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Shoe diorama

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Shoe diorama

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Group member : Sheikka

Alicia

Kevin

Madeline

Yi Hsiang

Concept:Family Ambition

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Hi guys! =D

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Hi , let's go to my house for discussions!

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Go tomorrow?

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Yar :P

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I can make it :)

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Same.

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Me too.

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I write a report for toworrow ._.

Location : Sheikka's house

Venue : Secret

Time : Undecided.

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LOL ok gd night :P

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Two more days before giving padlet . our diorama is already passed to teacher. O_o U guys nervous?

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Just okay , we should be able to pass our lit test .

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Do something for our padlet ._. or later we might not be able to pass for our padlet.

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Err.....

Day 1 : Discussion

Day 2 : Planning? Nah , Discussion

Day 3 : Pass up

Okay , faster discuss something!

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A simple way : How can we improve our shoe diorama project if we have some more days?

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1.We can add more decorations

2.We can add more details

3.We can add paint to the box for style

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Okay , my turn for now.

4.We can make our meeting more organised , instead of meetings that we don't focus on and play on our phone

5.We can make it more fun , motivate each other to make a better quality work and get good grades! :)

6.We can make it serious , meant for professionals only , to make us more serious about our work.

7.We can get a peaceful and quiet spot with nice scenery so that we will not feel depress or lazy about our work.

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Madeline , i do next :)

8.How about we make our story more interesting? So we can allow our readers (Mr Hosea Lee btw!) to continue read on and not feel bored about it.

9.How about making our story with actions? That shall make our readers think that the characters are cool! (Like when Hari arrived at Bombay , and the bus almost ran over him , then the bus driver is mad at them , and the policemen also make fun of Hari , telling us Hari is a easy target to pick on , like how the policemen taunted Hari and his other friend.)

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Alicia u only two ideas :P

10. We can choose to make a deeper and more complicated (not so , or readers (Mr Hosea Lee O_o) will just reduce our marks for complication , or like even they sort the parts of the story up , they still couldn't understand our story.

11.We can use the part 'Hopeless Drunk mens , dead drunk in the morning , what can they do for u?' (not very accurate) to tell that Mr De Silva hates drunktards , as they are useless , making it more easier for our readers to understand that Mr De Silva is actually mocking the drunktards (including his father) , not just saying about the drunktard's hopelessness.

12. Make the paper nicer for the readers , as they like nice handwriting. (kinda...)

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-_- I AM OUT OF IDEAS :< u stealers!

13.We can write about how Hari wished to soar in the sky , instead of tied to earth in a way that the readers can understand better, Hari wished for freedom , the thing everyone yearns for , except FOR us the city peoples , we only thinks of electronic gadgets , we have completely forgotten about freedom!

This line can tell us! That we , the city people should act before its too late! We are arrogant enough! We have polluted the air , land and water! Just for our pleasure! Just to live leisurely! And just for fun! We arent behaving like humans anymore! We have to act now!

14. We can write about how Hari experienced and explored the city , Bombay , and how he thinks about them. Like example , 'I can teach u how to make money,for a small fee' He knows that the city is much more dangerous than his peaceful area , Thul , He thinks that all Bombay people are evil , inhuman and creepy.(Background is city , hahaha!)

15. We can write about how Thul is scary too! We cannot say that Thul is peaceful! The brother at the other door threatens to kill Pinto , Pinto died in the end! Telling us that Thul is dangerous! Hari has to stop thinking about Bombay ! Think about his area inhumanity!

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Mr Hosea Lee ,

Our Discussion ends here today!

Sheikka : Ideas for box

Madeline : Ideas for meetings

Alicia : Ideas for making story more interesting

Yi Hsiang : Ideas for readers to feel excited about the story

Kevin : Ideas for a good story

Regards ,

Kevin and his Lit team

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The next day....

Btw we alr passed up our diorama project , what to do now?

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We are supposed to write the process of the shoe diorama project ._.

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Teacher allow discussions .....

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Errr.... What kind of person is Hari to you?

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Wah liao hard leh... :<

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I think Hari is a stressed person , as he already shown that he wanted to soar up in the sky , instead of being tied to earth. He stated that he wanted his father to die , he did not say that with anger , but with hope , this is why i think that Hari is a stressed person.

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I think Hari is a smart person , although he does not excels in studies , he is smart enough not to be trick by those tricksters , like the beggar , he wanted to teach Hari about dangerous jobs (and a small fee),but Hari walked away instead , ignoring the beggar to avoid getting into trouble

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I think Hari is a mature person , he said to Lila that he will get a job , he also have thoughts of his family starving , that leads to him more determined to get a job , he also cares for the family as he does not want his family to starve to the death , and do not play with his friends anymore .

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I think Hari is a brave person , he has the bravery to cross the boat to Bombay , and he dont flinch from fear . Hari does not fear the city people , instead , he walk with his head upright instead of looking down , and has a strong heart.

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I think Hari is a gullible and dumb person , he thinks only the city people is much more evil than them , actually , the village and the city is the same , Hari should think of his own village , and he doesnt even believe that there is going to be a factory build , until he go to Bombay and known the truth .

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Well , i guess that is all for today , toworrow is passing day xD

Regards,

Kevin and his Lit team