# data[].attributes.body
more material test on cotton,I’ll tell you more about my thoughts later.

# data[].attributes.body
It's nice to see your sketches and would be great if you could develop these further. it might be good to include some reflection about the direction you are choosing to head in and how that ties back to your research and moodboard; the meaning behing your persona and hat.

Do include some pictures of the paper prototype when possible, keep going!

# data[].attributes.body
It's great to see the first prototype, It would be great to incorporate more reflection on how it ties back to your original idea and moodboard. You had some really interesting references on form, material and texture. Think about how you would bring these into your next step, to help communicate the qualities of your hat.

# data[].attributes.body
It's great to see you incorporate the feedback from last time to think about the cloud ina more structural sense. The last image is very interesting and I would like to know more. Would you be able to include some reflection if possible? I think the paper experiments works well to give a sense of the visual form, but the experiments with the cotton are stronger and push this idea further. I would love to know more about how you plan to use the light as well. Keep going!

# data[].attributes.body
It's great to see your first prototype and there is a nice connection with your research. Think about how you can be more experimental with the hat through its form. Perhaps it's a good idea to revisit your persona and build from there. It would be great to see you incorporate some more of the story-elements in your moodboard. Great work so far, keep going!

# data[].attributes.body
Great first experiment, connects well with your moodboard. There is a real sense of emotion in the idea and I like how you're working it out.

What materials do you plan to use in the final hat? will be interesting to think about this and how will you incorporate colour to continue with the meaning? The construction is working well. Think about how the strips of paper will connect to what's underneath - is it going to be fabric or something else? I think the photography and staging will be really important for you as well?

# data[].attributes.body
The ideas are really nice and it's good to see you consider multiple options. I think you're headed in the right direction, the bird's nest is a strong metaphor for the hat.

It's good to see you work out the structure and form through the paper prototype. Think about what material you will use for the final nest and how it will contribute to the overall structure. Really great experiments, keep going!

# data[].attributes.body
It's great to see the connections between your sketches, ideas and prototypes. The incorporation of folding techniques is working well.

It would be good to think about what materials you will use in the final hat and how the different materials will come together and be held by the structure. Keep going!

# data[].attributes.body
You have some amazing ideas and it's great to see you demonstrate an understanding of what you think would work and what wouldn't.

I think the prototype is a strong interpretation of your sketch and I like the idea between animals and humans. What materials are you planning to use in the final design? Make sure the structure is able to hold everything up!

Excited to see where you go!

# data[].attributes.body
It's amazing to see your process. You've nailed the method you should be working in. I agree with you that at the moment there is a huge emphasis on form but I think that's a good thing. Once you've nailed the form, you can start to add the ornamental elements to communicate more of the emotions you're looking for in the design.

# data[].attributes.body
Your sketches have some interesting ideas but it's difficult to understand from the images. They are either very small or very light. Try to photograph them with more contrast and include more lighting.

It would be good to see a physical prototype and include some reflective writing to communicate how your hat is showcasing your ideas.

# data[].attributes.body
The sketches are fantastic. The emotional qualities are really strong and it's good to see the connection with your research material as well.

It's great to see you start testing the structure. Maybe you can take images from a few more angles, it's a bit difficult to tell which part of the hat this is. Either way, I think your ideas are really strong and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this. Maybe try to simplify some of the form, and be careful about which materials you pick - there is a lot of intricacy and detail in your sketches which may/ may not be hard to achieve depending on the material choice.

# data[].attributes.body
It's good to see you making a prototype but the meaning is unclear. Try to include some reflective writing about how this helps communicate the persona/meaning behind your chosen hat.

# data[].attributes.body
This is a really nice prototype. It's clear that you're thinking of structure and meaning. Would be great to incorporate some other materials now and also colour. Maybe you can simplify the folding pattern a bit.

Excited to see where you take this!

# data[].attributes.body
Also a small material test on cotton