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I like Esplanade because I love eating durian .

Teacher's comments: This doesn't even make sense. Do try to show a bit more seriousness in our class work.

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Cameron highland is the best place i have seen because of the weather and the

Teacher's comments: Complete the sentence, Amer?

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I went to Indonesia last year and I really liked it a lot.

Teacher's comments: If this was a story, everyone would wish to hear the continuation, Elvin.

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I went to Jakarta and visited my cousin and my friend there

Teacher's comments: Do complete this, Ryan.

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I didn't travel anywhere but In Singapore yes ,I went to Under Water World Singapore.

Teacher's comments: I am sure that the class will still be interested to know about that trip too. Tell the class more about this.

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The person I look up to is Jeremy Lim, He is a NBA Player. He has played in 3 Teams Rockets,

Teacher's comments: I think his name is Jeremy LIN? Still, the contribution is still too short, isn't it?

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I went to Chin

Teacher's comments: You can't even make time to complete that country's name?

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I went to Taiwan and I love the bubble tea there it's very nice.

Teacher's comments: Is that all about Taiwan that you like, Xin Wei? What's the difference between the bubble tea from Taiwan and the bubble tea you can buy from right here in Singapore?

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during the June holiday I went to Chiang Mai and buy some stuff

Teacher's comments: What stuff, Christopher? Anything else?

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I went to Paris and visited the Eiffel Tower.The eiffel tower is incredible and beautiful to look at it is so tall....in fact it is even beautiful at night as the lights a bright which caught everyone's attention.I've heard frim people there that paris is also known as the city of love.The food there are also delicious.

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During the June holiday I went to Chang Mai and buy some

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My favourite sport is paintball and it is an extreme sport. The game is basically shooting paintballs using a marker (gun). Paintball also requires safety. Basic safety is using a mask always in the field. Using arm and knee pads to prevent injuries. No paint no pain....

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The person that I admire the most was my beloved grandfather he passed away since I was young he passed away because of heart attack

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One person I admire is Mr Lee Kuan Yew, as he did a tremendous thing by building Singapore into a wonderful place for us to live in and tourist to visit.

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We went to USS with Zola,Jerlyn,Qianhui,Wendy and Minsoo. And we went to Adventure Cove the next week with them

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The person I admire is my father because he bring me to McDonald to eat food such as Teppanyaki burger,

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One person i really really love was grandfather, he was a diebetic ,he is heart patient but although he all this illness he still can play anything. well lost one of legs. and they replaced it with a prostetic leg . he passed away on the 24 of january.JUST AFTER MY BROS BRITHDAY! my grandfather told my brother and me that we will go fishing one day but it didnt happen. my brother and me were sadden by about my grandfathers passing. i wish he was still alive😭😭😭😭😭.

Teacher's comments: We ar e sorry for your loss, Shaveena. He must have meant a lot to you. He must have had shown a lot of strength to inspire you and your family.

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I went to vivocity because I didn't have time to enjoy with my family because I have a lot thing like school works and others....I go to Sentosa nearby HarbourFront and take monorail from VivoCity to Sentosa just to see the best attraction like Sea Aquarium in Singapore.

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The person that I admire the most is my uncle...he passed away last year.he passed away due to depressed on work.I admire him because he is a kind and nice person.He taught me on how to respect others so that other can respect you back.Today is his 1st death anniversary I really miss him so much.He is a really nice person.Shu Shu you will be missed.

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The person that I admire is my beloved mother it is because she take care of me since I was a baby She always never give up on me , she also encourage me not to give up and she got good values . The mother that has a good value and I will always admire her

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Write about your favourite holiday destination and describe some of the best places and experiences there

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One person that I strongly admire would be my teacher when I was in primary school, Mrs Catherine Lee. She taught me English and Mathematics in my upper primary school years. Even though I was still very young, I already felt that she had a lot of patience in dealing with such a naughty class like mine. Plus, we eventually found out that she taught us even after being diagnosed with cancer. I visited her when I was in junior college back in 1995. Soon after, she passed away, I still admire her greatly. You are remembered, Mrs Lee.

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Write about a person that you admire & why?