came and gave me a packet of crips, she told me to open it and I did as she said, then she forced me to pay because I opened the package and my father had to pay. Then yelled at me that next time, it won't happen again. After eating, my family and I walked, there were a lot of people, including my brother. He picked up 50,000 VND and was about to shout, but my older brother stopped him and said next time he finds something, he has to put it in his pocket and go home to give it to him. When my family are walked, my father dropped off his car key while traveling and my brother picked it up. Everyone asked each other if anyone had picked it up, but no one answered, my family had to take a taxi home. When I got to my house, my brother showed it to my father and when he asked, the whole family burst into laughter. It was the mid-autumn festival that I found the most fun and memorable in my life.

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Hello everyone. During this year's Mid-Autumn Festival, I was able to hang out, hang lanterns, and eat moon cakes. That day, my friends forced me to put on ao dai but I didn't want to wear it and they kept forcing me to wear it, so it made me a bit uncomfortable. And after school I don't go anywhere, I just played basketball. It was one of the most boring Mid-Autumn Festival celebrations of my life.

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My unforgettable Mid-Autumn Festival is the year I entered 1st grade. For others, it's nothing special, but for me, it's a memorable one. In the first Mid-Autunm at class, I'm so nervous because I'm never have a Mid-Autumn Festival in class. At that time, my friends I were able to decorate the classroom by myself. We also got to experience making sticky rice cakes and moon cakes. Although the cake we made was not as delicious as the chefs made, we were very proud because it was our first time making it anyway. At the end of the class party, each student was also given a carefully wrapped gift bag. It's a memory of Mid-Autumn Festival that I will never forget, and what's your Mid-Autunm do you unforgettable.
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I had an unforgettable mid-autumn festival.  That was when I was in 3rd grade. My family went to the street to watch the Mid-Autumn Festival. I asked my mother to buy 2 lanterns and 1 star lamp.  Arriving at the venue, I found it very elegant and beautiful.  When I started the first performance, I was very excited but didn't know that I had lost my parents.  About the first 5 minutes, I felt quite normal and just went to look for it, but 30 minutes later, I started to panic and burst into tears, I looked around but couldn't find my parents.  After a while, I was walking and if I tripped, I grabbed something to support me.  When I looked up, I discovered that I had pulled down a boy's pants and I jumped, panicked, and ran away.  When the crowd was almost over, I found my parents and told them, they teased me and didn't scold me.  It was the most unforgettable Mid-Autumn Festival memory in my life

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Well,.. My most unforgettable is when I was in age5 at the age of 5. That day, because I was to silly so that why I dont didn't know what’s was Autumn Festival, then my mother told me that’s the holiday for the kids called “Trung Thu holiday”. And of couse, I gonna asked my mother again what’s was that day mean (because I was too dumb and forgot what she says said 🙄😔)Then she said: “oh silly!? Its a holiday for all the kids in our country! I told you.” I was reminded that then I shouted* “YEsSSSSsSssSSSSs” I hold held my mother hands, took her to my room then asked she her to take my most pretty pretties dress out. And yas, I dressed it and I was run faster like a    marathon runner( Omgosh that time I think thought I should get a nobel present because I run ran too fast😂✨)I get  went down stairs and walked like an angel over my neighbor friends to let them attention to me like Im a princess🤡. The party started, I also find  found a dancemate to dance with. Then I found it him ! (Now he’s my childhood friend! We still meet eachother.😑) He tried to dance with me to get present award but I dont didn't like to hold boys' hand even my dad so I stepped on his feet.#0-0# But, I still get got present but he did not, haha thats funny..! Then we take  took a lots of pictures and eat ate all the dish of candy! That’s all.. THANKYOU~!💗👹

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Trucanh

Teacher's comments: Hi, Your story is so interesting. However, you need to pay more attention on using right tense for the story. That should be :Past simple, right!!! So now, your mission is that you fix it again. Love you.

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Hello everyone . My unforgettable Mid_autumn memory is in last year . Last year Mid_autumn festival is was special because it has had Covid_19 virus and I must study online at home . Because of Covid_19 so I have had Mid_autumn festival online . In Mid_autumn festival has: There were a lot of activities in that day. We played, hang hung lanterns; lern learnt history of Mid_autumn festival; eat ate mooncake,... at home . And on that day my internet is was so slowly and very slowly so it is was laggy for about a minutes. Good bye

Teacher's comments:
Hi, well-done baby. But I wonder how you could play and hang laterns when you was online. hahaha. Just kidding
- Yout story happened in the past --> use Past Simple --> you forgot.
- Some sentences are grammatically wrong ( In Mid-autumn festival has)
- I think you can explain more to make your memory more interesting.

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My unforgettable memory about Mid - Autumn Day was in 2 years ago. I and my neighbor were celebrating the Mid-Autumn Festival on that day, everyone has spreaded food mats on top, in the middle of the hall, someone dressed up as Uncle Cuoi and Sister HANG, Uncle Cuoi and Sister Hang asked everyone about them and the moon.  Who can could answer the question will would get a gift. After answering questions and eating well, we played games like chase, cat chase mouse or magic family. We were very happy , I wish if that  don't have Covid - 19 we can do that again. there was no Covid 19, we could do that again.
Thank you for reading my story :)))

Teacher's comments:
Hi, Good-job, baby. You have used right tense for the story ( Past Simple) even though sometimes, you forgot. But that's ok, I believe you can fix it for next paragraphs.
Uncle Cuội and Sister Hang --> The Moon boy ( chú Cuội) and The Moon Lady ( Chị Hằng)

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My unforgettable memory with mid - autumn day was in last year. My family went to Hang Ma street. At here, it was very crowded. First, I saw a lot of lanterns, then when I went deeper, I bought some mid-autumn toys. There was a person pretending to be Sun Wukong who took a picture and gave me lollipops, but suddenly he said that the price was 20 thousand dong and we spent 20 thousand dong on something useless. Next, I went to see a very good lion dance. We ended up eating ice cream.

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Teacher's comments:
Anh Thư, your story is so funny. I'm sorry that I laughed. Well. you used well the right tense here - Past simple. Congratulation!
To make it better, you can write some feelings about that day at the end of the paragraph.

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My unforgettable mid autumn day is when Friday this week. That day I went to learnt English. Before I went to learnt English,  my class had a party of mid autumn, every school had party. I ate snack and fruits at my class and when I went to learnt learn English then , my teacher bought snacks for class and . Although (mặc dù) my friends were ate full , but they still ate and me too. And when my class ate, we answered the questions about mid autumn from our teacher texted and shared on from projector. And who answer right they could choose lollipop taste. I had one lollipop and when before 15 minutes our teacher talk  said that we could went  go to home before 15 minutes. And every student had 1 lollipop because our teacher let us choose one more lollipop. And thank you so much for reading to my story. Good bye.

Teacher's comments:
Wow, good-job, Phương Nhi, that's great story about our class, even though we has a small trouble from PL. I hope you still enjoyed it.
- You used right tense - Past simple. However, sometimes you misunderstood the structure that "to be" can not go with " regular Verbs".
- You use too much word " and" " then". You need to break the sentence in a right way.

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ah yes, the mid autumn festival. the holiday where we can buy stuff at school and sell some. the day we get to celebrate. except there's one thing that really changes my mind to only downs(deppresion). it kind of sucks.
so you remember 9/9/2022? yknow, the not festival because it was friday? you don't really know my pain then.
imagine losing a contest right at that day and only getting a stupid keychain. yup, that's me. the deppresion boy having even more deppresion.
my deppresion might sound fake, but i have the symptoms. these include:

irritability and agitation

feeling unusually tired

feeling hopeless

feeling guilty or worthless

feeling overwhelmingly sad

having difficulty focusing

feeling unmotivated

wanting to be left alone

having unexplained, minor aches and pains

losing empathy with others

moving or talking slowly

oh wait, we're not talking about my deppresion, right? well of course it is a yes. let me tell you the story.
it was 6:00pm. i just went into the class. it already sucks. i just sat down. still sucks. i ask my teacher about the news. she said i lost. i was so sad and mad i'd kill a person with a knife right away. that memory was stuck into my head like glue. i couldn't remove it. nobody knows i can't forget tragic incidents.
yup. that's my story. that day sucked.