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I've never been to Canada but I really want to. 

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CORRECTEUR :CHARLES BOU KHALED
1)Titre :CN tower bien

2)Lieu: canada moyen

3)localisation:Toronto bien

4)Pronom relatif determinant: that moyen (dernière ligne i want to explain that)and (this tower première phrase)and (this picture trosième phrase)

5)Phrase au préterit simple: bien (I choosed)

6)Phrase au présent simple: bien (mesure première phrase)and (want  dernière phrase)and (is trosième phrase)

7)Phrase Be +ing: Non présente
ex:I'm going to visit it in the summer.
There is ,There are:non présent
ex : There are windows.

8)BRAVO VOUS AVEZ UTILISE DU PRESENT PERFECT(HAS BEEN deuxième phrases

Explication de la note: assez bonne analyse veuillez pour la prochaine fois mettre votre opinion. Manque de descriptions. Pas de conclusion.MAis une bonne expression dans l'ensemble merci de vous donner plus de mal.
NOTE ATTRIBUEE:(12,5)

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Vote for me and you will be happy.Charles

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Vote for me and you will be happy.Charles

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Vote for me and you will be happy. Charles

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I like polar bear because it is a majestuous animal. He is endangered because there are poaching and the melt of iceberg. When we are at school or at home, other people are killing polar bear. They are killed by our pollution. We must stop. We must help this animal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It is important for the word of to save polar bear!!!!!!!

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by Louis Bain-Thouverez
This tower mesure 553 meters.
We can find it in Toronto.au Canada
IT WAS BUILT;
It has been built Cunder 1973 and 1976. I choosed this picture because the Canada is not only a natural land but it's a strong land too and I i want to explain that. Where is your conclusion my friend??????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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In Canada there some beautiful landscapes.And there is a lot of snow and different types of trees , like fir or trees that stay in winter.

i really want to be the winner of the Canada's Day Challenge so you can vote for me.

Animals life
In Canada there are lot of animals .These are made for support snow and winter .There are moose ,wolves ,polar beers and foxes(white foxes or red)

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I choose this picture in first time because I think it is beautiful. For people Canada is very naturally and it's true but they forget the big town. It's Toronto, the Canadian capital. We look CN tower, the communication tower. There are many building. The skyline in dusk is absolutely beautiful and reflexion on water of town's lights is breath taking.

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(by Lola d'Esménard)
I choose this picture because Ottawa is very well represented. We can see a huge castle in the background. The Ottawa River flows through the city in the foreground. It is the main tributary of the Saint Laurent river. There are two boats crossing the river. There is a small forest surrounding the river. I find this activity very simple.  I think it's amazing and wonderful !
In conclusion, this image is exceptional and represents Canada perfectly.

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Colorfull CanadaThe Canada is a country with a very interresting history. Firstly it was discovered in 1534 by Jaques Cartier. At this time it was occuped by the Aboriginal wo were called the First Nation by the European. Then the European start to set up colonies in Canada. For be more accurate the contry who set up colonies were : France, Spain, England and the Dutch . The major explorateur were Jaques Cartier who discover Quebec , Camuel Champlain who found the first European settlement in Canada. The European country colonise Canada that was for have a new path towards the China. In 1673, the Seven Years wars ended it oppose France against the Brittain. After that France lose, it have to let all it canadian colonies to the Brittain. After this the Brittain decide do regroup all it colonies in America  in one. In 1960 the Quiet Revolution begin in Canada especially in Quebec who ended towards 1977. I choose this picture because I think that is a good description of the Canada. We see in the foreground a beautiful lake wich is surrounded by a forest,in the backgroung we see a big mountain wich is full of snow. I think that is represent the nature which is important , in Canada there is about 48 national parks either 37 more than France. This photo represent for me a country where the nature is preserved.

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Colorfull CanadaThe Canada is a country with a very interresting history. Firstly it was discovered in 1534 by Jaques Cartier. At this time it was occuped by the Aboriginal wo were called the First Nation by the European. Then the European start to set up colonies in Canada. For be more accurate the contry who set up colonies were : France, Spain, England and the Dutch . The major explorateur were Jaques Cartier who discover Quebec , Camuel Champlain who found the first European settlement in Canada. The European country colonise Canada that was for have a new path towards the China. In 1673, the Seven Years wars ended it oppose France against the Brittain. After that France lose, it have to let all it canadian colonies to the Brittain. After this the Brittain decide do regroup all it colonies in America  in one. In 1960 the Quiet Revolution begin in Canada especially in Quebec who ended towards 1977. I choose this picture because I think that is a good description of the Canada. We see in the foreground a beautiful lake wich is surrounded by a forest,in the backgroung we see a big mountain wich is full of snow. I think that is represent the nature which is important , in Canada there is about 48 national parks either 37 more than France. This photo represent for me a country where the nature is preserved.

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In Canada there is a lot of animals like moose, wolves, polar beers and more. I choose this picture to highlight (déterminant???)diversity (of what??who??) in Canada.We can see a wolve that hunt. It shows that Canada has a lot of natural spaces.
By Titouan Hemon

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by Kim Dang Tran
Peggys Point Lighthouse, also known as Peggys Cove Lighthouse, is an active lighthouse and an iconic Canadian image. Located within Peggy's Cove, Nova Scotia, it is one of the busiest tourist attractions in the province and is a prime attraction on the Lighthouse Trail scenic drive. The lighthouse marks the eastern entrance of St. Margarets Bay and is officially known as the Peggys Point Lighthouse.In the foreground we can see some granite and it's only on the backround that we can see the lighthouse, surrounded by water. I chose this monument because this lighthouse is one of the most-photographed structures in Atlantic Canada and one of the most recognizable lighthouses in the world.

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National park of Jasper, in Alberta (by Morgane Deparpe)

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National park of Jasper, in Alberta (by Morgane Deparpe)

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One of the most famous and beautiful places in Canada, the national park of Jasper is a protected and natural park. It is situated in Alberta, in the northwest of Canada.
In this picture There is a forest between mountains. Some of the mountains are snow-covered. We can also see in the back of the picture a river, hidden by trees.
I choose this place because ,  I love national parks, the nature and the animals. It's a place very peaceful and quiet and that is what I like.

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This is a photo of Vancouver which is located in Canadan. In the foreground, we see pedestrians and canadian cars. On the background, there are many very tall buildings and office towers. And in the third plane, there are mountains.  Their summit is a little snowy.
This photo is very well taken and represents this city well . It represents the canadian mood !

Fiche 1 :  Rédaction de: Éléa Chrétiens  Correcteur : Léonor Guerre

1.      Titre:Vancouver

2.      Lieu :Vancouvert

3.      Localisation :British Columbia

4.      Pronoms relatifs, déterminants : this , it

5.      Déterminants a(n), the ou Ø : on the , in the , their , the

6.      Phrases au Prétérit simple :This is a photo of Vancouver which is located in Canadan.

7.      Phrases au Présent simple :we see pedestrians and canadian cars.
On the background, there are many very tall buildings and office towers.
And in the third plane, there are mountains.
Their summit is a little snowy.
This photo is very well taken and represents this city well . It
It represents the canadian mood !

Phrases au Présent Be+ Ving :
Il n'y en as pas

9.      There is... / There are :
there are many very tall buildings and office towers.
there are mountains

10.   Le passif (is/was/were +Ved) :

This is a photo of Vancouver which is located in Canadan

Note attribuée : ………… Explication courte de la note : …....

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(by Agathe Monlouis)

I choose this picture because I think it represent.. very well Canada. We can see the beautiful Northern Lights of Canada in the sky. In the first plan, there is an Inuits camp with tents. Behind the camp there is a forest of fir and birch trees that represent (with de maple tree) the Canada. Also there is some snow in the ground. And in the back, we can see a lake. All of theses elements represent the nature of Canada.

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by Ael Brogné

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by Virgile Charpentier
This museum is situated in Toronto. It is the 5th biggest museum of North America. It has more than 6M objects. The museum has works of art and dinosaur fossils. It was inaugurated on March 14, 1914. I chose this place in Canada because it shows us the Canadian culture and this museum is a very big structure.
Rédaction de Virgile Charpentier Correcteur : Ael Brogné

1.      Titre : Royal Ontario Museum

2.      Lieu : In Ontario

3.      Localisation : In The Canada

4.      Pronoms relatifs, déterminants : Présence de "Tt" , "The" ou encore "This"

5.      Déterminants a(n), the ou Ø :  "The museum" and " the Canadian culture".

7.      Phrases au Présent simple : "It has" , "has works".

8.      Phrases au Présent Be+ Ving :

9.      There is... / There are : pas de présence de ces expressions

10.   Le passif (is/was/were +Ved) : "was inaugurated" , "is situated"

Note attribuée : 16,5          Explication courte de la note : Virgile a de très bonnes capacités dans ses expressions et donne des détails bien précis.
Et il donne ses impressions ce qui fait qu'il respecte les consignes.
Il faudrait peut etre juste fair un peu plus de descriptions mais dans l'ensemble cela est plutot bien.

franchement Ael bravo tu m'as fait mourrir de rire j'ai jamais vu un commentaire aussi drôle

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By Timothée LOYER (corrected by Jeanne Blanc)
I choose this picture because this colors are pretty. The colors in the photo are bright. The picture is also magnificent and I feel an impression of escape and freedom. This reminds us of travels. In the foreground there is a beautiful river with the reflections of the mountains. We can also see stones in the water. In the background, there are mountains with snow. There is also a fir forest. The sky is blue, without cloud. There is therefore sun.

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Devoir sur Montréal By Allan Paint

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1. Choose a picture
2. Write a title
3.  Explain your choice of the place in Canada in 5-7ph (Décrire une image+Donner ses impressions)

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by Joachim Berthier
Correcteur : Allan Paint
Titre, nom et prenom : Hockey est trop simple, pouvait mettre "Hockey in Canada" par exemple, nom et prenom réspectés, 1,5/2
Consigne réspectée: 1/1
Introduction, description et conclusion : 3/3
Avis personnel et justification : 1/1
Lexique background and foreground : non utilisés 0/2
Connecteurs: présents 1/1
Description : avancée et précise
Temps : pas de prétérit 1/2
Lexique : varié mais pas assez développé 1/3
Orthographe : 1/1
Pronom relatif et déterminants présents : 2/2

I  have chosen this picture because it shows Canada. On this picture, I see lots of hockey players in the foreground  and snow floor in the background. These players are playing hockey . They seem very focused .
Hockey is a nice, spectacular, and funny sport and it is a very popular sport in  Canada because it is very cold country and there is a lot of ice . I would like to play hockey.
To conclude, I think that this picture was very beautiful and it represented well  Canada.

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Tadoussac , a beautiful village  (by Ewene Pouilloux)

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Tadoussac , a beautiful village  (by Ewene Pouilloux)

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This picture shows the small village of Tadoussac. We can see on the foreground the village and a forest .On the background there is a magnificent scenery with the river St Laurent  and mountains.  I choose this landmark 'cause  when I went to Canada, I visited this town and it was fantastic ! We can do cruise for see whales( July to october), or just admire the landscape : )
There are also shops selling souvenirs memories and local food such as maple syrup , wich is very good!!
This village is also part of the club of the most beautiful bays of the world!

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The Fairmont Chateau Whistler(by Camille Souchier)

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The Fairmont Chateau Whistler(by Camille Souchier)

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I choose this image of The Fairmont Chateau Whistler in Canada because I thought the landscape was very beautiful.
Indeed, in background, we can see mountains and fir trees. In foreground, there's snow.
I've never been to Canada but I really want to.
The Chateau is an hotel, it's bright and tall. It's located in British Columbia in Canada.
British Columbia is below Yukon. This is a very nice hotel located near The Mount Blackcomb.
I'm trying to travel when I see the photo !

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by Blandine Seguin
Niagara Falls are one of the 10 most spectaculars and populars waterfalls in the world. This is both in Canada and USA. There are three water falls.
We can see in this picture the Canadian Horseshoe Falls in the middle of the photo on the right.
It is approximately 52 metres high and the crest is estimated to be 625 metres wide.
In the picture, there is in the background on the left, the American Falls which has a height of 56 metres and a crest of 328 metres.
There is also the Bridal Veil Falls but we can't see this waterfall in this picture.
I choose this place of Canada beacause I very like it and for me it's beautiful.

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Aspect général et la clarté
Titre+ nom et pronom 2 pt
Respect de consigne - 1 pnt
Organisation
Introduction, description, conclusion-3pts
Avis personnel et justification -1 pts
Qualité d'expression
-lexique  (background/foreground) - 2pts
-connecteurs (and, but, whereas) -1pnt
-description (sommaire/évocation de détails plus spécifiques) -2pts
- Temps (2 présents, préterite simple) 2 pts
Contenu et grammaire
-Lexique limité/varié/riche/précis - 3 pts
- Orthographie - 1 pnt
- Prenons relatifs, déterminants -2 pts

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By Lison Bruneau
THIS is the Quebec ,is a City where we speak french and English.it’s reputed for their accent .I choose this place because  there is the sea and the montains and when  it snow it’s very  beautiful .That look live very quiet but is a place where a lot of People come .

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by Anatole Besnard
This picture represents the Toronto fc football stadium. His name is BMO Field. This stade has a capacity of 30 000 peoples. It is white outside and red inside. In the background there are many supporters and in the foreground there is the lawn. This stadium welcome too the matchs of Canadians nationals teams of rugby and football(soccer). It is located in Toronto, in the south est of Canada.

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BY LEONOR GUERRE
Corrected by Anatole
This is a picture of Winnipeg lake.
It is in Manitoba country on the north of Canada.
It's chared borders with the United states.
This pictures is very beautiful .
You can see a wonderful Sunset.
In the forground there four people.
In the badground there are the beautiful Sunset and a person swimming.
I chose  this picture beaucause i like swimming and Sunset.
I think this lake was splendid in summer.
I would like to go on this place with my friends for do a picnic.

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By Mael Bourdin
Corrected by Cyrus

I choose this picture because i I find of its that it is a beautiful city with there its bridges. On this photo there are many tall buildings. This city is Lightning lit up. We have the impression that this city is not polluated polluted because the sky is blue and there are not clouds. I want to go to Calgary's city because it's cold because in french France the temperature is hot with the in summer while over there the temperature is little cold colder (12° celsius) and we can skiing ski and sled in summer ❤.There are many beautiful lakes as the Louise Lake too. So I suggest to explore exploring this pretty nice region and discover discovering the landscape of Calgary.

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By Cyrus Moreau

In this photo, I find there is the symbol of the history of the Quebec.

We can see at the foreground, the statue of Honoré Mercier, the Prime Minister of the Quebec from 1887 to 1891. Honoré Mercier stands at the top of a high column, in an attitude magnifying the presence and the authority of the politician.

At the background, there is the Parliament of Quebec surrounded by a large garden. The architect Eugène-Etienne Taché had been trained by one of the city’s most renowned architects, Charles Baillairgé. His plan adopted an innovative, Second Empire style, which had been very popular in France after the Louvre’s extension in the 1850s.

I like this monument because I appreciate its style  and the beautiful garden around.

Fiche 1 :Rédaction de Cyrus MOREAU Correcteur : Thibaud CHOQUET

1.Titre:Quebec Parliament Building

2. Lieu :Quebec

3. Localisation :in the east of Canada

4. Pronoms relatifs, déterminants :«Wich», « this », « the »

5. Déterminants a(n), the ou Ø : « a large garden », « an attitude », « the politician »,

6. Phrases au Prétérit simple : « His plan adopted... »

7. Phrases au Présent simple : « I find... »

8. Phrases au Présent Be+ Ving : /

9. There is... / There are :I « I find there is... »

1. Le passif (is/was/were +Ved) : « surrounded »

Note attribuée : 19,5

Explication courte de la note : très bonne présentation avec beaucoup de descriptions précises et un vocabulaire riche et varié, ainsi qu'une bonne maîtrise du temps. Il ne manque juste le présent Be+ing.