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First of all, mistakes are a key paryt of discovery cause of it being key. to be exact, researched done by a director of the National History Museum of Denmark, Peter Kjærgaard states, "hd

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Begin to with,When you make a mistake it is a key part of discovery because in life people don't know what is good or bad and when you  make a mistake  it will be fine because, you will know not to do it again.

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firstly, mistakes are a key part of discovery because of knowledge you gain from the mistakes that are made. Walt Disney made many mistakes before he created the well known Disney animations; people even told him that he had no imagination and would never do anything good in his life(ink.com). This evidence signifies that mistakes are a key part of discovery because if Walt never went to this newspaper editor then he would never had worked as hard as he did in his life and we possibly would never had Disney.

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Mistakes are a key part of discovery through accidents. First of all,  a German professor named Wilhelm Conrad Roentgen, discovered the x ray while experimenting on  the passing of electric current through gases (explorable.com).This shows me,  he didn't try to create the x ray, yet he did. If he didn't discover the x ray the medical would not be as advanced as it is today.  Some may argue, accidents are not a key part of discovery. They may say, accidents are a scientist's error and can harm themselves and others. Although this is true accidents can create a very good thing such as the microwave, or the x ray.

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Firstly, mistakes are a key part of discovery because of knowledge you gain from the mistakes. Walt Disney made many mistakes before he created the well known Disney animations; people even told his that he had no imagination and wouldn't make it in the industry (

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To begin with, mistakes are part of discovery and your everyday life. No one is perfect, we make mistakes all the time, and some mistakes we make over and over ( psychologytoday.com). This evidence reveals,that even if we make a mistake you keep trying until you get it and then you will eventually become a pro at whatever your task is. Some may argue that people do not make mistakes in life.

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kaleb gardner   First of all, mistakes are a key part of discovery cause of it being key. To be exact ,researched  done by a director of the National History Museum of Denmark Peter Kjærgaard state,

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kaleb gardner   First of all, mistakes are a key part of discovery cause of it being key. To be exact ,researched  done by a director of the National History Museum of Denmark Peter Kjærgaard state,

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First of all,  mistakes are a key part of discovery because they sometimes lead to new things you know. For example,  inventor Richard Jones a naval engineer was trying to make

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To begin with, mistakes are a key part of discovery because they sometimes lead to greatness. To inform, preforming a new task you are almost bound to mess up (Mistakes: A Key to Learning.) This shows me, after making a error , you will learn from it and correct your self. With this in mind, in the passage "Mistakes: A Key to Learning" the author explains that when you make repeated mistakes you eventually learn motor skills and transition from not being able to do it, to having controlled movements. This reveals that without having errors new findings or abilities wouldn't teach you.

Christian Conrad - did not start with capital

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First things first, when you feel like your an epic fail, take a deep breath and reset easy. You're not the first person to encounter failure. Mistakes are a key part of discovery because making mistakes gain more knowledge about what's yet to come. In addition, Albert Einstein had difficulties learning at a traditional manner and communicating with others however, he won a Nobel prize in physics for the discovery of (Business Insiders).

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Read the following writing prompt and respond by writing a Key Idea, Evidence (Do NOT forget to INTRODUCE EVIDENCE CORRECTLY), Analysis (NOT OBVIOUS-BOTH parts), AND a Counter Argument (Counterclaim , Reason, & Rebuttal)
***You must find your evidence through ONLINE RESEARCH!!!
***Be sure to comment on three peers-One PRO and One CON (correction).

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Write an essay in which you take a position on whether or not mistakes are a key part of discovery. Use the information found through online research to support your points.

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Fist of all, mistakes are a key part of discovery because mistakes tell us what we did wrong.

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First of all, mistakes are key part of discovery because we have to learn from our mistakes and improve

Toby - incomplete need punctuation

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First of all, mistakes are a key part of discovery because mistakes tell us what we did wrong. To be exact, addiction.com states, "when people do drugs they find out how dangerous it really is so they go to rehab" (addictions.com). This evidence reveals that they found how dangerous it is so they didn't want to die so they are trying to get sober. They could die right after they take the drug. Some people think that mistakes are not a key part because if we make a mistake it wont show u how to do it correctly. This may be true but when you make a mistake you will know not to try the same thing again. You will try something until you get it right. Mistakes can take you a long way.

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To begin with, it's no secret that sometimes great discoveries come as a result of really big mistakes.  Some people think that you must have errors and mistakes in order to make discoveries. Well, others think that is ridiculous! But by making mistakes you can fix what you've done wrong.

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To begin with, mistakes are a part of discovery because they help us realize the right way to do something. To inform, when we make a mistake we remember so the next time that event occurs our mistake wont happen again. "Our brains store memories of past blunders. We then use those memories to improve how well we do in future attempts, a new study finds" (mistakes: a key to learning). This quote demonstrates we don't like to mess up ,so we remember when we do so when the next time the event occurs we wont mess up. Similarly, when i make a mistake i try and remember it so i don't mess up in the future. The opposing view is some people don't learn from their mistakes. This may be true but most people have common sense and can tell how to better their selves for the next time their in that situation.

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First of all, mistakes are a very important part of discovery due to new knowledge gained. To explain, Jackie Robinson, the first black major league baseball player, had multiple mistakes that he made in his career, but learned from them and became one of the best players in history (Jackie Robinson). This shows me,  that failing opens up two doors, you can even learn from it, or never try again. Your mistakes give you a choice, and you character is judged by what you choose. Some people think, mistakes hold you back from completing your goals. This may be true but,

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to begin with, what does school grades do to you, to explain about grades, grades are scores took by the students doing there work to show independence and trust to the community, if there working hard and focus they will succeed in life, they will achieve a college degree, much more better jobs, get extra dough on the way and not to worry much about taxes. That seems pretty fair and promising but then what happens to the ones that fail there grades and get held in school? simple but opposite of passing school, your taxes will be in high prices and continue to rise each time and your jobs will give you such a minimum wage you will not be able to survive and live in a few years as they pay there own taxes taking your property from your vehicle to the house. So its best to keep working on your grades and stay focus instead of killing yourself dropping your grades and not succeeding, good luck fellas.

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Adryanna Stanley                    To begin with, mistakes are a key part of discoveries because they teach you wrong from right at lets you know what you need to fix and be better at. for example a quote says "sometimes you have to make big mistakes to figure out how to make things right, mistakes are painful but there the only way to find out reality". this comes to show that making mistakes is a part of life and sometimes you have to make mistakes and take chances in order to succeed and accomplish something. To explain, mistakes lead to a great destination. all in all, mistakes are a huge key part of life.     

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Adryanna Stanley                    To begin with, mistakes are a key part of discoveries because they teach you wrong from right at lets you know what you need to fix and be better at. for example a quote says "sometimes you have to make big mistakes to figure out how to make things right, mistakes are painful but there the only way to find out reality". this comes to show that making mistakes is a part of life and sometimes you have to make mistakes and take chances in order to succeed and accomplish something. To explain, mistakes lead to a great destination. all in all, mistakes are a huge key part of life.     

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To begin with, mistakes are a part of discovery. First of all without them we would not know right from wrong, our brain remembers and stores our past mistakes which then help us improve our future(Mistakes: A Key to Learning). This evidence signifies why when we are learning and we get a question wrong we will not likely give the same answer. This is because we remember we got that one wrong and will give a new answer that will help boost our grade.

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To begin with, mistakes play a huge role in making discoveries because it lets us learn from our mistakes. Specifically,

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To inform, making a mistake is a key ingredient in the recipe for discovery. Walt Disney, one of the best producers of our time used failure to inspire his creations, "

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To begin with,

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First things first, mistakes are a key part of discovery because you can learn from your imperfections. In fact, being flawed can possibly led to being successful.

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First things first, mistakes is a key part to discovery because of nothings perfect and things are difficult. To be exact, in the text of "A story for Shawn", he said,"i try to remember that i can ask for help if i need it. i will try to remember that it is okay if i don't have the highest grade in the class. After all, nobody's perfect"! This shows me that mistakes should take place because it should always be a second try which should be more perfect. To compromise, you can think of this being like a life line game because if you had three lives then you could lose one and have a second chance at it. This may be true but some people think that second chances may not appear. Well however, you can always find a way to try again.

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First thing first, mistakes is an key part of discovery because when u make an mistake you always learn them sooner or later which sooner you'll become an great at the things you do.

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First things first, mistakes are a big part of discovery because of trial and error. To point out, Penicillin, a miraculous drug that cures multiple physical pain was created by accident. "...Left a petri dish out in the lab by accident! He experimented with the mould and found that it killed a number of disease-causing bacteria." (A Happy Accident: Fleming's Penicillin). This evidence illustrates Sir Alexander Fleming made a great discovering by being irresponsible and not taking care of his laboratory. Mistakes help discover greatness in life and only true discovery masterminds can make a mistake be truly great. Some may argue, mistakes only lead to a tragic event. Slinkies were made to support ships and because of that mistake the creator, Richard James, had missed out on the more money that would have come in the equipment for the ships. some may say that mistakes are bad but they are mistaken.

christian conrad- did not finish

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To begin with, mistakes are a key part of discovery because it helps you if you do something wrong then you know how to do whatever you you did wrong right

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To begin with, mistakes are an key to discovery because it helps you know the things you are not supposed to do. To be exact when you mess up or make a mistake you will automatically learn from it. When you make a mistake it doesn't mean failure "Mistakes does not equal failure -unless and until we give them power to be a failure" {addiction.com}. This evidence demonstrates that it is ok to make a mistakes. It also states that a mistake is failure if only we let it be failure. If it wasn't for mistakes we all would most likely not get better. The opposing view is that people should take their there time and do something right the first time. They think if they would have slowed down we wouldn't have problems or mistakes. However people are not perfect and us humans will continue to make mistakes and that's ok some people don"t  understand that it's ok to make mistakes, it makes us get better at that specific task. {addiction.com}.

this is good i dig it -luke
Andrew rush-
pro-pretty lit work tie
con-in the rebuttal you need a comma after ok

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First of all, in some cases, some of the worlds discoveries were purely accidental. Percy Spencer was working on a radar and the chocolate he had in his pocket melted, from this he invented the first microwave (business insider). Though not what he was working it   helped people more than the radar  system he was working on. From this simple mistake, came a world changing discovery. In conclusion, world changing discoveries can evolve from a purely simple accident.

Pro:Nice work blayne!
Con: i don't understand your second sentence? -Hailey Chambliss

Its good but i dont understand the first few words -luke

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To begin with, mistakes are a part of discovery because they help you learn from them. learning from your mistakes is a good way to be successful in life,  "Teachers, like doctors, are expected to be mistake free. Yet when a teacher forms strong relationships with another teacher or two, they share their problems freely, ask for and give advice, and learn from each other"(It’s a Mistake Not to Use Mistakes as Part of the Learning Process). This reveals that even as a adult you'll always make mistakes and all you have to do is ask for advice and correct yourself. With this in mind, engaging in the learning process independently will help people find their own mistakes. Changing the way we see errors and the time it takes to learn can help us produce better learning processes (The Value of Mistakes).

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To begin with, mistakes are a key part of discovery because without mistakes we wouldn't have electricity, cheese, or even technology! Not only this but it can help us realize our mistake and/or teach us the right way in doing your experiment. As a wise man by the name of George Bernard Shaw once said, "A life spent making mistakes is not only more honorable, but more useful than a life spent doing nothing." (kjds.org). Without mistakes we would not be able to think to take a look from a distance to do something different or to see that you just made our top new invention!

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To start off, mistakes are a key part of discovery because they are like a teacher, you learn from them. To enumerate, a doctor named Wilson Greatbatch accidentally created the pacemaker all because he pulled out the wrong size resistor (Inc.com) This evidence signifies that the greatest things in our wold today can very much be alive simply because of something we didn't plan on happening. The world is full of surprises and its normal for someone to make mistakes because no one is perfect, but one mistake can change a lot of lives. Some may argue that mistakes are not a key part of discovery

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To begin with, mistakes are a key part of discovery because with out mistakes we would not feel as accomplished when you do what you were trying to do and we wouldn't have most things we have today. "The sensitive springs were meant to keep fragile equipment steady on ships. Then James knocked one of his new springs from a shelf and, like a kid on Christmas morning, watched it do that famous slinky walk" {inc.com}. This demonstrates that the slinky's main purpose was established by knocking it down from the shelf. Some may retaliate that it did not live up to its full potential. But that is untrue because it is living to its full potential because its more famous than ever.
Andrew rush-
pro- Good work
con-the reason in the thesis needs to be one or two words

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First of all mistakes are a key part of discovery because if you make mistakes you can learn from them Like a man in china who accidentally made tea by something falling in his tea. According to History of tea-Wikipedia. It states a man was drinking tea and a leaf fell in it from a tree and changed the color of it; then he kept drinking it and it had a new flavor to it

christian conrad - wikipedia is not that much of a trusted source

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To Inform mistakes are a  key part of discovery because if a person put something that you don;t put in a dangerous place and you did not know anything about it will be a accident because some people don;t know whats good or bad or what not to do in life when a person make a mistake you can learn from that mistake.

Put a period somewhere -hailey

Theres barely any punctuation -luke
Andrew rush-
instead of putting a put an '

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First of all, mistakes are a key part of discovery because they help us to uncover more. To enumerate, when John Pemberton accidentally mixed coca leaves, cola nuts, and carbonated water, the worlds first Coca-Cola was invented (www.popularmechanics.com). I can determine that since this was created, we are able to drink other things such as Pepsi. Similarly,

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First of all, mistakes are a key part of a discovery because mistakes tell us what we did wrong so we can fix it.  According to addictions.com