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2. The language in that example of HL Essay is informal and not very serious, because of the words that are use. The terminology is a coloquial one, not an academic english, being a not well written HL essay.

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Complete Exercise 7.7. Pg. 310: 1. Make annotations on: Inappropriate 2. Vocabulary, 3.  incoherent ideas, 4. ask questions about the essay, 5, make suggestions for rewording, 6. insert missing ideas,7.  underline key sentences, 8. identify useful phrases, 9. give general feedback.

2: The language is not inappropiate but it is informal due to the type of communication.
3. Some incoherent ideas are the one who makes references of other people talking because she is not clear with some external person
4: Why are people not answering completly?
HOw was the moment created?
5. Maybe more clarity between ideas.
6. Missing ideas of how the person interviewed acted
8. The conclusion.
9. It was good but wasnt very clear in what said each person.

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Complete Exercise 7.7. Pg. 310: 1. Make annotations on: Inappropriate 2. Vocabulary, 3.  incoherent ideas, 4. ask questions about the essay, 5, make suggestions for rewording, 6. insert missing ideas,7.  underline key sentences, 8. identify useful phrases, 9. give general feedback. 

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Complete Exercise 7.7. Pg. 310: 1. Make annotations on: Inappropriate 2. Vocabulary, 3.  incoherent ideas, 4. ask questions about the essay, 5, make suggestions for rewording, 6. insert missing ideas,7.  underline key sentences, 8. identify useful phrases, 9. give general feedback. 