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https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/weed

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/words-word-form-word-choice-and-word-order-17/

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"the older ones... the other generation"

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"the older ones... the other generation"

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Recosider word choice here.

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Make sure this comes later in your outline, after your story.

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2014/03/11/using-sources-primary-and-secondary-sources/

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/using-sources-quoting-paraphrasing-and-citing-10/

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/verb-tenses-and-time-meanings-32/

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http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/verb-tenses-and-time-meanings-20/

or
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/verb-tenses-and-time-meanings/

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Must it be only Europeans? Only Syrians?

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Must it be only Europeans? Only Syrians?

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Can Fleming's principles be extended to other regions?

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https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2021/05/24/use-a-wh-clause-for-a-short-quotation/

and
http://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/26/mechanics-8

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Yes, this edit solves the original problem in your summary.

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Yes, this edit solves the original problem in your summary.

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It is grammatically correct to say "when encountering..", but it makes the sentence vague. Readers will have no idea about the subject of the sentence.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/meaning-vague-unclear-contradictory-and-erroneous-statements/

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People usually become sad and emotional knowing that parting from home is irrevocable, and this is the main reason for them to feel hiraeth. Especially when people encounter impressive scenes from their previous hometowns, this kind of feeling will become stronger, says Xue.

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According to my question, the example I gave should be as general as the whole United States. In this way, I should not include those that are specific to UCSB.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2015/12/14/a-transitional-idea-is-missing/

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What kind of freedom and relief can students obtain in the US? Weihang Zhang maintains that they come from both the natural environment and social ideology. Freedom in the US enlightens students’ minds and releases their stress.

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This is a transition problem. The previous sentence considers what people should think of the refugees, and the following one is about the actions they can take. In this way, the transitional sentence should be "actions to take include..." rather than "to solve this problem".
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2015/12/14/wrong-or-missing-transition/

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How can Europeans help Syrian refugees? Melissa Fleming maintains that they should care more about saving others’ lives than the different life brought by accepting refugees. The actions to take include solving the problems that drove them away from their homes, such as safety, culture, and economy. Europeans should try to help them thrive in their hometown and persecution while offering refugees investment in the shelter and humanitarian care, says Fleming.

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We consider wording problems here. "Due to" and "caused by" have similar meanings, but "caused by" is better.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/24/words-word-form-word-choice-and-word-order/

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The expression is too wordy. The expressions including those about "people" and "situation" are not that necessary. https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/33/

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and those in Eastern Uganda suffer from long droughts and severe floods caused by climate change, but they should not be responsible for this. These people need help, and the whole world will be affected by man-made climate change, says Robinson.

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Why should people care about man-made climate change? Mary Robinson claims that it threatens human rights and the world's future, which is not fair to many people. The whole country of the Republic of Kiribati is submerged by rising sea levels,

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As it is a sentence with a negative meaning, we should decide the wording carefully with the meaning. The "lifestyle" and "idea" are parallel, so I should use "or" instead of "and".
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/articles-determiners-and-quantifiers/

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As a result, I think the cultural difference wants to tell me that there is no right lifestyle or idea, but only those following one culture and those following others.

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I should delete "individual" here because it is indicated in the sentence. "Interests", the plural form, means that everyone has different extracurricular interests.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/words-word-form-word-choice-and-word-order-9/

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Moreover, all kinds of dressing are welcomed, and the school supports students' extracurricular interests. Of course, there are also drawbacks brought by this freedom. I can usually smell the weeds, smoke, and wine in my dorm, and I can hear student couples making noise in the room next to me.

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It is wordy. There is no need to include "wrong ideas" after "unusual ideas" according to the meaning of this sentence.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/33/

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Unique imaginations and ideas are graded below average. However, UCSB encourages uniqueness, allowing students to choose different courses in various fields. Unusual ideas are considered interesting by teachers, which encourages students to share whatever they think.

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"Gesture" is a countable noun, so we should pay attention to its form. Here, as there is no article before it, we should use the plural form, which is "gectures".
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/word-form/

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Students are ordered to study the same subjects, play the same sports, and dress in the same way in traditional Chinese schools. There are also rules limiting students' sitting gestures in class and even the way to speak to teachers.

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Saying "my home country" only is a little bit vague. In order to make my sentence easier for readers to understand, I should add the name of my home country, which is "China".
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/25/meaning-vague-unclear-contradictory-and-erroneous-statements/

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The most obvious cultural difference between Santa Barbara and my home country, China, is reflected in class. In China, individuality is discouraged and even forbidden.

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If I use "there is not", I should add "any" after that. "No" has the same meaning as "not any". In this way, I should change "not" to "no", which is the correct and concise choice.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/24/words-word-form-word-choice-and-word-order/

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When connecting "change" and the noun after it, we should use "in" rather than "of". This is a set phrase.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/19/preposition-choice/

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Jerram Brown documented the change in jay's reproductive clock caused by climate change, making the female jays lay eggs earlier.

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The temperature in the region, Brown said, increased 2.7 degree Celsius in 27 years, encouraging earlier breeding and making them burn more weight. Although there is no direct proof of this theory, Brown still believed that all the evidences fit in.

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In this sentence, "is" does not conform with the noun "changes". As we usually use "climate change" rather than "climate changes", I should change "changes" into "change".
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/27/verb-form-5/

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Military leaders warn that more conflicts and migration brought by global warming will increase the world's security threats. Maj Gen Munir Munizuzzaman claimed that climate change is the most severe threat now because there will be too many refuges to migrate by then.

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The word after "and" should be a noun as "assessment" is a noun. "Analyze" is a verb, so I should use "analysis", the noun version.
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2011/12/27/verb-form-5/
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/11/parallel-structure/

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My peers and I are quite different from the older ones. My roommate Kate, an econ student, usually shows me how climate changes will affect agriculture and afterward average income; my friend Zoey even talks about the assessment and analysis of climate using data science, which is really a different view compared to the other generation.

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The plural verb “affect” does not conform to the singular subject “an important theme". In this way, it should be changed into "affects".
https://emswriting.wordpress.com/2012/01/11/subject-verb-agreement/

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It is true that young people see climate actions from a different perspective than older generations do. When my parents talk about climate changes and their consequences, what comes first to their mind is the warm winter. Lacking related education and knowledge about this topic at a young age, they never consider climate actions an important theme that largely affects our everyday lives.