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The first post is purely to help you find the site easily. The rest of the posts divide up the analysis into manageable chunks to help you explore the various posts.

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The hook of this site is the use of wildlife images and descriptions to suggest that Africa is a wild, untamed place for adventure.

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In the first post, write a sentence or two describing the unique 'selling point' of the article. What is the main focus it is using to attract visitors.

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This site focuses on Mpumalanga in South Africa. It describes a walking safari through the Kruger National Park and a dangerous encounter with an elephant. The second post explores favorite meals from South Africa's Braai food culture. Finally, it encourages tourists to visit cultural villages to learn of the tribal life of the N'debele people.

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This post should explain the place and topics on which the site focuses in a little more detail (2 sentences).

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Informal, but with quality vocabulary and sophisticated sentence structure.
'My breathing quickens'
'Nothing on this earth could make you feel more alive'
'We stood, quivering, as a leopard with a kill gazed straight into our souls'

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This post should decide whether the article is formal or informal. Informal writing contains language features such as personal pronouns (I, we etc.), colloquialisms (cool, chilled etc.), simple vocabulary and sentence structure, contractions (can't, won't) abbreviations (etc.) and descriptions of emotion (I loved it!). Formal writing is the opposite! Say whether it is formal or informal, and provide three quotations to support your view. You do not need to analyse the quotations.

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First person in Article 1, third person in Articles 2 and 3.

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Simply state whether the author has used first person or third person narrative. If you don't know what they are - look them up!

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Paragraph 1: To build suspense and enable the reader to feel the tension of a close up encounter with Africa's wildlife.
Paragraph 2: To emphasise the danger elephants pose to humans to generate excitement in the reader.
Paragraph 3: To summarize the variety of amazing experiences visitors will have on this trip.
Paragraph 4: To build an emotional connection with the reader by suggesting that this experience is something life-changing and timeless.

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Write a sentence which describes the purpose of each of the first four (4) paragraphs of the article (4 sentences in total).

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'Gleaming white ivory spears hang almost to the ground'
'A mouth that rolls and grinds splintered vegetation with the force of a trash compactor'
'Encased within a motorised steel cage'

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Identify and provide three (3) examples of imagery the author has used. You only need to provide the quotes, not analyse them.

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'Living, breathing creatures of flesh and blood'
'Almost unfathomable challenge'
'Collossal bulk'
'Grizzled veteran of the bush'

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Identify and quote four (4) phrases where the author has used interesting adjectives or adverbs to add to their description of things. You only need to quote the phrases, not analyse them.

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'100,000 known plants and animals'
'Rock art dating back over 3000 years'
'Estimated 50,000 more just waiting to be discovered'

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Identify and quote up to three (3) examples of statistics the author has used to support their story. If there are fewer, identify as many as you can. If there are none, find one statistic by searching online that could have added value to the author's story.

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'Biltong is the traditional food of the early white settlers'
'This traditional treat is essentially a fried dough ball, liberally coated with castor sugar'

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Identify and quote two (2) facts the author includes in the story. You only need to quote the facts, not analyse them.

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'Air-dried meat similar to jerky yet better in every aspect'
'No visit to Johannesburg, that much maligned city, would be complete without watching the Springbok Rugby team take on the best in the world'

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Identify and quote two (2) opinions the author includes in the story. You only need to quote the opinions, not analyse them.

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The inclusion of carefully selected images and even an embedded video gives superb visual support to the writing. Additionally, the writing is sophisticated but informal in the sense that it is conversational. This is perfect for a high-end travel site.

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Describe at least one (1) thing you find interesting about the article that is not mentioned above. This could be an opinion, technical feature, or anything else that makes it stand out.

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Adding a hook to every key page on your website is one of the fastest ways to increase your website's conversion rate and that is what is website is doing. By having a first glance at the article by just scrolling down each page, the author is able to convince the reader/ audience that being a traveller, you are able to discover things you have never seen or even dreamt of, persuading by having a neat layout for each article and images by having different image slideshows that match with the content having sub-descriptions making it persuasive by making it an adventurous tourist destination with plenty of historical figures, having a look through cultural backgrounds and seeing the opportunities ultimately waiting for you.

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the hook of the article is that they are going on adventures to places that people talk about, and seeing what its really about.

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the focus of the article is the adventure that they have been in, and the lessons they have learnt.

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good story telling.
"On a two-week visit we toured the Pacific coast to see what all the fuss was about in the new Nicaragua "

PLEASE READ THE INSTRUCTIONS: Register is FORMAL vs. INFORMAL language.

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This site focuses mainly and specifically on the medieval village of Anversa Degli Abruzzi in the Apennine Mountains of Central Italy. It describes the region’s traditional way of life herd the animals to an alpine meadow high above the Marcelli farm and the route from the farm to the animals. The various amount of animals near the border of the National Park of Abruzzo, Lazio and Molise. Mainly, the life of a shepherd in the  medieval village of Anversa Degli Abruzzi in the Apennine Mountains of Central Italy, describing the main basis what what has to be done.

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Paragraph 1:
to get the reader to understand where the story is based and whats its about.

Paragraph 2:
to keep the reader excited

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The hook of this site is the use of images of Barcelona's traditional Architecture designs as well as cultural art pictures.

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"We loitered on a ridge before donning overalls, masks and gloves. The “surfboards” turned out to be rudimentary sleds made of plywood with a strip of rubber at one end and a piece of thin rope for steering."

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The creator of this website discusses the different types of arts in Barcelona as well as how she was fascinated when she saw them. It encourages the audience to visit and look at the nice cultural side of Barcelona other than the famous touristic sites.

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The text in the article is informal, but with quality vocabulary and sophisticated sentence structure.

Examples:

"Golden eagles and falcons wing through the bright blue Apennine sky."

"Mobile phones don’t work here."

"This is the kind of place you’d never want to leave."

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First Person in Article 1 and Beginning of Article 2 and Article 3, Third Person in the rest of Article 2 - from the Middle till the End.

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Quite informal: "It was my first time to Barcelona, and apart from doing all the requisite touristy things"

". And" A few vocabulary mistakes. Not very willing, not very attractive and convincing.

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The hook of the article is that it used it was haunted by pirates, prisoners and a deadly epidemic yet now has become a haven for wildlife.

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The hook of this article would be the pictures of the food showing the diversity of food in Bengaluru. Another hook is the word "Home-made" which is written throughout the article

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The hook of this article is the variety of subtopics included in the article. You can find the section that is to be of interest and start there as it is very organized. There are also eye catching images of historical monuments as well as museums one can visit in berlin.

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I think that the hook of this article is based on the fact that the author is trying to persuade the reader to travel to Nicaragua due to it being a first-rate tourist destination with plenty of adventures and opportunities waiting.

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The hook of this article is about the incredibly well taken pictures of the architecture in Prague. The pictures are the first things you see in the article meaning that after looking at these very aesthetically appealing pictures because of the colors in the building and the beautiful sky you would be more likely to be more focused on the article.

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This site mainly focuses on the different cities in Nicaragua, and the different tours and site you can see in each city such as the hiking the Mochoba volcano in Granada, or visiting the the wildlife in Nelva Negra. Next the article talks about the different food styles in Nicaragua which are mostly Latin American and can include, beans, slow cooked meat, various types of rice among others.

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The focus of the article are the stories and inspiration behind the food. This would show the readers the culture of Bengaluru. Another focus would be home-made cooking

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This article focuses mainly on the Dry Tortugas which was established as a national park in 1992. It is the third-largest coral barrier reef in the world and the only tropical reef in the continental United states. It also explains why it was important for pirates, the hidden treasure which was there and the history behind it.

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""Formal as there are no personal pronouns and it is a professional website.
"For years, Nicaragua was considered pretty much off the beaten path with holiday makers choosing to venture to the Caribbean or to Costa Rica next door"
"Food styles are distinctly Latin American".
"Late November to May is the dry season. Nicaragua is not in the hurricane zone but does get tropical storms from June to November".

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This is informal as it uses personal pronouns and contraction:
"We don’t blame them."

However, there are only few places where they have informal language, mostly the introduction paragraph. The rest is formal

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1. "Although less than a hundred miles from Rome, the plateau feels like a forgotten world. Bumblebees browse wild oregano and thyme. Golden eagles and falcons wing through the bright blue Apennine sky. Hundreds of species of herbs, grasses, and wildflowers grow in dizzying profusion."
2. "Stone kalivia—primitive summer cottages used by shepherds—were scattered across a rocky meadow crisscrossed by drystone walls that once enclosed vineyards and gardens."
3. "Dimitris told us about the blue mold that forms between the cheese and the skin, which he kneads into the cheese. Yianoula scooped out a chunk and placed it on a communal plate. Hunks of wood-toasted bread in hand, we dug in. The cheese was deliciously pungent and peppery—it was the touloumotiri of my childhood, the touloumotiri of transhumance."

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Formal with quality vocabulary & sentence structure.
"Pirates and wreckers no longer ply the waters around Dry Tortugas, but hidden treasure still calls to those willing to search for it"
"Lost treasure isn’t the only thing that makes this isolated aquatic realm—it takes a two-hour-plus ferry ride to get there—so alluring"

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The author uses third person throughout the article.

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""1. "We arrived in Babala after a steep, four-hour hike. Stone kalivia—primitive summer cottages used by shepherds—were scattered across a rocky meadow crisscrossed by drystone walls that once enclosed vineyards and gardens."
2. "Spain’s Idiazabal cheese originally was made by shepherds in the Basque and Navarra regions, its smoky flavor a result of being aged near the fireplace in the shepherds’ rustic stone huts."
3. "After clattering through Anversa’s cobblestone streets, the sheep and their herders scramble upward."
4. "Walking some 30 miles over three days, 65-year-old Marcelli, his shepherds, and a few guests curious about this region’s traditional way of life herd the animals to an alpine meadow high above the Marcelli farm."

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Article: 3rd person

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Paragraph 1: To explain what it was before it became a national park, to explain the back story of it all
Paragraph 2: To historically explain why it was important for pirates, and how it was a prime area for sunken ships containing things that can be worth a lot.
Paragraph 3: To sort of try and tease the audience- Saying things like "Pirates and wreckers no longer plythe water around Dry Tortugas, but hidden treasure still calls to those willing to search for it". They even go ahead and give an example, making the audience not only wanting to go more but having hope that they will be able to find treasure themselves.
Paragraph 4: To explain on why lost treasure isn't the entire reason on why the park is so isolated. Throughout this paragraph, the writer also explains a couple facts and tries to sort of tease the audience in order for it to be more visited.

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Abstract The ecological and risk -management rationales for livestock mobility are well established. Yet, few studies evaluate the economic benefits and costs of maintaining or resuming mobile, extensive livestock production compared to sedentary or semi-extensive production. Here, we empirically evaluate pastoralists’ claims that transhumance, a specific type of long-distance herd mobility, is a more profitable system compared to semi-extensive production in the Central Spanish Pyrenees. Specifically, we use enterprise budget data from transhumant and semi-extensive operations to develop a baseline typical sheep operation budget. We then use partial budget analysis coupled with economic simulations to determine the conditions under which transhumance by truck or on foot becomes profitable relative to semi-extensive production. We find that transhumance by foot is more profitable than transhumance by truck and that relative profitability compared to semi-extensive production depends on operational scale, feed prices, and the lambing rates (productivity) of each system. Over all simulated scenarios, transhumance is more profitable 64–78% of the time. This analysis thus provides initial evidence of the economic rationality of transhumance under contemporary environmental and economic conditions, filling a notable gap in research on the economics of transhumance. Future research could expand the analysis to cattle operations and to other regions of Spain, assess the full social and environmental benefits and costs of transhumance, and evaluate the effects of exogenous factors like drought on production costs and profitability to determine if transhumance is an adaptive strategy under a changing climate. The analysis we present could be used as a basis to develop and pilot test interactive budgeting tools that support herder decision-making and planning under economic and environmental uncertainty.

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"Surrounded by shallow water"
"...extremely hot conditions..."
"coral gardening"

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"Stories of swashbuckling pirates" "Tales of turbulent waters"
"When the sandbar bridge between Bush and Garden Key is not submerged"

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First Paragraph: Basically states that Nicaragua is very underrated and often forgotten, but it is actually a beautiful exciting place to visit.
Second Paragraph: The author writes about the undeniable natural beauty of Nicaragua, adn states some of the mains sites such as the different volcanoes, lakes and beaches.
Third Paragraph: Talks about the capital city Manaua and the different sites it has to offer such as the markets and restaurants.
Fourth Paragraph: Lastly, the fourth paragraph talks about the city Selva Negra and the coffee plantation wildlife it has to offer tourists.

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"During the 1600s and 1700s, the Straits of Florida were dotted with Spanish treasure ships sailing between Cuba and Florida—"

"In 1985, treasure hunters salvaged $450 million in silver and gold from a sunken 17th-century Spanish galleon."

"As the war ravaged the States, soldiers and prisoners on the island battled the spread of yellow fever, which began plaguing the residents in 1867. "

"... a federal bird reservation in 1908."

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1. "Sheep and goats were the first animals that humans domesticated as livestock, around 10,000 years ago. Evidence of seasonal herding reaches back nearly as far. The Hulailan Valley of the central Zagros Mountains in Iran was first settled by transhumant herders around 7050 B.C., according to radiocarbon dating from a 1963 excavation."
2. "Western Macedonia’s sarplaninski ovci kashkaval is produced only in the summer and only when the sheep are grazing at altitudes of 3,280 and 4,920 feet"

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1. "This is the kind of place you’d never want to leave."
2. " The cheese was deliciously pungent and peppery—it was the touloumotiri of my childhood, the touloumotiri of transhumance."

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Something that makes this article stand out, is that it has many pictures/visuals throughout the article. This makes the article look more attractive, and more pleasing to read. They also aid the understanding of the text, as they are relevant images, with detailed captions.

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The selling point of this article is the unique beauty that captures the viewer. The breathtaking rock formations with a thousand surreal sandstone arches are the main attraction along with the thrill packed activities you can do,

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"Dry Tortugas is the third-largest coral barrier reef in the world"
"In 1985, treasure hunters salvaged $450 million in silver and gold from a sunken 17th-century Spanish galleon"

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"A haven for nature"
"One of the best things to do outside of tern-nesting season"

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1st person as we is used, but with a combination of 3rd person as her/she is used.

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The website looks really good from an aesthetic point of view, and has a lot of detail put into it. The writing especially uses advanced vocabulary enhancing the overall production quality of the site.

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1: (introduction) To introduce to audience to the topic of chefs and how most restaurants would not let us meet the chef.
2: (Introduction) To introduce the main topic: home cooking chefs
3: (Introduction) To give a vague summary of home cooking chefs
4: To show an example of a home cooking chef and tell the readers the inspiration behind the home chefs

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"Which gives it a lovely smoky flavor."
"slice of her culture and heritage."?

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"gives it a lovely smoky flavor."
"An authentic Odia meal"
"sattvic in his shunning of onions and garlic."
"in the heart of Bangalore"

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"the banglore food service has an estimated worth of 20,014 crore"

"The city has approximately 42,000 restaurants"

"The Indian Restaurant Industry employed 7.3 million people"

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"biryani is actually put on dum on a coal fired sigdi"

"diners in the month since she joined Authenticook"

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"Andhra Brahmin from the West Godavari district, is impossible to find anywhere outside of Andhra Pradesh."

"We imagine that’s how the Mughals liked it too."

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"“But it’s also very unique. Unless you try it, you will never understand the beauty of the flavours.”"

This is a dialogue and quotes which is good for getting opinions

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The article focusses on the breathtaking rock formations and the towering canyons. Also its focuses on the outdoor activities such as hiking the canyons and rafting;.

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The hook of the site is the use of image of New York traditional food as well as the restaurant with old architecture

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- "Chez a tante" is the fist restaurant  Aidan O'Neal and Jake Leiber ran together.
- They shared the job of chef for their second restaurant "Le crocodile"
- Most of the recipe came from France
-The restaurant has a lot of style and energy.

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"From shelfish to snails"
"A cheerfully sour lemon tarte"
"lowly soaking up a warm helping of chicken jus and fresh herbs."

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informal
"Nearly everything I’ve had at Le Crocodile has made me want to come back for more."
"There are so many dishes you’re not quite sure at first whether two guys whose best-known creation is a pancake will be able to keep up."
"That’s a head fake: the word is used in the French sense, and denotes more appetizers."

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"on a cushion of avocado purée. It’s delicious."
" good crunchy mouthfuls of toasted sourdough croutons instead of the usual limp blobs of drowned bread."

"smooth as foie gras and held together by what must be a small mountain of butter, is superb."

"which are puffy and creamy on a small hill of potato purée"

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This site focuses on french food. it describes what main ingredients they use in their recipe.

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"It’s a place where people, or at least Brooklynites, want to sit and stay."

"There’s a sort of salade lyonnaise — I say sort of because the lardons you’d find in Lyon have been replaced by smoked eel"

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Formal with good Vocabulary
"Moab is a paradise whose beauty captures everybody"
"New wildflowers are blooming"
"The sand feels a little deeper, the pack feels a little heavier"
"Colorado mountains are shimmering from a distance. We deeply breathe in the clear dry air, pausing for a moment. Speechless"

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The writing of this site is very sophisticated and informal at the same time. i also like the pictures added, they are well taken.

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combined third person and first person

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This article focuses on the Berlin Wall was divided between 1961 and 1989, with its western portion entirely surrounded by the wall. The consequence was a cultural oddity, which resulted in a very special way of life, a community with a peculiar political standing. It was known officialment as Berlin (west); the East Germans wrote it as West Berlin, if they referred to it at any rate; they wrote it with a hyphen in German, in West Berlin, while in Western Germany they wrote it.