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Yan Shuen. An outdoor place I know very well

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Yan Shuen. An outdoor place I know very well

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My favorite place when I was a kid was the playground.I shared many memories there and got to know many people staying around my block.
One game I remembered playing was kind of dodge ball. The person with the ball would get down from the playground and throw a ball at other players.If the ball hits a player,he/she would take over.Another game we played was called blind mice. The catcher would close their eyes and count from one to ten. After that, the catcher would go up to the playground and catch a person by feeling.The runner is only allowed to stay in the playground. If he/she touches the floor, he/she would be the catcher.
After playing, my brother and I would go back home.The first thing we do after going back is to scrub our dirty feet as we did not wear slippers while playing.Sometimes, our maid will make pizza.Just by looking at the sight of the crisp baked bread with warm melting mozzarella cheese and sweet rich ripe tomato sauce was enough to make us famish.With every bite of the delicious bread crust with tomato sauce with the creamy cheese, we ended up finishing it before we knew it.
Sadly, the playground was demolished to build a new playground but with a exercise corner. During this period of time, we did not see each other. After the construction was complete, we still played, but not as often as before as PSLE was nearing.
After PSLE, my friends and I stop coming to play. I do not really know why but I think it was because my friends have reached adolescence. It was a sad but a enjoying experience, I guess the playground truly is a place where we are able to connect.

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It was a good afternoon. It was raining densely outside. Good. An excuse for me to play my computer game.I was playing level 9 of my game when I heard a loud thung downstairs.
“Probably just my younger siblings” I thought. So I continued and got so enthralled into the game that did not hear the screams of my mother and my father moaning. Abruptly, I felt the need of relieving myself so I hastily made my way to the lavatory.
While I was making my way to the toilet, I saw three masked people and two lifeless body on the floor. I narrowed my eyes and deliberately scrutinize the identity of the corpse.
“Eeek!” I nearly let out a scream. Mother and Father! I started panicking and panted breathlessly. On a spur of moment a solution cross my mind. I noiselessly crawl towards my room and pick my phone up.
“Hello, my parents have been murdered I need help-‘’ Out of the blue, a vast, hairy hand covered my mouth and knocked me out me out. When I woke I was roped and one of the burglars was standing in front of me. He held a pistol in his hands and he looked like he did not mind using it.
I felt scared, scared of being killed, so scared I urinated in my pants.
I trembled with horror and anger. I looked around and saw my younger siblings wailing, probably because they wanted to play their toys. The gang of burglars

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It was our first night at our new flat.It had been a long , busy day.All our belongings an furniture had finally been moved to the new place.The house was in a terrible mess,with boxes all around. I t looked like there would be lots of cleaning and tidying up to do, but for now, we were all too tired to think of anything but sleep. Even so, we had to clear our beds of all the boxes and stuff which had been carelessly piled on them for want of space, and put in clean sheets so that we would not have to sleep in filth.

After having taken a shower , I looked forward to a peaceful night’s rest. The next day was a public holiday,so there was no need to rise early, and I could take my time to pack up my room at last, I flopped onto my bed and soon fell fast aslee.

Whoo…! Whoo…!

I awoke to the awful sound of someone moaning. It was cold and windy , as I had left one of my windows open. My goose bumps had risen on my arms and neck,even as a chill ran down my spine.

I looked at the watch which I had worn to bed as the clock had nt been put up yet. It was exactly midnight –the haunting hour . Suddenly ,my excitement about sleeping alone drained away. My imagination ran wild and I began to think of all kinds of ghost abd spirits that might be hovering around me. I had heard it said that oue new flat was build on an old cemetery.Perhaps the spirits had come to haunt us for disturbing their resting places.

Whoo……! Whoo…!

There it was again! Afraid to get out of bed , I drew up my blanket tighter around myself and curled up my legs. I wished I had my parents near me. I was so frightened I started to cry.

It seemed like forever before I fell asleep again. In the meantime , the awful moaning sounds continued , sometimes louder, sometimes softer,  but always eerie. And like hair-raising scenes in the movies , the cold wind swept through my room , lifting pieces of paper and causing things to drop. This is no doubt added to the fright of the moment, and I covered my head in my blanket, hoping to find comfort in it.

I was not awre of the time when sleep finally overcame my fear, but it was a troubled sleep that I had until the alarm on my wrist watch went off

Beep! Beep! Beep!

I opened my eyes and turned off the alarm. It was clearly morning, and my room was flooding with sunlight, as the curtains had yet to be put up. I kicked off the thick blanket, partly with irritation, as it had become hot and humid, but mostly with relief that the night had gone.

There was a knock on my door. Then someone opened it ‘’Good morning, Jackson! Did you sleep well?’’ asked Mom’s cheerful voice.

‘’No Mom !’’ I jumped out of my bed and ran toeards her.

‘’I think this house is haunted!’’I said , my fears again rising up within me.

‘’Nonsense ! You  know there are no such things as ghosts ,’’Mom tried to reassure me.

‘’No really!i heard them last night –dozens of them!They were all around me!’’I insisted

Mom looked at me , at once amused and concerned.”Did you see anything ?”she asked.

“Well….no But there was a strong wind, and my things dropped onto the floor.See?”I replied, pointing at the papers and stuff that had dropped from  the desk .

Mom hesitated, then patted me gently and saoid, “Don’t worry. You need only ghosts if you havre done something bad. If you’re a good boy, they would not dare to harm you.”

I gulped. Suddenly, all the naught things I had done in the past rushed into my mind. I wondered which of them would make me a liable victim of ghosts.

As the day wore on, I lost myself in the organization of my new room. But as dusk fell, the memory of the previous night returned to haunt me. Once, as I was passing by my parents'room, I overheard their conversation about the eerie Sounds at the nighg , and wondered if they, too, had heard of ghosts. I pondered over the matter as I was having my shower,and again my goose bumps arose and my heart was gripped with fear, causing me to cut short my luxurious cleaning routine

After of facing the ghosts again, lacked to sleep in my parents'room that night. Dad was rather indignant, and said I was too to be sleeping with my parents,but Mom relented ,  and I ended up sleeping in a mattress on their bedroon floor.
That night, the air was hot and still,  and wr had trouble finding slee. and unlike the previous night ,  as if in mockery of my fear, the ghosts did not return. Hence, the next night, I was banished to my room
At first,I was apprehensive about sleeping alone again, but the nights that followed remained peaceful , and soon foegof about gheerie experience. Then, one afternoon , as my family was returning home from a lunch during, we got out of the car to hear the same moaning sounds again . This time, we got out of the car to heat same moaning sounds again. This time,  we all heard it. The air was again cold and windy, and it looked like a storm was brewing . we tried to ignore theeerie sounds and rushed out of the car into the lift. Our next door neighbour went in with us,  having returned from a shopping trip. She gave us a knowing glance and smiled.
" Very windy day isn't it?looks like a storm is coming, " she said
"Yes, " Mom replied. "Its kind of chilly, too! "

"Yes, indeed, " she said.  "Have you noticed how the wind wail as they " splash"against the doors and wIndows?

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Describe someone who means a lot to you

She was the only one that I share my deepest secret with. She was not my friend nor a family member. Even though she was not any ways related to me or my family, I still kept her dear to my heart. She was my maid, a affectionate, amiable, exuberant and reliable young lady. When I am beside her, I just feel really safe. She felt like a second mother to me. She is very important to me, always making my day. She encourages me whenever I feel low.

She always brings me to a ravishing and angelic place to eat whenever she is free. She was occasionally free so it was hard to talk to her. She was always cleaning the house, never resting and I had to go to school. My maid meant a lot to me. She was beside me even since I was born.

We did everything together since then on , we laugh, play ,talk and gossip together.

However she went back to her home country 5 months ago…

It felt lonely and empty inside me. Every day, instead of going home with a bright smile, I always came back with a sorrowful  face. The smile that was always on my face had disappered. I cried and cried but i thought to myself: i totally deseved it...

I realised that I did not cherish her, I just took her for granted. Never stop to think about her always just caring for myself. Being selfish and mean that was all I did to her. Never stopping to think about her sufferings only thinking about mine. Always thinking that my problems were the worst.

However, I decided to not take anybody for granted. Everybody makes mistake and they learnt from it. I had to learnt it the hard way, which was losing the person that meant a lot to me…

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The blazing inferno ball like sun shone its ultra merciless fiery rays on my tender skin.My family and I decided to have a sumptuous picnic meal at the beach.

We took out our picnic mat and laid it on the table,followed by some thirst quenching beverages and mouth watering food and snacks to be consumed.I sank my teeth into the food and gobbled them like a hungry hyena.After the sumptuous meal,I decided to have a swim in the dark blue sea.I changed into my swimsuit and soaked my body into the freezing cold water.However I did not notice a sign with words written on it,beware of sharks.

I started to swim to my heart’s content and also started boasting to my parents how good my swimming skills were.As I was enjoying my swim I saw a fin like figure a distance away from me.I thought to myself that it was just some mischievious  kids trying  to fool around.Ignoring  that clueless fin like figure I continued to swim.After swimming for a few minutes I felt something strange,I realized that the fin like figure had been circling around me in a big circle.I thought to myself what could it be,the bone chilling  word suddenly struck my mind,”shark”.As soon as I thought of it,the fin figure disappeared in to the waters.Fingers of fear crept out my spine  and wrap it cold hands around my neck.

Without second thoughts I decided to swim towards the shore.Feeling  scared,my hairs stand  to its maximum end.As soon as I reached the shore I immediately told my parents about that horrifying experience that I had.It was one of the most scary and terrifying water experience I had in my lifetime.

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Q1:Describe a time that you felt scared.

I like playing my phone but I don’t get enough playing time as my mother does not allow me to play at all.

One night, I was feeling bored as I could not sleep so I build a tent out of my plentiful of pillows and snuck under it and took out my phone, and started playing. Since I was the only one awake in my house, I heard a creak informing me that the door opened. I hid my phone and pretend that I was sleeping but no one came in my room. At that moment I was so scared that I almost poop myself, I took my nerf gun and confronted my ‘visitor’. But all I saw was darkness and a familiar person – it was my brother. I ask him why he was up so late and he told me that he was also playing his games. I face-palmed myself so hard that the sound reverberated across the hall way, I guess my mother heard that as she walked out of her room. She took our phones and send us to bed.

From that day onwards, my brother and I never dared to play at night without my mothers permission.

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1) Describe a time when you felt scared

A time when I felt scared is when I was in Primary5.During the start of December holiday, we had to go a camp which is called Confidence Camp. Through this camp, the school aim to help us to be more independent and not rely on our families too much.

At first I did not like the school arrangement on that year’s VIA because I expected it to be an outing. Furthermore, I was that kind of person who dislike dirties and the hot sun.

The day that we had to go camp came in a blink of an eye. I was reluctant to go to the camp as I wanted my comfortable zone in my home.

Soon we reached the camp place. A chill ran down my spine as I found out that we had to sleep on the wooden plank that made up a floor for us to sleep. First thing came to my mind that is that I would go home with a lot of mosquitoes and rashes as I’m allergic to dust.

The worst thing was that we had to do a lot of activities related to HEIGHTS!I hate
to do things that relate to heights as I’m fear of heights .We had to do rock climbing, flying fox and overcoming obstacles at a place that you have to do a lot of climbing.

I was panic stricken at first. I did not have fun throughout the whole process of rock climbing not even saying the flying fox. After knowing that we had to ‘swing’ down the zip line, I almost cried when I found out.

Soon, it was my turn to go. My legs felt jelly as I shivered with fear. I did not dare to jump down so the instructor pushed me. I screamed on top of my lungs.

Every second was like an hour to me. It was like the worst thing of my life.  I was the only one shouting like crazy! Yet, the others were having so much fun.

At the end of the camp, we did a reflection .After knowing the school’s full purpose for holding the camp, I realised the good intention of the school and appreciate it.

Though I did not overcome my fears, I still manage to try out every activity and completed it.

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someone that means a lot to me

She was beautiful , a blessing , a gift. I treated her as if she was my own sister, she was always there for me ,whenever I was down or feeling low she would always be there to comfort me. She was my everything locked in my heart and will never be forgotten.
It was during primary school, I had failed my SA2 maths test and was extremely devastated about it as I studied so hard for it but some how still failed.

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rouying q4) describe someone who means alot to you

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He was in a position deep down inside my heart. A position that no one else can replace,  you Must  Be thinking who on earth this person is?  Well, He’s My grandfather. Grandfather  Has  always been caring, patient, kind towards me. Showing Me Love And Care Whenever I am feeling upset.

I still remember the day vividly when I was in the hospital. That day, was just like any normal days. I attended school as usual and was enjoying my time there when a teacher came into class and told me to pack up my bag as my dad was already waiting for me at the general office ready to bring me home. At that time, I didn’t know what was going on but I was happy that I could finally go home after a long and tired day at school however, my excitement didn’t lasted very long .Until My dad  broke the news to me in the taxi. He told me that  the hospital called him telling him that grandfather can’t hold on any longer and told his family members to come down  to the hospital as soon as possible. However, when we reached the hospital, we were late by 5minutes and grandfather has already left for another world. I hold in my tears until a time when I couldn’t hold it any longer and I burst out crying as I remembered what he did for me.

I remember how he always protect me when I was being mischievous  and  my dad whenever took out the cane wanting to whack me for being mischievous . He will always tell my dad not to beat me as I am still a child and I don’t know anything.

I remember how he always help me with my work even  though  he was very tired.

He always put his 100percent whenever he is with me and won't complain that he is tired or anything. He is there for me whenever  I needed  him just like my parents. He may be my grandfather, but he’s role isn’t just a grandfather. He is like my father , my mother ,my everything.

Grandfather means a lot to me, and I regretted not spending more time with him. The last time I saw him beside the hospital was at the old folk home, he was so weak and old that he couldn’t even eat by himself neither could he remember who I was.

If I could rewind time , I would rewind it to the day when I was born so that I can spend my next eight years with him and I wouldn’t mind rewinding time over and over again just so that I can spend more time with him.

Grandfather passed away at the age of 91 and at that time, I was only eight .This is my fifth  year without him, when I was young, I guess I didn’t care much. But thinking about it now, I guess heaven just need an angel like him.

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describe about a time that you felt  scared so scary
I was scared, I could not believe it, after so many decades they chose to demolish it now. It was my grandmother’s house in Malacca. I have a lot of memories stored in that house since young.my family and I go there at least once per month. When my father told about it i and my sister were scared, angry and worried.
My grandfather who was born in Malacca build the kampong house under a temples land which is less than half a kilometer away. It was where all my father’s siblings and their family gather during any festival and the owners of the land were about to sell the land which means we would not have the house anymore. I and my sister strongly disagreed to it.my Sister asked my father if we could buy the land.my father laughed saying that it was impossible. I tried to think for days on how to save the house, as days went past I became more and more worried and most of all scared.

I finally came with an idea of asking my father to ask him to ask one of a business millionaire if he wanted to buy the land. At first I thought that it would not be possible buying the land would not give anything in return to him and did not suggested that idea to my father and started to listen emotional songs. There was only one week before the land was about to be given to the new owner my whole family was depressed. I thought, why not suggesting my idea to them. The reaction which came next was unexpected; there was a smile on all of their faces.

My father called the millionaire and told about the problem. There was a long pause i became very scared that it was the first time my family saw me being so scared. I started to imagine the house being surrounded by bulldozers and the house being demolished.” I will help you", I heard a voice from the phone. I slowly made my scared look into a wide smile.

The next day we met him in Malacca   he told the owners that he was willing to pay twice the price of the land value. The owners thought for a while which made me think of the bulldozers again. Surprisingly the owners agreed. The millionaire told that he will run the temple which made the owners happy too and the problem ended off happily

That day when i was sleeping, I thought about two things which was never to give away anything which was very closely related to the family and that never to be scared.

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QUESTION 1) A TIME WHEN YOU FELT SCARED

Never had I expected things to turn out this way. As I awaited the executioner’s command to ascend the steps that led to the pavement. Tears marred my visions as the sunlight that shone freedom. I would not have experienced I my life ever again…

Since I was young, my dream was to become a person who upholds a lot of power. And I have to go through a test which is to ‘KILL’. Before becoming a gang member we have to go through a mission. We have planned to attack the greatest and richest Jewelry’s shop. My buddies who tagged along were Janet and Nathalie. Janet and I dashed into the shop, shooting the security cameras and went on shooting the innocent security guards. When I got the hang of it, it was like playing a game shooting the enemy. Suddenly, from behind I heard Nathalie voice.

“No survivors, all killed. “Before I could stop her from her cruel actions, bullets sprayed and blood spurted all around me. All that greeted me was the sight of all the innocent people lying in the pool of precious blood.

“Help! “I exclaimed, catching a glimpsed of my bloody wounds. No sooner the sirens got louder. Nathalie swiftly whipped out her gun and shot another thigh. I groaned in pain as I felt my hands was placed tight with one another and lost my senses. When I have regained my senses, I found out that they have betrayed me. My parents later in the day came to see me and I felt very heart ached to see my parents’ worrying for me. The bloods of the seven people were all waiting to receive their murderer. When I  was sentenced death.

“BOOM,” I quickly rushed forward but was being pushed backed to jail. All I wanted to say was that I was a disgrace to my parents. A mother’s love is from the first breathe of her child to the last breathe of the mother.

One week later, as I waited to be execrated I thought to myself that never would I be able to repay the kindness to my parents and never will I be able to tell them that I am sorry for my wrong deeds. Many memories flowed through my mind as I thought about happy moments with   my parents and soon it will disappear but will always stay in my heart. My feelings were both filled with happiness and fear. Saying my last farewell as I closed my eyes as the execution walked towards the pavement.Nevr will I fight justice for myself.

I soon had my last breathe on earth and lay on the floor. I will never ever experienced precious life again.

Chi Ying's comment:Danica uses a variety of capable phrases describing her emotions and feelings.Her composition fascinates me as I could feel myself plunging into her composition,I could understand what her characters are feeling.It feels really nice to read her composition!

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Q4: Describe someone who means a lot to you

When I go places such as school, I meet many people and most of them are my friends. Some friends are closer than others while some are just classmates or schoolmates to me. My close friends mean a lot to me and I am going to talk about one of my closest friends.

It was the first day of school and I was a new student as I transferred school, I was not used to the environment there and had no friends then. During English period, the teacher brought us to the computer lab but I did not know how to operate the computer as it was a desktop and my previous school used laptops. The girl beside me saw me struggling so decided to help. That girl’s name is Elise. She was a very short and skinny girl, she had long and smooth hair and she looked a lot like me which was cool but scary at the same time, it was fate! I did not really know her so I did not talk to her after that lesson, but she always came to me and talked to me as she saw that I was always alone.

Soon I decided to open up to her and talk to her, we became friends but not close friends yet. One day she decided to ask if she could come over to my house which was when I learnt that she only lived a few blocks away from me which meant that she could stay at my house till really late. Sometimes she would even stay for dinner at my house which was when I introduced her to my dad. My dad found her very decent and did not mind her being in the house. She came to my house almost everyday and got to know my dad more. We would always go many places together and she eventually got closer to my dad which was when my dad decided to call her his god-daughter. Which meant that she was my god-sister and her parents was fine with her being my god-sis so that made us even closer than before. Elise would always follow me to a shopping centre which is a stone’s throw away to buy groceries and I appreciate that a lot.

After two years of friendship, it was the year we had to take our PSLE, which meant that if we did not go to the same secondary school we would be separated for life! None of us wanted that so we studied our hardest to get into the same school. Fortunately, we were able to get into the same school and our friendship was able to go on.

We have been friends for 3 years and we are still friends now. We do fight sometimes but that will not affect our friendship but instead make us learn more about each other and become closer to each other. She means a lot to me as we have been friends for several years and we are very close friends now. I can always go to her with my problems and she can always come to me with her problems, she would not judge me for the things I do and I would not judge her either. This makes me very comfortable around her and I can be myself when I am with her. These are the reasons she means the world to me and without her my life would have been very boring.

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1.           Describe a time that you felt scared

As the pitter-patter of raindrops fell incessantly on my window,continuously producing a monotonous drone,my heart filled with inexplicable terror.The raindrops running down my window caused memories to flow back like a rushing river,calling to mind once again,that fateful day...

Fluffy white clouds hung over the vast blue sky. I was on cloud nine that day because it was my birthday. I skipped home happily expecting more surprises on the way. Little did I know that there were only surprises that was out of my expectations.

I was on my way to the lift of our block and was shocked to discover that two out of the three lifts were in maintenance, so there was only one lift that was not out of bounds. Not thinking much, I awaited for the lift to arrive at first floor and without a second thought, I stepped into the lift and pressed the closing button.

My house was at the fifteenth floor,I stared at the floor level which was increasing.As I was wondering what flavour will my cake be,the lift suddenly jerked violently and while I was still in a dazed state,the lift suddenly stopped moving.Instantly,terror seized me and my heart was palpitating like a ten-pound sledge hammer.Panic started to engulf me and I stood rooted to the ground.I stood stunned and speechless by the sudden stop of the lift.Frightening thoughts raced through my mind as I had recalled what my teacher had taught me what happened when a lift suddenly stopped.My teacher,Miss Lee,once told me that when a lift suddenly stopped,the air will be trapped in the lift.As humans breathe in oxygen and breathes out carbon dioxide,if we got stuck in the lift for a long time,the entire lift will be filled with carbon dioxide and that could be dangerous because if we do not breathe enough oxygen for a period of time,this may cause suffocating and in more serious cases,may even cause death.The thought of death continued to swim in my mind and it caused me to paralyzed with fear,stood motionless with horror.

I have asthma in the first place and the thought of not getting enough oxygen continued to linger in my mind.I feared that I might die because of asthma attack,and I did not want to die on my birthday.I started to panic about what I should do.While I was busily thinking of a solution,the lights in the lift suddenly flickered and flicked out, besides that, the air con was not working anymore.I could feel that my hair stood on ends when the lights had flickered out.A wave of fear rushed through me as I quickly pressed the alarm button in the lift.Unfortunately,nobody had responsed,I pressed the button a few more times refusing to give up;however,nobody seemed to hear my response.

Then I started to force the lift doors open,while I was doing so,I looked through the gap between the doors and the lift.However, to my disappointment,I could not see any light between the doors and I supposed this meant that the lift stopped between floors.So even if I forced the lift doors open,I could not get out safely.Half my heart died when I knew that the two solutions did not work.Just as I thought of calling someone to help me,I reached for my phone in my bag;however,it suddenly occured to me that my phone was confiscated by my mother.In desperation,I screamed my lungs out for help but the people in this world seemed to be deaf,nobody seemed to hear me as no one has given any response.I started to panic even more and hard to stay calm as I was scared that I might die in the lift.Overcome with panic and fright,I lost my balance and fell down in a swoon.I started to cry uncontrollably as I did not want my life to end so early.To my horror,as I was crying,the surroundings seemed blur to me and I cannot see clearly.Soon,I started to get warm and out of breath,I knew that this must be another asthma attack,thus I reached out in my pocket for my inhaler;however,I could not find it.I was even more anxious and panic when I could not find my inhaler.I started to sweat and have rapid breathing,my coughing and wheezing could not stop.I knew that I might die because of asthma attack;therefore,I closed my eyes anticipating death while I was having rapid breathing.The last feeling I had before I passed out was fear.

The next moment I opened my eyes was in a hospital accompanied with my parents.My mother was on the brink of tearss she noticed that I had been conscious,once again,tears welled up in her eyes and began rolling down her cheeks like rivulets.Although my father did not cry but I could tell that he was upset.I managed to make a weak smile to my mother to indicate that I was fine.My mother's eyes were puffy and red after all the crying.Choking with sobs,my mother told me that if I was sent to the hospital a few minutes later,I might die.Although this scares me;however,I was thankul and grateful that I was still alive surviving this frightful incident and I was grateful to the person who had saved me.

That was the only time which I felt a dire of helplessness and hopelessness.The sequela I got from that incident was being afraid to take lift on my own.My parents and I spent a long time to help me to overcome the sequela and finally a few months later,I overcame it and I could start taking the lift on my own.

''Ring...Ring''My alarm clock pulled me back to reality.Although I had overcame the sequela,I was still not able to let go of that incident and the fear that I had accumulated in that incident.

Danica(Comments for Chi Ying)
She uses a wide variety of words and have a very instresting starting.When a reader reads the composition they would be interested  or want to read more about it.The compositions give me many feelings and when I read it I feel how does the narrator feel and she answers the questions of being scared.idk anything

Yu zheng 闺蜜:)
Her storyline was interesting.She uses many good vocaburaly and phrases.She

LePing's comment for CY: She used alot of good phrases and it is very interesting

Riswana's comment for CY: She used many useful phrases and there were wide varierty of vocabulary words. Her compostion was well detailed and interesting.

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Q3) Describe a time when you met someone new.

She is a tall, slim, pretty and mature girl. I met her through my sister as she was my sister’s friend. She made me laugh, happy and comforted me when I was sad and depressed even if the problem is just a small matter she will try her best to help me. She bought for me stuff that I did not asked for but I needed them. Her name was Marine and  I am glad to have her as my god sister.

She brought me to places I have never been to before, treat me food that I did not eat before. She bought me to places that are educational and interesting that I have never encounter before.

We first met at Sentosa Adventure Cove, she invited my sister and I to play together. When I first saw her, she look very nice and friendly so I knew that I could get along with her. While playing with the equipments, she always keep a look out on me to prevent me from getting injured as it was my first time playing with the equipments. When I was afraid of to sit on the float and slide down the water slide, she offered to sit with me on the float so that I wont afraid when I am on the float alone. She always make sure that I get involved with everything and not be left alone. Even though the age difference was three years, she treated me like a younger sister instead of a little girl. She was more like a sister to me than my sister. After playing at Adventure Cove, we went to have lunch together.

As I did not bring any money and my sister did not have enough money to buy lunch for me, I felt sad thinking that I would have to starve. I think she saw me looking sad, so she took out some money and told me to go and buy some food, my eyes immediately lid up with happiness never thought that she would give me some money to buy food. We sat down at a table and while eating and chatting to get to know more about each other. After eating, we went to her house to watch some horror movies which I like the most at the same time also afraid of it the most. Her house have three dogs and a rabbit, she brought them out of their dog house to let my sister and I to play with them. The dogs were very cute and fluffy and very friendly as they will not bite me.

She allowed my sister and I to stay overnight at her house to have a movie marathon and see who can stay up late the longest. Of course I lost, I was the first to fell asleep. She took out her blanket and cover it over me afraid that I would catch a cold.

The next day, she prepared our breakfast for us and help us prepare the shirt and put it on the chair. I have never thought of her doing all that, I really felt very glad from deep within my heart to have her as my god sister.

I am always looking forward to visit and I will never ever forget her forever.

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Q4)Describes someone who means a lot to you

She was my everything, my happiness and my life. She will always be there whenever I needed her. This person is my beloved grandmother. She is sixty this year, however age does not mean anything to her. She is still fit and healthy. Her youthfulness and looks makes her seem like she was only fifty-five.

She does housework well and took care of the family since she was eighteen. She sacrifices her youth just for the family. She had not gone through any education since young as she was a girl and her family was poor and could not afford the school fees.

She took care of me since young, I spend more time with her rather than my parents who was always busy. I remember once that my teacher nominated me to participate in a competition. This competition is called the “three minutes balloon contest”. We are required to blow as many balloon as we can in three minutes.

After knowing that I got nominated for this competition, I was nervous and excited. I started practicing at home. While practicing, one of a balloon pop. I got a shocked and was very traumatised by what happened. Since then I developed a fear towards balloon popping. I knew that if I don’t overcome this fear, I would never be able to participate in this contest.

I was very stress, I didn’t know what I should do. My grandmother notice that I was looking very stress and asked me what had happened. I told her my worries. She told me to not give up easily and with much practise I will definitely overcome this fear. What she said really encourages me. After hearing what she said I mastered up the courage and tried to overcome my fear.

she practises with me everyday and after much practises I slowly started to overcome my fear. On the day of the competition I manage to blow fifteen balloons in three minute and emerge as the champion. I was very thankful towards her, as I held the trophy in my hand, tears started flowing down my cheeks. I ran up to her and gave her a hug. I just wanted to tell her that “thank you for everything, in my heart you are always the best.”

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Describe a time that you felt scared

Dawn broke. The sun once again rise in the deep blue sky, shining warm radiant rays of sunshine through the sparkling clean windows onto my warm fluffy blankets.

“Ring…” The alarm clock screamed into my ears. It broke the peaceful scenery and silence. I jumped out of my bed anticipating a new day.

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describe someone who means a lot to You

the blazing sun shone through my house window.i woke up to the lurid cries of my mother as she attempts to wake me up in the afternoon as  i had been sleeping  like a panda for the past 12 hours.i woke up still feeling a little tired but went on to prepare for the restof the day.I went on with my day feeling annoyed at my mother's nagging for me to have my lunch,but i was not hungry so i just left my lunch on the kitchen table.the following day, i recieved news that my mother was going overseas for a business trip,and i was rather confident that i can survive for a few days without her.but when my mother left for her business trip,i needed to do everything myself.i was barely surviving trying to keep the house clean and tidy in the same time trying to make sure i dont go starving.                                                                                          by the end of the first day where my mother left for her trip, i was already exhausted from trying to keep the house spick and span.i finally started understand why my mother was so annyoed with me when i accidentally spill something on the floor as it was very tiring to clean it up.
i then realised that i was very dependent on my mother and i was not very independant.i then started to miss my mother and longed for her to come back home quickly so that i could finally relax again.
when i mother came back,i went to the airport to pick her up.i was waiting excitiedly for her arrival.when she came out of the gate,the sight of her had make me very happy as i finally could relax and have someone to depend on again.
i then realised that how bad i am at thing and how much my mother meant to me as without her,i would not have anyone to rely on anymore i then knew how important my mother was to me.

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She was everything I needed.The love of my life. She was gentle, beautiful, kind , she was like an angel fell down from the heavens. She was my best friend, Jane. She encouraged me when I felt like I fell in the depths of the ocean, helped me out in studies and stood up for me when I got bullied. What awes me the most about her is that she thinks I am more special than the others and she liked my personality. With her , there’s nothing else I could ever asked for.

When I first saw her in my new secondary school , she was as graceful as a swan, her friendly smile brightening my gloomy heart.  Whenever I was lonely, she would always sit with me and accompany me  without fail. Like how I wanted to be alone for a while, she would always be there by my side and talk with me about her time in her school and how she said I was special in my very own ways and she liked who I was, making my cheeks flush red hot.

She would always stand up for me whenever I got intimidated by the older boys who shows terror in their steps wherever they walk. She even once went up to the discipline office and made a big fuss about how the older bullies weren't served with the taste of justice and were never caught red-handed.

Her beauty was beyond flawless. When she looks at me those jewel , beautiful eyes of hers, my heart always beats like a cheetah running around the savannah. Everywhere she goes, boys would gaze upon how glorious she walks and drool over her magnificent beauty. It is how shocking that a dazzling goddess like her would befriend a humble singer like me. Could it be...

Whenever we walked home together, she would always hold my hand and give me a small peck on my cheek, sending goose bumps down my nerves. Jane and I had a unbreakable friendship, not even a gigantic boulder could separate us. Maybe this was our fate.

Maybe we were more than friends....

Without her, I think my life would have been meaningless. Jane was a symbol of hope. My hope. With her, I dared to dream the impossible, feel inexpressible emotions. I hope Jane and I will keep on this simple but incredible bond shared on with us and will always be together forever.....

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Q4     Describe someone who means a lot to you

He was my happiness. He was the love of my life. He was always there for me, whenever I needed him and he showered me with love. He was no one else but my best guy friend, Jun Hong .He never fails to make me happy. I cannot imagine my life without him. He is close to me because I find him a good confidante.  Without him I will not be like how I am today. No one else can ever replace him.  To be honest, I had a crush on him but I did not show it. Our friendship started like these...

It was my first day in secondary school. I was totally lost and I did not know what to do. I looked around me to find help. That was when I met Jun Hong. Well-built and good-looking. I went nearer to take a better look at him. As I went nearer, I could smell the fragrance from his body. He looked at me while I was walking towards him. After a while,  he started to talk to me, he introduced himself and gave me a hand shake.

That handshake gave me goosebumps. Jun Hong's hand was as soft as silk. I flushed when he shook my hands and my cheeks were rosy red. Few minutes later I found out that we both were in the same class!  We somehow managed to get to our classes with the help of the student councillors.

Our form teacher told us that we could sit with anyone so I decided to sit with Jun Hong. I quickly run as fast as my legs could carry me to where Jun Hong sat. Our teachers gave us some time to talk with our partner and to get to know each other more.

Within that time, I found out  that Jun Hong was really a affable and a charming guy. I did not want to lose his friendship so I tried my best to be as close with him. As days past by, we became more closer . I realised that Jun Hong's favourite past time is to lose himself in books. His intensive reading also means he is a good writer, and our English teacher loves to read his essays. Math was my weakest subject. I failed every single Math test for  semester one. I did not have any hopes on Math and I have no confidence that I would pass Math. But Jun Hong was there to help me.  He answered all my doubts and he stayed back with me after school to guide me in my Math.

He motivated me and told me not to give up he was always on my side and was there to support and encourage me. After several practices and revisions I finally managed to pass my Math test. Not only that, my Math teacher praised me for making progress and told me to continue to put in the effort in that subject.Jun Hong

taught me the value of Perseverance.

All credits goes to Jun Hong. He was the reason behind all these praises.  He was affectionate towards me.  All his actions touched me. That feeling I get when he talks to me  is just inexpressible . Every single day in school with Jun Hong is memorable and one of the reasons I enjoyed my school days is because of Jun Hong. It was perhaps fate but we hit it off very well the moment we were introduced to each other. I started to have interest on him and I still do.

He was the best guy friend I have ever came across in life who was concern about me as much as my parents. I am really blessed and glad to have this kind of friend. Jun Hong and I will be graduating in two years time.  I hope to keep in contact with him. I enjoy his company, and really hope that our friendship will continue for years to come.

Chi Ying's comment:Riswana uses many good words and phrases in her composition and it was interesting to read her composition

Denise's comment: Riswana uses good vocabulary and there are very few grammatical mistakes. The start of her composition makes me want to continue reading as it was very interesting and full of content.

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Question 4 Describe someone who means a lot to you .

This person knows my everything. She is a person whom I know well too. She is my best friend that I would love forever. Her name is Shi Hui. Shi Hui cares about me and is willing to lend a listening ear to me whenever I have trouble in my thoughts.

Shi Hui is a mysterious, kind hearted and pitiful person because …

Shi Hui is mysterious. She would hang out with me every break time, school end time and her holiday break. But there is sometimes when she acts mysteriously. She would suddenly disappear and appear again. I would always be bewildered by her actions. It is kind of scary when she does that. And what is more frightening is that when I asked her where she have gone, she would just smile it off.

Shi Hui is also very kind hearted. She would often volunteer to help her schoolmates as well as others outside school especially the elderly. She could not bear others begging her for help even though she knows that it is inappropriate but I would be there to stop her. Or seeing others in trouble and might possibly needed her help, she is more than willing to go forward and help them.

Shi Hui is also very pitiful. She had a lot of things that she is afraid of but she covers it deep in her heart not wanting to expose it. I would often help her with the situation. Thus she is very close to me and would tell me about her issues and i would try my very best to help her.

She is a very important friend of mine. Without her I would not be able to carry on. With her by my side I feel safe and secure, she would not leave me alone and I hope she will never be. I cherish her a lot and could not afford to lose our precious friendship. I hope that we could handle this friendship with care.

Danica's comments:Shani describes a lot about her friend who is pecious to her.Letting the reader or marker to understand more about her friend characteristics. I feel tgat she can explain about one expreienced

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Topic:4                                                                                                                           Caring about me, bringing me to wherever I want, and buying the things I asked for, was all fulfilled my beloved  father, showering me with unconditional love.my father had always brought me and my family to places of attraction to enjoy ourselves. I had always wanted to say a word of gratefulness to my father for whatever he had done.
Firstly,my father is disciplined,whenever he is doing company work,he always have a time limit and when the time is up,he will pack up and go.thus,i feel that he is self disciplined.
Secondly,he is very patient.whenever my sister hit my father or throw her phone on the floor.my father does not start hitting her,instead he patiently told her whats wrong.he also does not scold me if i did not score well in exam,he will encourge me to do better the next time round.
Lastly,my father is  conscientious towards work and home afffairs.for example,if he was chided by his boss and he is very angry,he does not vent the anger at home,instead he is a totally different person at home,making it as if nothing had happened in the office
In at nutshell,he is a just a wonderful dad i have and i feel so proud he is my dad,no other dad in the world can replace him........

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Q3: Describe a time when you meet someone new

In life sometimes, you will meet people who can influence oneself deeply. It could be a teacher or a friend or someone who means a lot to you. My close friend, Clara was someone who I enjoyed spending lots of time with.

We had been friends for 7 years and counting. She was someone who I was not close to during the first few months but during the next half of the year, my teacher shifted my seat and I was placed next to her. Slowly we got to know each other better.

During P3, I made some really close friends. They were humorous and would even celebrate our birthdays together by surprising each other with cakes and surprises. Even though, I was from a different class from the rest of them, I felt very blessed to be able to meet them.
After 3 years, it was time we took our PSLE. All of us were so nervous especially when we were about to take our PSLE results as we were hoping that we would go to the same school, but sadly our PSLE  results were so differrent that we could not afford to go to the same school. Some of them went to Commonwealth, while the others Nan Hua, Hua Yi and Unity secondary
Even though there were times where we fought, we felt that our friendship grew closer thru the fights that we had oveercome. They mean the world to me and became a big part of my primary school life.

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Q4) Describe someone who means a lot to you

She is somebody who meant a lot to me , she helped me through all the difficulties and struggles. The start of secondary school was stressful for almost all of us but just because of her I never give up on my studies.

Her name was Jamie. Weeks past and we were closer friends. I was struggling along this journey but Jamie would not stop helping me along the way. She was everything to me. Exams are around the corner and it was much more difficult for me to go through this period of time.

We studied together from day to night in order to achieve good results. Finally , the moment has arrived . It was time to show our efforts we have done before the exams.

Everyone walked into the examination room . My heart was pumping very quickly, hoping to do well for this examination. The examination paper is finally placed on my table, I picked up the pen , reading through every word of the question carefully. One hour past, I was about to complete the paper , I was even more nervous , thinking of failing the first examination in secondary school.

Examination period past day by day , it was finally over , freedom was near. 15 minutes left and all would be over .  “Please stop writing.”  The invigilator shouted.  ��������UnsV�

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Describe about a time when you felt scared

I was scared , i could not believe it,after so many decades they chose to demolish it now.It was my grandmothers house in malacca.I have a lot of memories stored in that house since young.my family and i go there at least once per month.when my father told about it i and my sister were scared,angry and worried.
My grandfather who was born in malacca build the kampung
house under a temples land which is less than half a kilmetre away.It was where all my fathers siblings and thier family gather during any festival and the owners of the land were about to sell the land which means we would bot have the house anymore.I and my sister strongly disagreed to it.my Sister asked my father if we could buy the land.my father laughed saying that it was impossible.i tried to think for days on how to save the house,as days went past i became more and more worried and most of all scared.

I finally came with an idea of asking my father to ask him to ask one of a buisness millionaire if he wanted to buy the land.At first i thought that it would not be possible buying the land would not give anything in return to him and did not suggested that idea to my father and started to listen emotional songs.There was only one week before the land was about to be given to the new owner my whole family was depressed.I thought,why not suggesting my idea to them.The reaction which came next was unexpected,there was a smile on all of their faces.

My father called the millionaire and told about the problem.There was a long pause i became very scared that it was the first time my family saw me being so scared.I started to imagine the house being surrounded by bulldozers and the house being demolished."i will help you",I heard a voice from the phone.I slowly made my scared look into a wide smile.
The next day we met him in malacca   he told the owners tha he was willing to pay twice the price of the land value.The owners thought for a while which made me think of the bulldozers again.Suprisingly the owners agreed.The millionaire told that he will run the temple which made the owners happy too and the problem ended off hapily
That day when i was sleeping,i thought about two things which was never to give away anything which was very closely related to the family and that never to be scared.

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“Phew” I would never  try to  go home by myself after that  lesson learnt.   Luckily, the police arrived on time if not  the consequences would be worse.I did not  regret taking the risk to call the police instead of my parents to pay the ransom.The two person have been caught  if not more harm could be done.

I would not let the kidnapper and his accomplice  earn money from my parents.Money was their hard-earned  money.It was Uncle Jim and Uncle John, the employees of  my  father 's company.

“RING,RING,RING……” the alarm set by my teacher has just rung.           It was just another day  after a tiring day . I trudged my way home but I met my friend,Jane which was also my neighbour.It was a late night  because  our supplementary ended at 6pm.

I wanted to reach home earlier to take a refreshing shower so I decided to walk through the small alley for the first time.I can sense  someone following me so I decided to quicken my pace. Suddenly,I lost consciousness.

I regained consciousness and found myself in a dilapidated house.Where am I at?This was not a place familiar …….I looked around and found out that my hands were tied up.Two familiar people walked to me and asked me to call my parents to ask them to give them ransom before   releasing me.They  cut off my ropes.

However I called the police and told them to help me as I was kidnapped.Slap!Convulsive sobs racked my body and a floodgate of tears was released.They was trying to pack their bags and escape before the police tracked me down.I kept shouting for help  so that they cannot escape and justice would be served.

Just  as they were about to leave ,sirens reverberated through the air and a smile flickered across my face as I knew that help has finally arrrived.The clicking of the handcuffs was like music to my ears.Finally , I remembered ,they are the employees of my father's company.

Justice has been served.I was terrified after that incident.From that day onwards,I would always ask my parents to fetch me home after my supplementary lesson at school.

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Question 4: Describe someone who means a lot to you.

This person is the one whom I cherish the most. She is my true friend. Even though she is in a different secondary school, we would still contact each other once in a while. She was there for me  through thick and thin. But, things will never be the same again.

Her name is Rachel. She is a vivacious, helpful and a sociable person. We used to have a clique with most of the girls in the class. We always and never fail to hang out during recess. As we were prefects, we had to do duties and we always do it together. She was humble, and would never boast about her grades.

Since our Primary School Leaving Examination was coming soon, she was the one who helped me buck up my studies. She was a very industrious person too. She also helps people when they were in trouble. She would guide me through my homework and any questions I would have. There was one incident which I never be able to forget. I remembered vividly that we were getting our Science Prelim paper.

When I received mine I looked at my paper. I did so awfully! I was on a verge of  tears as I stared at the piece of paper. At the end of the lesson, I could not hold my tears any longer. I started sobbing. Rachel was the one who was by my side, listening to every problem I had. She would try to comfort me whenever I am down. I remembered, she tried to make jokes and I felt better. She

We are now in different schools but distance can never let our friendship down. Our aggregates were far off and she decided to enter a school that would suit her the most.  Every school holiday, we would plan to meet each other. She definitely one of people whom have impacted on my life in primary school. She is the person that means the whole world to me.

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Qns1)Describe a time that I felt scared
I may look tough, but actually im scared of the dark. Everytime when im burning the midnight oil, I will tell myself to be brave, just to prevent myself from bring scared.

I was playing my computer game on my laptop until late at night and I forgotten about the time. Tomorrow’s Sunday, and I was allowed to play until late at night. I played until about 3pm. I felt tired, and I went to the Kitchen to take a sip of water before I go to bed. When I finished drinking, I saw a dark shadow as I did not on the light. My face was as pale as a piece of paper and i freaked out.

The shadow suddenly spoke, and it sounded very familiar, it sounded like my mother and she had woken up to take a drink of water too. I had thought that she was something scary, spooky and eerie. She told me to sleep early and rest well.I kept telling her that i will sleep at 3.30am. She said" You better sleep early! If not i will bann you from playing for a month!

I promised her that I will sleep earlier so that tomorrow I will have more energy. I told myself not to make a big deal out of nothing. I will have to learn to be brave and courageous. And that, i went into my room and fell asleep as soon as i lay down on my bed.

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Question 1: Write about a time where you feel scared

Are you scared of the dark, well I am. Whenever I enter a dark place without someone accompanying, I will be trembling with fear. At first I was not scared of the dark, but this is how it made me scared.

It was a Sunday night my parent were going on a wedding dinner and they left me to take care of my crazy brother. The lights in my house was off as I watched the television. I was so interested in watching the television that I did not bother about him.

Suddenly something touch my neck, but when I turn around to see what had touched my neck. But when I turn around, nothing was behind me. A chill went down my spine. I was trembling with fear. As the house was dark I cannot see my surroundings, so I went around my house searching for my torchlight.                                                                                       When I pulled open my drawer, I placed my hand in there and immediately pulled out my torchlight. When I turned on my torchlight, I see a pale looking face staring at me. I jumped in fear. My brother was laughing at me being so scared of him. I was shivering with fear and he still dare to laugh at me. I went around the house together with my brother to on the lights.

From that day onwards, I did not dare to go in the dark.

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Describe someone who means a lot you.

//  ' Boy ah!'  This was the phrase that only one person in my life would address me by. And that is my dearest Grandmother. With her curly brown hair and wrinkled smile , she is my pillar of strength and support. Giving me the unfailing care and concern that I sometimes don’t deserve with my unreasonable tantrum outbreaks. Every morning without fail, she would wake up early in the morning just to make me breakfast and to wake me up. She knew my every emotion , when I was happy when I was feeling down in the dumps.

// When I was ill she would have plenty of late nights and early mornings just to care for me. When I had fevers she would change the cold towel on my forehead hourly. If I had a flu she would bring me a small pail so I could vomit.And just like most grandmothers , she can cook , really really well. When I return home from school , the house would be filled wonderful aromas that would cause me to salivate from just thinking of the lavish meal that awaited me.

\\ But recently her health has been going downhill from blood pressure to kidney issues. And now it is my duty to care for her , to keep my tantrums to myself and to keep her stress and troubles to a minimum. i hope I can take care of her to the best of my ability and repay her for everything she has done for me. I have decided to study hard so that I would have the money on standby to fund her medical needs in future if necessary.

//  I just hope that she would be able to stay strong so that I can continue to be encouraged by her smile and return home to that aroma I was so accustomed to.

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Question 3: Describe a time when you met someone new.

I have met a lot of friends in my previous school, I cannot imagine my life without them. However, when I was transferred to a new school, I met a new friend that is very caring and thoughtful. She would always cheer me up when I am feeling low and tells me to stay positive. My best friend, Alice, will always be in the first place in my heart. The first day I met her started like this...

From a freezing night, it turned to a scorching day as the sun climbed towards its zenith. The rays of the sun were falling on my eyes as I woke up. It was the start of a new school and I could hear my heart throbbing loudly as I was very eager to go to a new environment where I can meet more friends. I instantly got ready for school and made my way to the bus stop. When I stepped into the classroom, everyone were busily chattering with one another and they did not even notice me. The teacher hollered and the classroom was so quiet that I could hear a pin drop. Suddenly, everyone looked in the direction where I was standing. My hands started to feel clammy as I swallowed down a gulp and did not dare to look at them.

Soon the teacher introduced me to the class and appointed me to sit with a reserved girl at the back of the class. The girl's name is Alice. She is tall and skinny with straight brown hair and deep chestnut brown eyes. During the mathematics period, I was struggling with some math questions and was unable to solve it. Alice turned towards me and taught me to do the challenging questions. During recess, I dashed towards her and thanked her for helping me with the math questions. She looked at me and gave me a warm smile and gave a pat on my shoulder. After a month, we get along with each other and soon became best friends.

She is the first friend that I have met in this school. Even though she is timid and shy, she talks to me during recess and we even went out together to play. I am glad to have met such a helpful and thoughtful friend. I hope to enjoy the rest of the primary school years with Alice.

Tian Pok:
I have met a lot of friends in my previous school, I cannot imagine my life without them. However, when I was transferred to a new school, I met a new friend that is very caring and thoughtful. She would always cheer me up when I am feeling low and tells me to stay positive. My best friend, Alice, will always be in the first place in my heart. The first day I met her started like this...

From a freezing night, it turned to a scorching day as the sun climbed towards its zenith. The rays of the sun were falling on my eyes as I woke up. It was the start of a new school and I could hear my heart throbbing loudly as I was very eager to go to a new environment where I can meet more friends. I instantly got ready for school and made my way to the bus stop. When I stepped into the classroom, everyone were busily chattering with one another and they did not even notice me. The teacher hollered and the classroom was so quiet that I could hear a pin drop. Suddenly, everyone looked in the direction where I was standing. My hands started to feel clammy as I swallowed down a gulp and did not dare to look at them.

Soon the teacher introduced me to the class and appointed me to sit with a reserved girl at the back of the class. The girl's name is Alice. She is tall and skinny with straight brown hair and deep chestnut brown eyes. During the mathematics period, I was struggling with some math questions and was unable to solve it. Alice turned towards me and taught me to do the challenging questions. During recess, I dashed towards her and thanked her for helping me with the math questions. She looked at me and gave me a warm smile and gave a pat on my shoulder. After a month, we get along with each other and soon became best friends.

She is the first friend that I have met in this school. Even though she is timid and shy, she talks to me during recess and we even went out together to play. I am glad to have met such a helpful and thoughtful friend. I hope to enjoy the rest of the primary school years with Alice.
Wan Yu 's  comment for Wan Qi:Interesting.It made me more curious about what is going to happen next.I like your starting paragraph.This is detailed and  I like the description  of your friend.

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1)    Describe a time when you felt scared

This incident happened three years ago but I can still recall it vividly.

That day, I finished my work and had nothing else to do. I decided to sort out my disorganized book shelf. While I was sorting out my book shelf, I accidentally knocked onto it and a thick book dropped off. It was a diary that I had written three years ago. When I started reading the diary entry, memories of the past flowed into my mind instantly.

It was the last exam of the primary school leaving examinations. When I walked into school, everyone looked elated as we could finally celebrate the end of the examinations.

I made my way to class and saw everyone seated. I went to my seat and the invigilator walked in with the stack of examination scripts. Not long after the invigilator gave out the examination scripts, everyone started scribbling answers on it after the invigilator told us to start on the paper. After one and a half hours, the paper finally ended. Everyone walked out of class in high spirits. I found the paper quite hard and I was saddened as I was afraid that I would not pass it. My friends asked me to join them for lunch at the nearby shopping mall to celebrate the end of the exams but I did not want to as I was not in the mood to celebrate. I made a decision to go home as I wanted to rest and forget about how I did for the examinations.

When I reached the lift lobby of my apartment, I waited patiently for the lift to arrive. When the lift arrived, I entered it and pressed the button of the level of my apartment. Out of the blue, the lift jerked and stopped at the fourth level. I did not know what was happening and did not know what to do. I realised that the lift has broken down. I pressed the emergency button as that was the only thing that came to my mind. I had never been so petrified before.

After waiting for fifteen minutes, a middle aged lady came to the lift and knocked on the lift’s door and asked for my response.  I shouted to the lady and she told me not to be afraid as she was here to help me get out of the lift that is broken down. She seems like the person who fixes the lifts when it is broken down. I heaved a sigh of relieve as I would not be trapped in this lift in a while.

After ten minutes of so, I was finally out of the lift. I was extremely grateful and thanked the lady profusely as if she did not come to my rescue, I would not be able to get out of it.

That day was an unforgettable day that I would never forget in my life.

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Question 1: Describe a time when you felt scared

There was once I felt so scared, that only once that I felt so petrified about collecting my results from my fierce form teacher. That was my graduation year from primary school. That day all the primary six students and parents came to school for a very important occasion for us .We are collecting our PSLE results. Before stepping into my school, I took a deep breath, feeling nervous .I grab my phone and stuff it into my sling bag .We gathered at the hall for a speech given by the principal. The students in my primary school from the first two class did quite well for their Primary school leaving examination .While my class as the third class did not do well for the examination.

After the speech my principal our form teachers lead us to our class room to collect our result slip. When my teacher first talk she spoke about being very disappointed with our results .We collected our results in index number. When the first few collected their results most cried, I am so terrified that I would not reach my expectation. The next would be me , before holding on to my results slip I looked at my teachers face which was very unhappy. I thought that I did not reach my expectation .When I look at my classmates I saw some crying and some encouraging those who are crying .I thought that I would end up like them crying. I am stood rooted to the ground, when I came back to my senses, I took a quick peek on my results slip. My results was  over my expectations. I am so happy that I wanted to jump to the sky . But however I saw my classmates being so sad I did not dare to smile in front of them . But this was a time that I felt really scared.

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Question1: Describe a time where you felt scared.

//“I will kill you! You can run but you can never run away from me!” The terrifying creature suddenly appeared on the screen, searching everywhere for the little boy wanting to kill him .His face was all bloody and his eyes were filled with hatred, determined to kill the innocent boy.

//Chill run down my spine, my face as pale as sheet and using my hands to close my eyes, not wanting to see what happens next .My father brought me to the movie theater one night .I was all ready and excited to watch a movie with him as I had never watched movie late at night before .Not knowing that he was going to watch a horror movie, I went in the theater with him. I was terrified when the creature appeared for the first time in the movie. The creature face was disfigured, bloody, and ugly and horrifying. I wanted so badly to go home; I pleaded my father to bring me home. However, he refused to as the movie had started and it will be a waste of money if we left the theater. I forced myself to complete watching the movie. Surprisingly I endured through the process of watching the horrifying movie with dad.

//That night, when we returned home, I was not able to sleep at all. My father was worn out after bringing me to watch movie at late night and immediately jump onto his bed and in deep sleep. Everyone was already sleeping peacefully except me. I was troubled by the horrifying movie .I was unable to sleep at all. I tried but end up tossing and turning on my bed. I then decided to sit up and just wait for the next morning to arrive. I was also as tired as father but afraid to go to sleep as I do not want the creature to visit me in my dreams and give me nightmare .I huddled myself together and stared apprehensively into the darkness .I felt a wave of fear rush through me, frightening thoughts race through my mind, “Does the creature really exists? Is he hiding somewhere trying to kill my family? Perhaps hiding under my bed?”

//I was extremely scared that whole night; I was busy looking around in search of him. Even though it had been a few hours since the movie had ended, I could still remember the creature.

//Few hours passed. My eyelids were starting to become heavier, like tons of block hung onto i.e. looked up at the clock and my barely eyes read 4.30 a.m. I had not slept the whole night, determined to stay away till the next morning. The next morning when my family members woke up, they were all wondering what had happened to emit was obvious that I had not sleep through the whole night as I had “pandas’eyes’’on me .That incident has a huge impact on my face. I hated all horror movies and whenever I watched any of them history will repeat itself, I will stay awake the whole night again .This was indeed a time when I felt extremely scared.

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/kj,wefqdAttached is a word document you need to open, read and reflect on as you start planning to write your essay.

Please attach your draft at the end of the lesson to this website, with your name as the title.

You are advised to write 350 – 500 words on one of the following topics.

At the head of your composition, write the number of the topic you have chosen.

1. Describe a time that you felt scared.

2. Describe an outdoor place that you know well.

3. Describe a time when you met someone new.

4. Describe someone who means a lot to you.